Pokemon lava Red

[mario12]

-Pokemon Lava Red-

Made In Rpgmaker Xp
You used to lived in Pallet Town intell Lava Striked.It was caused By a Pokemon.
So you and your Family Moved to Mokeke Town.
A couple years after the Lava strike in pallet town the pokemon reappeared.
So your Mom went after it and never came back.
Now you are a Trainer trying To solve the mystery
of where your mom went and find out What Pokemon Caused this and why.


Features

Battle System 2% Done
Maps 2% Done
Menu 1% Done
Gender System 20% Done
Graphics 2% Done
Custom Made Pokedex 0% Done



More Comming soon

Need a Scripter,Charset Creator,Spriter,ect

 

[Vavavoom ♣]

#1. A lot of free space in ur maps
#2. Nice OW!

 

[Hideki~kun]

I believe you mean: (4th screenshot)
Wait you can't go there without a POKéMON come with me!
Just pointing out some typo's.
You have a neat story there... I could help out with spelling and grammar... That kind of stuff but that's about it...

 

[mario12]

Cazkuro What should I fix?

 

[Hideki~kun]

On the 4th screenshot change what the Prof. says to what I said earlier.
PM me if you want to make sure of something, or anything like that.

 

[The Dash]

1. Custom graphics needed, that Ash doesn't count because you didn't make it.
2. Mapping needs serious improvement
3. Your grammar makes kittens cry, please improve it.

Right now it just looks like a generic Starter Kit game to me mate.

 

[mario12]

I got six things to say to Dash
1.I cant make Charasets
2.I have a Basic Starter kit
3.Im a Beginner!
4.Im sorry about the spelling.
5.I can't script.
6.I need help!:disappoin

 

[The Dash]

1. Not an excuse.
2. Not an excuse.
3. Definately not an excuse.
4. Spellchecker ftw.
5. Learn.
6. Wanting and Needing are two different things.

 

[foofatron]

You should probaly close the thread then open it after you get better and learn more.

 

[brendan mc]

or get yourself a trust worthy team lol! ^^

 

[Ruyin]

1. Get over it, find some.
2. That just makes it worse.
3. Get over it, period.
4. I don't care how sorry you are.
5. Learn, use events, get someone invested and get them to help you, or give up.
6. Yes, yes you do.

 

[~Azura]

Guys... if this is in the Games Showcase, it has been approved by mods. So instead telling the guy that he sucks and should close the thread, why don't we try to be cool with him, since he's a beginner?

Anyway, mario12, if you need any help improving the game, just post your doubts in the "Help and Request" thread, ok?

Now, to start with, your charsets (Ash and that other tuxedo man) are weird and don't fit in the game, so it would be better if you changed it. If you don't know how to make a charset, I suggest you use the already made ones, that can be found here in the Resources thread.

That's it,

keep it up with your game man

~Azura.

 

[Adamant Linoone]

I just dont think this game is ready to go in here yet? Maby you should get a team and more experienced before you post it here?

 

[Rm2k3Guy]

Stop the flaming, It is totally innapropriate.
He is a beginner, we ALL started as beginners, If you don't like
it leave these forums, and wise up on your Attitudees.

 

[~Azura]

I just dont think this game is ready to go in here yet? Maby you should get a team and more experienced before you post it here?

And how is he supposed to gain experience if all we do is putting him down?

 

[Rm2k3Guy]

And how is he supposed to gain experience if all we do is putting him down?

My point exactly.
People should be more leniant and remember how it used to be for them.

 

[Adamant Linoone]

well keep going and your soon get used to it, I also think making this game will give you lots of experience for the future.

Ignore my last comment it was a little harsh.

 

[mario12]

Why should i be here Close the thread get what your tryin to do....:(

 

[Ruyin]

No ones telling him to stop, but as Canine said, I don't think it is ready to go in the games showcase yet. And you can find RMXP tutorials, uh, anywhere.

 

[Adamant Linoone]

I think you should keep making it, trust me your get bags of experience from it. My first game was Pokemon Legend it wasn't very advanced and it was my first ever attempt.

Now with all the experience I got from my first game I am using to create a more advanced and much better game.

Please dont quit though or I will cry.

PS: Im not going to cry.