Pokemon-Journey Of Two Trainers

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Chapter Guide​

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Chapter I-The Graduation and The Disappointment Part I
Chapter II- The Graduation and The Disappointment Part II

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Chapter III- The Battle Between Rivals and Siblings

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Chapter III- The Battle Between Rivals and Siblings

Episodes Coming Soon
Chapter IV- Jessica Catches A Pokemon
Chapter V- Jessica's Contest Debut
Chapter VI- Hikozaru Vs Mukkuru
Chapter VII- Rival Battles 3 on 3
Chapter VIII-Arrival To Kotobuki City

Chapter I-The Graduation and The Disappointment Part I​

The bell rung, as the students of Pokemon Academy in Futaba Town in the region of Sinnoh had graduated. The students yelled as they threw their papers and grades into the air. Only two students didn't yell when the bell ran because they had no idea it rang at all. Both of them were listening to their MP3 players. The boy was listening to "Make It Rain" By Fat Joe, while the girl was listening to "But It's Better If I Do." By Panic! At The Disco. The boy had short raven black hair. He was wearing a white long sleeve shirt with a black bandana on his head, he was wearing light blue pants and red and white shoes. The girl had been wearing a skirt and a short black sleeve shirt. She was wearing pink and black shoes, and a white bandana.

"What's going on?" The boy asked, as he took one earphone out of his ear. They both looked as the nearby clock as it read 3:30.

"Schools out sis," Tyler said, as he stared at the clock. Neither of the two wanted school to end because they knew tomorrow was both their 10 birthdays and they both had to both get a Pokemon.

"Tyler, do you think if we don't want to start a journey, mom might let us stay for another year?" The girl asked.

"To tell you the truth sis I have no idea, but hopefully she's even home or else we have to feed Rentoraa, Blaziken, Sceptile, Scizor, Glalie, and Goukazaru" Tyler said, as he walked out the classroom. The two twins walked out the school doors and onto the sidewalk. The leafs fell from nearby trees on top of the two twins hats. Pokemon like Pachirisu gather nuts and berries and put them into large tree holes, while Pidgey, Mukkuru, and Wingull fly overhead.

"Jessica, if we do have to be Pokemon Trainers, what Pokemon are you going to start off with?" Tyler asked

"Brother I don't even want to talk about that." Jessica said, as she walked ahead of Tyler. The two arrived at their house. Tyler put his key into the keyhole and opened the door to see a note on the counter. He picked up the note and read it aloud.

Dear Kids,
I ran to store to picked up some food for dinner tonight. Tyler I need you to feed Blaziken, Goukazaru,Rentoraa, and Scizor since they like you a lot, and Jessica I need you to feed Sceptile and Glalie. I hope you to enjoy starting your journey tomorrow
Love, Mom
"Just great," Tyler said sarcastically as he opened the cabinet and took out six containers of Pokemon food.

"Sis, we have to feed mom's Pokemon!" Tyler yelled. Jessica came down stairs and poured two containers of Pokemon food into each dish.

"Man, I hope mom come's home soon." Tyler said. At that moment the door swung open as both children saw their mother.

"Hey, mom!" The two said. The two gave their mother hug.

"Hey, kids did you see the presents I bought you?" Their mother asked.

"No, we haven't been to our rooms yet." Jessica said.

"Well, if I were you, I would go see what gift's I got you two." Their mother said. The two walked up their stairs and into their room and saw that both of them had two presents on their beds.

"I wonder what's in the first box?" Tyler asked, as he opened the first box. He pulled off the box top and saw that inside was a black and white pokeball.

"That pokeball was your fathers," Their mother said as she walked into the room. Jessica unwrapped her first gift to reveal a pink and gray pokeball.

"That pokeball was my first, which I caught Korinku in" Their mom said. They both unwrapped their second gift to reveal a Poketech.

"I bought those while you two were at school today," Their mom said with a smile. Poketech was a watch. Tyler's was a red color. His had a dark red strap and a green screen which lit up and told him the time was 9:30. Jessica's was a light pink, a had a dark pink strap, and had a pink screen which told her the time was 9:30 as well.

"Well, kids tomorrow is both of your birthdays and you each get a starter Pokemon so enjoy the gifts and goodnight" Their mom said, as she walked into her room. The two children set their alarms to 8:30 and set their pokeball's on their night stands and fall asleep.
To Be Continued.....

