Pokemon Manga!

[Chizzy]

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Right, this is my First Sprite Comic on Pokecommunity and it follows the story of Red in the Manga Comic Book Series. Im only a begginer and need as much help as possible so please give me advice!

Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Glow! (Title Pic Soon!)
Episode 1: *image removed*
Episode 2: *image removed*
Episode 3: *image removed*
Episode 4: *image removed* (NEW!)
Episode 5: *image removed* (NEW!)

Chapter 2: Come home Bulbasaur! *image removed*

Special Comics!

Charachter List:

Name: Red
Pokemon: Poliwhirl, Nidorino
Badges:
Bio: Red Is an average Trainer In Pallet Town, untill one day, he is hinted that he may not be the best in Pallet. He sees Proffesor Oak, who advises him to leave on his journey...

Name: Blue
Pokemon: Charmanader
Badges: ???
Bio: Proffesor Oak's Grandson...Very Highly Regarded In Kanto


Tell me what you think and what i need to improve!

 

[Roy-Kun]

For being a first comic, nice.

Still, the background gives some problems to difference the pannels, try to fix that.

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

The lines need to be darker because when I was looking at this comic I couldn't really tell if it was just one little strip or not.

:t003:Dark Venusaur

 

[Houndoom1]

okay it's good for a fisrt comic just work on the backround of it and it should work out alright.

 

[Decepticon]

the background is boring and I dont like how it was all in battle. you shoulda used OW's and made it like Matt Silver's version.

but its only the first ep so yeah... and a comic version of the manga is cool so keep it up.

 

[Chizzy]

Thanks for all your comments people. I finally realise how hard it is to make a comic! I'll wotk on the background too. I will have a Poll!

 

[The Dash]

None of them. Backgrounds should have textures man.

 

[Matt Silver]

Thanks for all your comments people. I finally realise how hard it is to make a comic! I'll wotk on the background too. I will have a Poll!

Yeah Dashiel and Dec have it right man. Backrounds should probably have textures.

 

[ForeverFlame]

Fairly good. I couldn't see much mistakes. I've noticed a few things that need touch-ups, but I decided to to comment on that... :P

 

[Derrin Hinch]

I dont really understand the question of the poll nice comic btw I cant wait for more.

 

[RocketMemberMichael]

Not very good...Sprites are badly put in and the backgrounds are horrible... I am starting to hate the way people call the male Fire Red/Leaf Green character Red...His name is Ash Kechum...Uh...Terrible...

 

[Matt Silver]

Not very good...Sprites are badly put in and the backgrounds are horrible... I am starting to hate the way people call the male Fire Red/Leaf Green character Red...His name is Ash Kechum...Uh...Terrible...

No Ash is a name just used for the anime. In the Manga and in the games, he is known as RED

 

[Decepticon]

Not very good...Sprites are badly put in and the backgrounds are horrible... I am starting to hate the way people call the male Fire Red/Leaf Green character Red...His name is Ash Kechum...Uh...Terrible...

i remember in your prepare 4 trouble comic you named the male fr/lg character Red... and sure the comic needs work but maybe Maneachicken will actually continue unlike your comics where u make 2 comics and move onto something new. =.=;

cant wait for next one Maneachicken, just dont make it the same as u made the first one. kthxbai

 

[RocketMemberMichael]

your right...Good work Maneachicken...The reason I make so many comics is because I plan them! When you plan a comic they never work! I am only gonna make NB and the one I am working on! And yes Prepare 4 Trouble was aweful at first but then it evolved into a great comic! KEEP IT UP!

 

[Chizzy]

I am going to close the Poll...the question wasn't very understandable, and I will try to change the Battle Background. And the Comics screen divider colour will be Yellow. Im currently working on the second episode where Team Rocket arrives! But I think after a while, when I run out of sources for the Manga I will take Red and continue the journey in my Own way. What do you think?

(The next Comic will be in Overworld form! The first was like that because that is how i do battles. Sorry for Confusion!)

EDIT: New eppy up!

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

That comic looks better than the 1st one

:t003:Dark Venusaur

 

[Houndoom1]

I have to sya it's way better then the last comic keep it up!

 

[Chizzy]

Thanks for All your Comments! Third comic won't be long. Im on the 4th Panel!

EDIT: 3rd Comic and 1st Death Comic is up!

 

[Houndoom1]

Nice update! Red just moved into the battle!

 

[Chizzy]

Wow! I honestly thought that This Idea wouldn't work! Next updates will be More often Because Im on Half term Holiday for two weeks! I can't believe people are supporting this! Thanks everyone!

Oh Yeah...Each New chapter will have its own Chapter starter! Chapter 1's is in my Avatar!