JeisonKen
Legendary Pokemon Hunter
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- Seen Dec 9, 2011
Here I come.
I worked my hardest and sorta wrote what came to mind, but here is the (incredibly short) Prologue and Chapter 1 of Pokemon Hunter. Tell me how you like it? I'm pretty sure this'll have to go into the DREADED REVISION BIN. Lol. Anyway, here we go. THIS IS RATED PG-13 for some langauge.
[FONT="]The Pokémon world is vast, as most people probably already know. And everyone had a part in the balance of the Pokémon World. [/FONT]
[FONT="]About six years ago, a new Pokemon League Champion was inducted in Kanto. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Two years afterward, a new region was established. Citizens from Kanto and Johto were chosen to move to this new region. I was one of those people. It was me and my parents. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Then I met her…[/FONT]
[FONT="]It seems like it was only yesterday…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I remember it as if it was.[/FONT]
[FONT="]CHAPTER 1: Regrets[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Up and at 'em, Hunter."[/FONT]
[FONT="]I remember when I first got into this whole thing…mess or otherwise. When I was 13, someone came to my doorstep. He was dressed in a black coat along with a bandana covering his head, and I could see blue hair sticking out of the wrap. I asked politely, "What do you want?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]He chuckled, and I just stood there in my boxers wondering, "Who the hell do you think you are?" He finally spoke. His voice was awfully deep, and I wasn't sure whether or not he was actually speaking or just muttering under his breath.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I have come to your household for an audience. May I come in?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]I had nothing better to do, so I let him in. We talked about matters involving Pokémon. I was not comfortable with the conversation because of what happened a couple years ago…But that's all history now. [/FONT]
[FONT="]He then asked me what I thought of Pokémon. I said, "I have no comment." I became impatient. I was becoming angry from his questions. And for what purpose was he asking me these questions? "Excuse me, sir; I think it's time for you to leave." The man calmly pleaded to let him have more of my time, but I was finished with him. "Get out. Now." I pushed him out of my house and he stood there for a minute or two. He finally left. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"What a weirdo."[/FONT]
[FONT="]Well, since he killed a good hour of my day, I decided to visit Aria before it was too late in the day to see her…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Aria…[/FONT]
[FONT="]She was probably the only thing keeping me alive. I have no place in a world like this. Everyone's got their own thing going…But I have nothing. It makes me sick. So sick. I just wish it would end. However, whenever I see Aria, I am invigorated by her very presence. But I felt too young to start something more with her. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I walked outside, hands in my pants pockets and got on my motorcycle. Seems weird for a 13-year old to be riding a motorcycle, right? True, but the Takyu region was only established a few years ago, so not all the laws are in effect and really, the police force in this region were a bunch of lazy bastards anyways. I could care much less.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Westport[/FONT][FONT="] City[/FONT][FONT="] was my hometown, and one of the first established when the Takyu region was first discovered three years ago. It was incredibly peaceful and friendly. I tend to suffocate on its innocence. Aria's house was down the road. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Pokémon…I always considered them a nuisance and a burden to everyday society. I felt sorry for the people that actually used Pokemon for whatever sick reason they did. Those things should have been left alone from the start. I can't even bear to stomach the fact that they fit into our lives…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Fine. They can frolic with those things; I'll stay human.[/FONT]
[FONT="]And there was Aria's house. It was small, but after her parents died, it was big enough for just her. Like I said, the Takyu region is still trying to be stabilized as I speak so no foster homes or whatnot. That was perfectly fine with me. If foster homes were set up, I wouldn't be able to see her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I've known Aria for about 4 years now. I met her when the first citizens were transferring from their respective regions to the Takyu region. We chatted and spoke, and we promised we'd see each other again. Fate just had it that'd we be practically next to each other.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I knocked on her door and she answered immediately like she had Future Sight. She welcomed me in and I sat down.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"So, what's new?" I said to her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Nothing...that's the problem." She said with moderate discomfort.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Why would you want anything to happen? I like it this way." I said with pride. [/FONT]
[FONT="]And it was true. I could care less about what happened to this world, as long as it doesn't involve me. [/FONT]
[FONT="]
"C'mon…it's been too boring around here. You'd think that with this new region, there'd be something cool to do around here?" She looked at me longingly. She gave me this look whenever I didn't agree with her. And normally it would work. But this time, no. I was strict on my opinion.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"No. I like it the way it is." Aria looked at me even more longingly. I wouldn't give in. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"No."[/FONT]
[FONT="]She kept looking at me. I couldn't stand it. I was about to punch something. I….I...I couldn't….[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I couldn't control my anger."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Is that so, Hunter? Tell me more."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Sure."[/FONT]
