Pokemon Legends: Fate of One!

[sam@strand]

Pokemon Legends: Fate of One!

Once upon a time in the land of Pokemon lived a young man named Mr.D, he was a strange and mysterious dude who wanted to become a Pokemon master. One day he was out on a mission filled with danger against Team Practical a bunch of criminal masterminds who came to Mr.D's hometown to steal the legendary Neon Ball, whats inside the Neon Ball is a mystery but it is said to be a Pokemon full of diseases and such which could be fatal to all humanity!
That morning Mr.D woke up with a loud KABOOOOOMALOOM! he jumped out of his pink spotted Jigglypuff PJ's and jumped into his Pokemon Trainer gear, he then rushed straight to Professor Wiidles laboratory which when he arrived he was confronted by Team Practicals 2 most famous members Jessop and Janice.
....To Be Continued!

This entire story line started off just as some random storyline on msn but some of my friends asked if I could turn it into a story. I look forward to any comments as I plan to make it even more crazy and weird

 

[swifty06]

I Love It Make The Next One Now Plz !!!!

 

[sam@strand]

Part 2:

When Mr.D was confronted by the two TP members Jessop pulled out what looked to be an i-Pod Video with 80 gigs worth of storage and plugged it into the the Professors Hi-fi system, then quickly they ran back outside with a Pokemon of some kind...a...a talking Bibarel that could barely stand. Then all of a sudden Jessop and Janice started to do the chicken dance to the Digimon series one theme....Mr.D was speechless..they also mentioned something about a motto but Mr.D didn't even bother to listen and he started to attack them with Beyblade like device that he....borrowed from Pipin the local Pokemon Ranger. Quickly the two TP members retaliated with a smoke bomb and they fled, they said that they would be seeing Mr.D again but he just laughed and headed in to Professor Wiidle's lab to see that..... To be continued!

Sorry this is harder than I thought and I think I should stick to what I do best...Making Games!

 

[swifty06]

luv it again lol do the next one plz

 

[Scarlet Weather]

Um....

Do I really HAVE to explain this?

One: This forum is for serious fanfiction writers. If you're going to write, don't make your chapters a paragraph long each.

Two: Yes, you should stick to making games.

This story did make me genuinely laugh during the second chapter due to the pure randomosity, which makes it better then any paragraph-long stories that try to be serious. However, as an insanity-fic author myself, I will say that to write a good insanity fic you need two things: description, and chapter that take up at least four pages each on a word processor. If you can't do that, don't write fanfiction. If you did want to come back, I'd suggest reading the rules and the fanfiction writing guide. They will help you.

-The returning critic,

ACC