Pokemon: Inner Spirit OOC

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Hey warden, I have a question. I understand that we have to make our chapter 2 post similar to yours, so does that mean it has to be that water gate for everyone

it doesn't really matter to me I just want to know
 
JJMcay~ I think it is fine, seeing as I wouldn't want to be a blob either. Just as loing as Mew is not uber.
 
Yea... but warden already said no :( and i wasn't gonna make mew uber powerful just the extra power of maybe a psychic shield and week levitation ability's
 
I'm feeling good about my chapter 2 post
That was out of the blue, but I guess I'm just excited about it
I don't know why
 
question: is this a tropical island or a frozen one?
just want to be clear so I can adjust my chapter 2 post if necessary
 
ok thanks
btw is my chapter 2 post good?
EDIT: I'll be out of my house from the 10th to the 20th, but if I can find time I'll be on
 
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Sorry it took so long, I've been really busy the past few days so it was a little rushed. I hope its good enough. I know the history isn't as good as it could be so i will fix it up a bit if you like.



Name: Lance Coleman

Age:
16

Gender: Male

Personality:
Lance tends to keep to himself and not draw much attention. He usually tries to avoid discussions because he is most often teased or picked on for one thing or another. However, when you get Lance on his own he is an entirely different person, he becomes a confident, energetic, fun loving, carefree kid, just as you would expect any 16 year old to be. Lance also loves the out doors and being with nature, just so he can get away from all the crap he usually has to put up with.

But really, Lance just want's to fit in. When he does try to join a conversation or social activity with a large group of people, he is often rejected and made fun off bringing his self esteem down to an extreme low. Lance often changes his personality to fit in with the people around him but recently has figured out that the "Shut up, don't say anything, just sit there and listen" strategy is the most affective. Lance is also a very intelligent boy and an extremely quick thinker.

Appearance:
Lance stands at5'4" and has a slightly muscular build. Lance has blue eyes and short, spiky midnight black hair that he'll usually wear in a messy tangle. Lance loves wearing a t-shirt and jeans and is rarely found wearing anything else. Lance has a lightly tanned cream colored skin on his arms, legs and face that slowly fades to a lighter cream, almost snow white as it gets closer to his chest. Lance also has an amethyst necklace that his grandfather gave to him a few days before he passed on. On top of all this lance has a 3cm scar underneath his left eye socket, he received during a fight with a schoolyard bully.

History: From a very early age Lance had been performing tasks well beyond the normal mental capabilities of any other kid his age. Lance began to talk 8 months after birth which amazed everyone. His parents took him to a childrens psychologist when he was 3 he diagnosed the child with an extremely rare mental condition called "Cranium Spongitis (Pronounced Sponge-eye-tis)" which causes a child to rapidly lean many things beyond his mental capabilities however there is no way to tell how long the child will keep learning at such a rapid rate. The doctor recommended that he start year one in school immediately to benifit his "gift". His pearants took him to the local primary school the next day and they arranged for him to sit a test which would then be sent to the department of education to decide if he was ready to start school at such an early age.

Two weeks later the Coleman family got a letter informing them that there son could start school in the second semester and they offered Lance a scholarship at Mount Westerly High Private School where he would attend for free. Ever since he started school, Lance has been constantly teased and picked on by nearly every single kid in school. In year 5 Lance was pinned to a wall by several kids who started to beat him, violently punching him in the face and stomach, breaking his nose and cutting his eye causing the scar he has today. Jake Macintosh ran in and began to pry the attackers of Lance who now claims he saved his life. Jake invited Lance over to finish lunch with him and his friends, Kate Sullivan and Stephanie Brigham. Being much older than him, Lance didn't really understand much of the stuff they were talking about but he was just glad to finally have some friends. Being with new people that were nice to Lance, he became a new person, a more out there fun loving kid.

After finishing year 12 at the age of 15 Lance is about to go into collage (age 16) and only just found out that two of his friends, Jake and Stephanie won't be attending the same colleague.

(This is where the story starts for Lance, First day of colleague)

Powers:
Lance doesn't have a power... yet... But i do intend to give him the ability to change his appearance to others around him, copy/use the powers of people around him, a psychic shield and levitation (floating). I think the ability to change his appearance would be good because then he can change himself when ever he wants to do the one thing he has always wanted... Fit in.



Inner Pokemon

Name: Mew

Gender: Female

Species:
Mew

Personality: Mew is a bubbly, playful, kind Pokemon but also a bit of an outcast or exile. Often mistreated and forgotten by the "stronger" more "Superior" Pokemon. Although mew may not be physically as strong as other Pokemon, mew has the kind of strength that realy counts. A pure, kind, loving heart.

Appearance:
Mew is a lighter pink than your usual Mew.

Ability:

In Battle:
Synchronize When this Pokemon becomes Poisoned, Paralyzed, or Burned, so does the opponent. However, Fire-type and Water Veil ability Pokemon cannot be Burned, Poison-type and Steel-type and Immunity ability Pokemon cannot be Poisoned, and Limber ability Pokemon cannot be Paralyzed.

Out of Battle:
Mew can Fly and Protect its self with a Psychic/Mental Forcefeild/Sheild.

Starting Moves:
Pound, Transform

RP sample:
Well I've only ever been in one other RP so i hope this is good enough...
Spoiler:
 
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. . .*sniff* I miss my old RP.

lol, Just kidding.

For some reason, I really like your character. But I have three questions. . .wait, four.

1) What is Lance's favorite color?
2) What color are his clothes, usually?
3) Will Kate be attending the same college?
4) Will the protective bubbles on Mew and Lance(if I'm correct)last a while, or a short time?

Also, I think Mew is fine. ;)
 
. . .*sniff* I miss my old RP.

lol, Just kidding.

For some reason, I really like your character. But I have three questions. . .wait, four.

1) What is Lance's favorite color?
Blue
2) What color are his clothes, usually?
Black and Gold shirt (Like the one one in my siggy) with Blue jeans
3) Will Kate be attending the same college?
Yes
4) Will the protective bubbles on Mew and Lance(if I'm correct)last a while, or a short time?
Its more temporary, like in the first Pokémon movie how when mew is fighting mewtwo mew will put up a temporary psychic bubble to protect its self before initiating an attack

Also, I think Mew is fine. ;)

I hope that answers you questions and just in case your wondering your old RP still lives on in my game :)
 
Okay, good, and thank you.

However, you stated in the SU that he likes shorts, then said he wears jeans.

After that, you justneed the warden's permission!

And, I'll let the warden rate the posts first this time!
 
Cool :) so where do i start chapter one?

And oops! soz about that king! ill change that now :D
 
I can't really think of anything to wrte at the moment, so proably nothing today.

The post that I made yesterday was really bad, and I knew that when I was making it. I wasnt in my "Imaginative mode"though, as I said in OOC, so don't get mad at me because it was bad.

Anyway, I might have something up tomorrow, so stay tuned.(Even though I know that everyone here does.)
 
Um...okay? lol, IT's okay, try to add some details and you're fine!
 
Sorry, guys, I have to leave this RP. I simply do not have the time to log in often given my lack of free time soon
 
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