[FONT="]That day, my relationship with Aria changed. Of course, anyone with a brain in their head would probably know that if they had witnessed what I had done. [/FONT]
[FONT="]My rage took me over. I yelled at her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"NO, I DON'T WANT CHANGE! I COULD CARE LESS ABOUT CHANGE!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENS TO THIS REGION, THE WORLD, OR YOU!"[/FONT]
[FONT="]I stormed out and…that was it. I had completely dumbstruck Aria…and I think I broke her heart. I haven't seen her since that day. Every time I think of her and what happened…my heart aches with incredible pain.[/FONT]
[FONT="]If I had a heart. I have no heart. Nobody with a heart would have done that. I thought of myself as a monster. I didn't fit into this world at all and now I had become an unapproachable entity. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"So, how did you become a Hunter?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Hmph…I was 'chosen' normally, like all Hunters are."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I see. That's very interesting. And yet you're one of the Elite Hunters?[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Yeah…I prefer not to talk about how I actually 'became' a Hunter…"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Please. Tell me."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Whatever."[/FONT]
[FONT="]I went home faster than the time it would take for me to make up a corny metaphor. I couldn't believe what I had done. I had broken her heart…and I think I broke my own. I wanted to go apologize to her but every time I tried to call her on my PokeGear, I couldn't press the CALL button. Something prevented me from pressing it. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I laid down for about an hour just thinking of what had happened…what I had done. Finally, I went to sleep sometime after that. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I slept well, which was awfully weird, because I never got any sleep at all. Sometimes, I would just stay up, looking up at my house's ceiling. But not that night. I woke up around noon and of course the first thing on my mind was Aria. I picked up my PokeGear. It was one of the newer models, created about a year ago. I sent Aria a text message that I was coming over. I waited about a half an hour, but no answer. I decided to just go over. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I rushed and nearly fell over as I got on my motorcycle and drove east, toward Aria's house. As I drove, I rose up on 90 MPH. I was determined to see Aria, to tell her that I---Well…that didn't happen.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Nothing happened as I planned. It all fell into little pieces.[/FONT]
[FONT="]As I reached 100 MPH, it happened.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I saw it up ahead. A man took out one of those Poke Balls and sent out a Pokemon. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"Probably some training", I thought.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I was horribly wrong.[/FONT]
[FONT="]The Pokemon that was released from the Poke Ball ran up to my motorcycle and punched it square in the front, sending me flying right onto the pavement. My sight was growing dim and I was bleeding from my head…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I think…I went out cold.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"You were given the usual Pain Inclusion test, huh?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Right. They brought me to a secret underground location and told me that I would be forced to become a Hunter."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"So why did they think you were chosen?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"They told me that 'past experiences' were their source of information on me."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"What had happened in the past."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I prefer not to talk about it."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I see."[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now you know my story. As soon as they forced me to join their ranks, I was put through rigorous training. The first test was surviving against wild and untamed Pokemon…without any Pokemon to aid the Hunter. Many rookies died. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Unfortunately, I didn't.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I rose into the ranks without even knowing it until I was no longer a rookie, but now an Expert Hunter. I was introduced to my commanding officer. I recognized him immediately as the man who came to my door that day. He had the same look too, except his blue hair struck out of his head wrap more than it did when I last saw him. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"Well, well. I didn't expect I'd see you again."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Fate is mysterious."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I really didn't expect you to become an Expert Hunter, either. Only the best of the best can become one. You must be really talented."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I don't accept flattery."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Whatever. Name's Zenos. You're with me now, so show some respect."[/FONT]
[FONT="]And I did. I had to. The Hunter business was tricky. What is a Pokemon Hunter?[/FONT]
[FONT="]Zenos treated me with respect in return, so I was a bit thankful. I had apparently become a powerful force. We performed Hunter Missions together. We were considered an inseparable team. I liked the idea…and yet I loathed it. I was working for this organization that kidnapped me, erased my life and took away all I had to live for…[/FONT]
[FONT="]And that was Aria.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I missed her ever so much when I became a Hunter. Everyday I thought of her and how we always were together…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now, things were different.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now, I guess I had to live without her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I was a Pokemon Hunter.