 

[Yami Rui]

"Hey, mom!" The two said. The two gave their mother a hug.

and fell asleep.

Simple grammar mistakes like those are your problem, but by using a spellcheck in Microsoft Word/Microsoft Works/Openoffice you can fix those minor spelling mistakes.

Overall it looks a bit more interseting then your last fic which I presume your not working on anymore?

 

[Shino_Black_Card]

Chapter II- The Graduation and The Disappointment Part II​

The sun rose into the room of twins. The alarm clocks went off, waking both children with a start.

"Sis, we have to get dressed and get our Pokemon." Tyler said.

"Don't remind me," Jessica said. The two twins woke from their beds and put on their normal clothes. A white long sleeve shirt with a black bandana on Tyler's head, he was wearing light blue pants and red and white shoes. Jessica was wearing a skirt and a short black sleeve shirt. She was wearing pink and black shoes, and a white bandana.

"Sis, let's get the rest of our lives over with already." Tyler said, as he put his Poketech and put his black and white pokeball on his belt. The two twins walked down stairs to see their mother and both their backpacks on the table.

She kissed both of her kids on the cheek. The two put their backpacks on and walked out the door. Masago Town was where Professer Rose lived. Masago Town was a quick 10 minute walk. The two both knew what the starter Pokemon were. Pochama, Hikozaru, and Naetoru. The two arrived into Masago Town, which was small so everyone in Futaba Town knew everyone in Masago Town and vice versa.

"Sis, that building right there is the Pokemon lab." Tyler said, as he pointed to the lab. The lab was a large red and light blue dome with a few windows. The two walked into the lab to be greeted by Professer Rose.

"Hello children, your mother just called me saying you were on your way."Professer Rose said. She had light brown hair and was wearing a white shirt and a white lab.

"We had a feeling she would," Jessica stated. A young man rolls a cart of 3 Pokemon sitting upon it eating Pokemon food. The three Pokemon were Hikozaru, Naetoru, and Pochama.

"Now , before you two pick your Pokemon, let me tell you about them," Professer Rose said."Naetoru, the Turtle Pokemon, is a pretty solid choice. It has great Defense and Attack, although it is pretty slow. Fortunately, it will be able to take hits throughout the your adventures, which is a good thing. It learns Razor Leaf pretty early on, too, giving it a nice offensive attack. Later on, Naetoru will eventually evolve into Hayashigame, followed by Dodaitosu, which is Grass / Ground and capable of unleashing Earthquake.

"Hikozaru, the Monkey Pokemon, is all about doing damage It learns a wide variety of various Physical-based attacks and it has the Attack stat to use them fairly well. Although it may have difficulty with the first Gym, it will prove to be a strong fighter during the rest of your journey. When Hikozaru evolves into Moukazaru at Level 14, it will become part Fighting-type as well and will start learning Fighting-type moves to utilize its second type. Its final form, Goukazaru, is also part Fighting-type, and is also quite fast to boot.

"Pochama, the Penguin Pokemon, is, unfortunately, not that great early on your journey. It doesn't learn any strong moves until Metal Claw, which is Level 16 at it's second stage. However, its forms have good Special Attack, and its final Evolution, Enperuto, is part Metal-type, making it resistant to most any attacks." Professer Rose stated. "Now which Pokemon do you want.

Hikozaru looked up at Tyler and it's eyes started to sparkle as if he was a brand new toy. Hikozaru jumped off the cart and onto Tyler's shoulder.

"I guess I'll take Hikozaru," Tyler said, with a smile. Hikozaru was a small Pokemon. It had a swirl on it chest and was a mixture of red and beige colors. The inside of it ears were red while it's eyes were red. It appeared to be based on a young monkey, although the firey tail mirrored Charmander.

Pochama resembles a penguin chick and also looks a little bit like Torchic, and about the same size as one. Pochama has yellow feet and light-blue body. There are two white spots on its chest that seem to resemble buttons on a suit. Pochama also appears to have a blue cape. Pochama has circular, blue head with white circles around Pochama's eyes and a small, yellow beak.

Naetoru is a reptilian creature much like a tortoise. A sprout growing from its head reveals its Grass-type nature, much like Bulbasaur has a bulb growing on its back, and Chikorita has a leaf growing from its head.

