Left 1: Oak too tiny...
Left 2: Flowers too much in pattern. Too boring, Also fix your grammar.
Left 3: Fix your grammar...and maybe spelling.
Left 4: Palettes must be messed up
Left 5: Ditto
Left 6: Ditto
Right 1: You need to work on your puncation such as "," etc
Right 2: No problem
Right 3: You need to work on the grammar.
Right 4: Gary too tiny. Also, the PP/HP writing is too pale.
Right 5: It does not look like an actual mart. Some paleetes are messed up.
Right 6: Nothing wrong.