Pokemon: Lost Universe

[Jolteon33]

Name: Dean
Age: 12
Pokemon: Wartortle, Scyther, Mr. Mime
Description: He is one of the smartest kids that can battle. His firs pokemon was Squirtle. He lives on Three Island.

 

[PokemonMaster2006]

Nice! Sunflorazumarill looks pretty f***ed up right here d00d.

 

[adwajr]

Name: Dean
Age: 12
Pokemon: Wartortle, Scyther, Mr. Mime
Description: He is one of the smartest kids that can battle. His firs pokemon was Squirtle. He lives on Three Island.

Where's the sprites?
When is the next comic up?

 

[Goatman56]

Well there are grammar mistakes, you keep forgetting to capitalize there names and other easy things to forget. This comic just started and you already have five re-colors, try being more creative. It's not funny, and that white space in comic one. I know there going to a different universe but, it doesn't look to good if it's just white. No grade yet, i'll just wait for you to make more comics.

 

[Jolteon33]

Oh i forgot:

 

[Jasmine's #1 fan]

me want to join

Name:Irvin
Age:12
Pokemon: Ditto beautifly
Description: he is very shy. but when his friends are in danger he has a different personality. he is an ok coodinator who just started.

 

[619er]

guys ill be finished on my comic soon
EDIT: Updated.

 

[Sunflorazumarill]

Sunflorazumarill's perrty funny in this.

 

[xXkillaXx]

cool new comic but grammar it's i'm not in
Edit:i meant to say Sunfolrazumarill I've been looking for you everywhere

 

[Bubsy]

this is soooo funny!

i love your comic its very cute and funny

 

[619er]

thanks guys for the comments
bubsy you dont have to do a title

 

[Jolteon33]

When r u going to update?

 

[Ravecat]

cool new comic but grammar it's i'm not im

I hate to be rude. You're sort of contradicting yourself in that sentence, it lacks punctuation.