-----------------------------------
[/FONT][FONT="]This introduces the three main characters to the story.
The Main Character - he has yet to have a name right now. He is also the Narrator of the story.
Aria - Main Character's best friend, they have a close relationship, but not romantic as of the moment.
Zenos - An expert Hunter, who serves as the main character's Hunter Commander in the ranks. His history will be revealed later on.
[/FONT]
I worked my hardest and sorta wrote what came to mind, but here is the (incredibly short) Prologue and Chapter 1 of Pokemon Hunter. Tell me how you like it? I'm pretty sure this'll have to go into the DREADED REVISION BIN. Lol. Anyway, here we go. THIS IS RATED PG-13 for some langauge.
[FONT="]The Pokémon world is vast, as most people probably already know. And everyone had a part in the balance of the Pokémon World. [/FONT]
[FONT="]About six years ago, a new Pokemon League Champion was inducted in Kanto. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Two years afterward, a new region was established. Citizens from Kanto and Johto were chosen to move to this new region. I was one of those people. It was me and my parents. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Then I met her…[/FONT]
[FONT="]It seems like it was only yesterday…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I remember it as if it was.[/FONT]
[FONT="]CHAPTER 1: Regrets[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Up and at 'em, Hunter."[/FONT]
[FONT="]I remember when I first got into this whole thing…mess or otherwise. When I was 13, someone came to my doorstep. He was dressed in a black coat along with a bandana covering his head, and I could see blue hair sticking out of the wrap. I asked politely, "What do you want?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]He chuckled, and I just stood there in my boxers wondering, "Who the hell do you think you are?" He finally spoke. His voice was awfully deep, and I wasn't sure whether or not he was actually speaking or just muttering under his breath.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I have come to your household for an audience. May I come in?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]I had nothing better to do, so I let him in. We talked about matters involving Pokémon. I was not comfortable with the conversation because of what happened a couple years ago…But that's all history now. [/FONT]
[FONT="]He then asked me what I thought of Pokémon. I said, "I have no comment." I became impatient. I was becoming angry from his questions. And for what purpose was he asking me these questions? "Excuse me, sir; I think it's time for you to leave." The man calmly pleaded to let him have more of my time, but I was finished with him. "Get out. Now." I pushed him out of my house and he stood there for a minute or two. He finally left. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"What a weirdo."[/FONT]
[FONT="]Well, since he killed a good hour of my day, I decided to visit Aria before it was too late in the day to see her…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Aria…[/FONT]
[FONT="]She was probably the only thing keeping me alive. I have no place in a world like this. Everyone's got their own thing going…But I have nothing. It makes me sick. So sick. I just wish it would end. However, whenever I see Aria, I am invigorated by her very presence. But I felt too young to start something more with her. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I walked outside, hands in my pants pockets and got on my motorcycle. Seems weird for a 13-year old to be riding a motorcycle, right? True, but the Takyu region was only established a few years ago, so not all the laws are in effect and really, the police force in this region were a bunch of lazy bastards anyways. I could care much less.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Westport[/FONT][FONT="] City[/FONT][FONT="] was my hometown, and one of the first established when the Takyu region was first discovered three years ago. It was incredibly peaceful and friendly. I tend to suffocate on its innocence. Aria's house was down the road. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Pokémon…I always considered them a nuisance and a burden to everyday society. I felt sorry for the people that actually used Pokemon for whatever sick reason they did. Those things should have been left alone from the start. I can't even bear to stomach the fact that they fit into our lives…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Fine. They can frolic with those things; I'll stay human.[/FONT]
[FONT="]And there was Aria's house. It was small, but after her parents died, it was big enough for just her. Like I said, the Takyu region is still trying to be stabilized as I speak so no foster homes or whatnot. That was perfectly fine with me. If foster homes were set up, I wouldn't be able to see her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I've known Aria for about 4 years now. I met her when the first citizens were transferring from their respective regions to the Takyu region. We chatted and spoke, and we promised we'd see each other again. Fate just had it that'd we be practically next to each other.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I knocked on her door and she answered immediately like she had Future Sight. She welcomed me in and I sat down.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"So, what's new?" I said to her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Nothing...that's the problem." She said with moderate discomfort.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Why would you want anything to happen? I like it this way." I said with pride. [/FONT]
[FONT="]And it was true. I could care less about what happened to this world, as long as it doesn't involve me. [/FONT]
[FONT="]
"C'mon…it's been too boring around here. You'd think that with this new region, there'd be something cool to do around here?" She looked at me longingly. She gave me this look whenever I didn't agree with her. And normally it would work. But this time, no. I was strict on my opinion.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"No. I like it the way it is." Aria looked at me even more longingly. I wouldn't give in. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"No."[/FONT]
