The first route and the first city look very similiar to Route 1 (or 2), and Viridian City.
I have an idea. I think Team Vyros should have Roselias instead of weak Zubats and Poochyenas, because you know, to go with the name? I'm just saying that the grunts should be a bit more difficult.
I LOVE this hack name. Keep it up!
I can be a scripter, if you want. You might want two, though. Because I'm going through quite a bit of work in high school right now.