"Now, Jessica what Pokemon do you want?" Professer Rose asked.

"I want Pochama," Jessica said, as she hugged Pochama. As Jessica hugged Pochama, Naetoru began to cry because nobody wanted him.

"Hey, Naetoru don't cry my so is going to love you for his Birthday next week" Professer Rose said, as she picked up the small Pokemon. Naetoru stopped crying and started to smile.

"Now, here go you 5 pokeballs and Pokedex's" Professer Rose said, as she handed the two children their items.

"Well, I hope you guys enjoy your journey as Pokemon Trainers." Professer Rose said,as the two walked out of her lab onto being Pokemon Trainers.
To Be Contiued.......

 

[Yami Rui]

was wearing a white shirt and a white lab coat.

"Hey, Naetoru don't cry my son

Overall your description of explaining about them and what they looked like was done quite well. Not much else to say though.

 

[Shino_Black_Card]

Thanks! Here's the latest Chapter!

Chapter III- The Battle Between Rivals and Siblings​

As Tyler and his sister Jessica walk a road after obtaining their starter Pokemon they here two people laughing. One of a boy and the other of a girl.

"What the heck is that noise?" Tyler asked.

"UH.. people laughing," Jessica said sarcastically. Two people,one a boy the other a girl. The boy had red spiky hair and was about the same height as Tyler. He was wearing a yellow muscle shirt, black pants with a swirl design, and pure white shoes. The girl was the same height of Jessica. She was wearing a red shirt, a light blue pair of pants, and black shoes.

"Hey, we challenge you to a double battle!" The two yelled.

"Alright, Hikozaru let's do this!" Tyler commanded. He threw his black and white pokeball into the air as his Hikozaru materialized from it.

"Go, Pochama!" Jessica commanded. She threw her pink and gray pokeball into the air as her Pochama materializes from it.

"Go, Murkrow" The boy commanded. He threw his red and white pokeball into the air as his Murkrow materialized from it. Murkrow was a small bird Pokemon with black feathers. Murkrow's feathery tail bears the resemblance of end of a broom. Murkrow has a crooked, yellow beak, a feather-crest that resembles a witch's hat and semi-circle eyes with red pupils.

"Go, Nyaruma!" The girl commanded. She threw her pokeball into the air as her Nyaruma materialized from it. Nyaruma was based off of a cat. It was gray in color, and had a very long curly tail, with a cotton swab on the end of it.

"Alright Hikozaru use an Ember on Murkrow!" Tyler commanded.

"Pochama use Bubblebeam on Nyaruma!" Jessica commanded.

"Murkrow dodge and use Wingattack!"The boy commanded.

"Nyaruma dodge as well and use Irontail on Pochama!" The girl commanded. Hikozaru jumped at Murkrow shooting small, but strong fireballs at Murkrow doing some damage only to be smacked in the face by Murkrow's wings. Nyaruma sweped it's tail under Pochama's feet with a hard Irontail, but missed and was his hard in the face by a jet stream of water. The four continued to battle until a large explosion was heard not to far from the battle seen.

"Jason, you and I both know who that was." The girl said.

"Yeah, Pearl no one other then Team Galaxy, come on!" Jason yelled. The two ran off.

"Hey, wait for us!" Tyler yelled. The other two twins followed close behind. The four ran to sound of the explosion to see to people with a bazzoka shooting nets from it at wild Pokemon.

"The boss shall be happy with us Betty," The man said.

"Yes John he shall, but it looks like we have a few visitors," Betty said. John turns his head to the side of the four.

"Go Zubat and Sneasel!" The two commanded. The two both throw two pokeballs each as two Sneasel's and two Zubat's materilized from them. Zubat resembled a small blue and purple bat, with no eyes and two probe-like appendages for legs. Owing to its name and appearance, it acts much like a bat.

Sneasel was feline in appearance, with black fur. It had two small yellow oval markings, one on its chest and another on its forehead. In lieu of a tail it has three pink leaf-shaped protrusions. Its forepaws have long, sharp claws.

"Zubat Supersonic! Sneasel Icebeam" The girl commanded.

"Murkrow use Wingattack!" Jason commanded.