[FONT="]She kept looking at me. I couldn't stand it. I was about to punch something. I….I...I couldn't….[/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Is that so, Hunter? Tell me more."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Sure."[/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]My rage took me over. I yelled at her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"NO, I DON'T WANT CHANGE! I COULD CARE LESS ABOUT CHANGE!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENS TO THIS REGION, THE WORLD, OR YOU!"[/FONT]
[FONT="]I stormed out and…that was it. I had completely dumbstruck Aria…and I think I broke her heart. I haven't seen her since that day. Every time I think of her and what happened…my heart aches with incredible pain.[/FONT]
[FONT="]If I had a heart. I have no heart. Nobody with a heart would have done that. I thought of myself as a monster. I didn't fit into this world at all and now I had become an unapproachable entity. [/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Hmph…I was 'chosen' normally, like all Hunters are."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I see. That's very interesting. And yet you're one of the Elite Hunters?[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Yeah…I prefer not to talk about how I actually 'became' a Hunter…"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Please. Tell me."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Whatever."[/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]I laid down for about an hour just thinking of what had happened…what I had done. Finally, I went to sleep sometime after that. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I slept well, which was awfully weird, because I never got any sleep at all. Sometimes, I would just stay up, looking up at my house's ceiling. But not that night. I woke up around noon and of course the first thing on my mind was Aria. I picked up my PokeGear. It was one of the newer models, created about a year ago. I sent Aria a text message that I was coming over. I waited about a half an hour, but no answer. I decided to just go over. [/FONT]
[FONT="]I rushed and nearly fell over as I got on my motorcycle and drove east, toward Aria's house. As I drove, I rose up on 90 MPH. I was determined to see Aria, to tell her that I---Well…that didn't happen.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Nothing happened as I planned. It all fell into little pieces.[/FONT]
[FONT="]As I reached 100 MPH, it happened.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I saw it up ahead. A man took out one of those Poke Balls and sent out a Pokemon. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"Probably some training", I thought.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I was horribly wrong.[/FONT]
[FONT="]The Pokemon that was released from the Poke Ball ran up to my motorcycle and punched it square in the front, sending me flying right onto the pavement. My sight was growing dim and I was bleeding from my head…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I think…I went out cold.[/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Right. They brought me to a secret underground location and told me that I would be forced to become a Hunter."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"So why did they think you were chosen?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"They told me that 'past experiences' were their source of information on me."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"What had happened in the past."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I prefer not to talk about it."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I see."[/FONT]
[FONT="]* * *[/FONT]
[FONT="]Unfortunately, I didn't.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I rose into the ranks without even knowing it until I was no longer a rookie, but now an Expert Hunter. I was introduced to my commanding officer. I recognized him immediately as the man who came to my door that day. He had the same look too, except his blue hair struck out of his head wrap more than it did when I last saw him. [/FONT]
[FONT="]"Well, well. I didn't expect I'd see you again."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Fate is mysterious."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I really didn't expect you to become an Expert Hunter, either. Only the best of the best can become one. You must be really talented."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"I don't accept flattery."[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Whatever. Name's Zenos. You're with me now, so show some respect."[/FONT]
[FONT="]And I did. I had to. The Hunter business was tricky. What is a Pokemon Hunter?[/FONT]
[FONT="]Zenos treated me with respect in return, so I was a bit thankful. I had apparently become a powerful force. We performed Hunter Missions together. We were considered an inseparable team. I liked the idea…and yet I loathed it. I was working for this organization that kidnapped me, erased my life and took away all I had to live for…[/FONT]
[FONT="]And that was Aria.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I missed her ever so much when I became a Hunter. Everyday I thought of her and how we always were together…[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now, things were different.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now, I guess I had to live without her.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Now…[/FONT]
[FONT="]I was a Pokemon Hunter.
-----------------------------------
[/FONT][FONT="]This introduces the three main characters to the story.
The Main Character - he has yet to have a name right now. He is also the Narrator of the story.
Aria - Main Character's best friend, they have a close relationship, but not romantic as of the moment.
Zenos - An expert Hunter, who serves as the main character's Hunter Commander in the ranks. His history will be revealed later on.
[/FONT]
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