Pokemon: Lost Universe

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    Hi im Sheepnut's brother his comic inspired me to make a comic. And here it is.

    Plot: Two young kids decide to go into a cave that the mayor of there town said is forbidden because of people going missing. When they go in they see a green poliwrath that sends them to another universe.

    Season one: Lost in some place
    Issue 1 - The Forbidden Cave https://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7741/pokemonlostuniverse14vc.png
    Issue 2 - No Peanuts https://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5527/pokemonlostuniverse21bt.png
    Issue 3 - OH HELL NO! https://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1337/pokemonlostuniverse38fl.png

    Characters:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Lost Universe
    (left to right)
    Bios:

    Name: Matt
    Age: 15
    Pokemon: Krabby, relicanth, Shuppet, tauros
    Description: Matt is one of Palma RIca little hell raisers always causing trouble until trouble finds him and he is sent to another universe.

    Name: Paulie
    Age: 14
    Pokemon: Trapinch, spinda, donphan, delibird
    Description: Also a hell raiser always getting in trouble. But just like matt he is sent to another universe.

    Name: Sunny
    Age: ?
    Pokemon: None
    Description: he is a rare talking cross breed which the hunters are after. He gets the name sunny from matt and paulie.

    Name: The Hunters
    Age: ?
    Pokemon: ?
    Description: All is known is that they are after sunny.

    Name: ????
    Age: ?
    Pokemon: ?
    Description: All is known of him is that he is the leader of the hunters.

    Applications:
    Name:
    Age:
    Pokemon:
    Description:

    Enjoy~
     
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    Hey thats not bad bro. Keep it up I cant wait for issue 2. "You'll kiss a ***per" lol.
     
    um...dont double or especially triple post....its again the rules. neways, i might join later since u might need a lot more than 2 characters O.o'
     
    Guys go easy on him hes a noob.
     
    Yeah it seemed like it. Well any way just ignore those posts I had to make the first post for him. But anyway I'll be doing the rest of his posts for him because he is onyl 10 and doesnt know anything.
     
    Sheepnut said:
    Yeah it seemed like it. Well any way just ignore those posts I had to make the first post for him. But anyway I'll be doing the rest of his posts for him because he is onyl 10 and doesnt know anything.
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    well....srry i wasn't being mean at all ^^ i was just telling him to be careful next time.
     
    Hmm... Quite good... Got flavour?
    Characters:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Lost Universe

    From left to right:

    Names: Dan, Lucus, Archie
    Ages: All 12 though Dan is several days older.
    Pokemon:
    Dan: Yanma, Butterfree, Ludicolo, Vileplume, Roselia, Ivysaur.
    Lucus: Parasect, Nuzleaf, Paras, Wurmple.
    Archie: Beautifly, Dustox, Beedrill, Jumpluff.
    Profile:
    The so called "Bugtastic Trio" are the top bug experts. There father is Bugsy, though they never see him any more. They live on Cinnabar island where, someday, Dan will become a gymleader in Kanto.(Though that will be in about 10 years.) Dan, being the oldest, has full responsibility of the two twins, though Lucas says he doesn't need help, he really does.
    Are they in?
     
    I haven't signed up Sunflorazumarill for any new comics lately, but I think she might want to join this one.

    *image removed* SUNFLORAZUMARILL
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    *image removed*
     
    Sunflorazumarill, follow the form for him
    Name:
    Age:
    Pokemon:
    Description:

    Time for me to add pointless criticism.. --;

    Uhm.. why is there quotes from diff. things?

    PokéChow: It's not just on... it's ON!
    Lost Universe: Bring it on. -- Oh its already been ON!
    Kinda the same.. >>


    Wizard of Oz: Toto(?), I don't think we're in Kansas anymore!
    Lost Universe: I dont think we're in Palma Rica anymore!
    Heh.. >>

    Okay, I'm done criticising.
     
    Applications:
    Name:Prince Zukani
    Age:19
    Pokemon:Blaziken,Salamence and Houndoom
    Description: He was born on Cinnabar Island but when the volcanno erupted when he was about to die Moltres came and a fusion ray was shot on him and Moltres so he survived.
     
    I like your comic, it seems good so far. But, the grammar is a bit off.
    Also, text bubbles would look nicer.

    Name: Ryan
    Pokemon: Arbok. Shiny Ninetails. Haunter. Duskull.
    Age: 14
    Pokemon: Description: Ryan is a high school student who hates stupidity. He will challenge anyone he thinks mistreats their poke'mon or anyone who is just plain idiotic. At times Ryan can be VERY Emo. Hence his Poke'mon.

    Sprites:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Lost Universe


    Maybe I could make a new text box for you, rather than the bland white?
     
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    Characters:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Lost Universe
    (left to right)
    Bios:

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    Name: The Hunters
    Age: ?
    Pokemon: ?
    Description: All is known is that they are after sunny.

    Name: ????
    Age: ?
    Pokemon: ?
    Description: All is known of him is that he is the leader of the hunters
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    Let me help out on this:
    Name: The Bugtastic Trio
    Ages: (You have them)
    Pokemon:
    Dan: ###
    (Then the others)
    Description: (You also have this. If you want to cut some out, you can)
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    But a wierd new eppy. My three working in an evil sivilisation.
     
    are you going to put credits up? Because I made xXKillaXx's sprites for him (the guy with the moltres wings)
     
    Can I join?
    Sprites:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon: Lost Universe

    Name: Conor
    Age: 12
    Pokemon: Blaziken, Totodile, Politoad, Espeon.
    Description: Tough and never gives up.
     
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