"Nyaruma, use Irontail!" Pearl commaded. Murkow flew at the Zubat's smaking them both in their faces.
I have to finish this later.....

 

[Shino_Black_Card]

Chapter IV- Jessica Catches A Pokemon​

After catching Korinku, and defeating Team Galaxy grunts John and Betty, Tyler and Jessica rest up at a nearby Pokemon center, as Tyler calls his mother while Jessica sits next to him.

"So, kids what are being Pokemon Trainers like?" Their mother asked.

"It's great mom, but we still want to come home" Tyler said.

"Well, you can't because this place is very busy, especially down at the shop we have a lot of customers at the pokeblock shop, and I just wouldn't be able to get anybody to watch you guys sorry," Their mother said. A loud bell began to ring, telling both trainers that their Pokemon are fully healed.

"Well, mom gotta go!" Tyler said, as he hung up the phone.

"Here, you go kids." Nurse Joy said with a smile. Jessica put her single pink and gray pokeball on her belt, while Tyler put his black and white pokeball along with his red and white pokeball on his belt.

"Hey, Jessica I noticed that you only have one Pokemon, when you need at least two to be in the Pokemon Contest in Kotobuki City.

"I need what!" Jessica boasted.

"Yeah, you need at least two Pokemon to compete." Nurse Joy states. "If I were you I would catch a Mimiroru, because they have a great move set, very nice, and their extra cute!" Nurse Joy stated as she showed Jessica and Tyler a picture of the Pokemon.

"Alright, then that's what I'm going to do!" Jessica yelled. The two twins walked outside at the perfect time, to see a Mimiroru eating a berry.

"Perfect, Go Pochama!" Jessica commanded. She threw her pink and gray pokeball as her Pochama materialized from it. Mimiroru was the same size as a Pikachu. Mimiroru was based off a bunnie. it's fur is mostly brown, with accented, lighter areas on their ears and feet. The


"Pochama, use Peck!" Jessica commanded. Pochama threw his beak and his body at Mimiroru, only to miss and to be smacked both times by Mimiroru's ears twice.

"That was a Double Slap!" Tyler yelled.

"Pochama, use Watergun!" Jessica commanded. Pochama shot a jet stream of water at Mimiroru, only to miss again due to Mimiroru jumping high into the air.

"Jessica, get Pochama out of their!" Tyler yelled. Before Jessica could call Pochama back into it's pokeball Mimiroru landed on Pochama's head. The Mimiroru hopped back into the forest.

"Hey, sis don't worry about it I'll catch that Pokemon for you" Tyler said.

"I don't need your pity!" Jessica yelled. She ran after the Mimiroru.

"Jessica, wait for me!" Tyler yelled. Tyler chased after her. Jessica searched for Mimiroru she noticed somthing brown.

"Those must be Mimiroru's ear's," Jessica thougth. She grabbed the so called "ears" only to see it was a Mankey. Not one Mankey, but many.

"Uh... Bro help!" Jessica yelled. Jessica ran away from the clan of Mankey, only to have them chase after her. Jessica ran as fast as she could only to trip over a rock."Oh no I guess I'm done for!" Jessica yelled. Mimiroru appeared from nowhere and slapped all the Mankey with long bunny like ears.

"Jessica!" Tyler yelled. At the sight of Tyler and Mimiroru the Mankey took off."You okay sis,"

"Yeah, I'm fine" Jessica said, as she stood up. Mimiroru bounced away from Tyler's side and bounced in front of Jessica.

"I think it wants to battle you," Tyler said.

"Alright then, Go Pochama!" Jessica commanded. She threw her pink and gray pokeball as her Pochama materialized from it.

"Pochama, use Watergun!" Jessica commanded
I have to go bye....

 

[Yami Rui]

After catching Korinku, and defeating Team Galaxy grunts John and Betty,

Umm hi where'd they suddenly get a Korinku. Did it magically appear in a pokeball, when you mention something with a after in the sentence make sure it's been already descrined. And plus you skipped the reminder of the Team Galaxy Battle, you know what it would have been better if you had just skipped the Team Galaxy Battle all together.

And you have Nurse Joy describing how awesome Mimiroru is and then one sentence later they see one and then she catches it. *Yawn* Trainers aren't that lucky you know, they don't get what they immedaitely wan't most of the time.