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Pokemon Miracles of Nature

That made no sense what so ever, seriously it could be A LOT more clearer.
You plot isn't clear, your characters arent clear and most of your comic isn't clear
too early to rate but, make it clearer if you want to get anywhere
 
yeh i dont want 2 be mean ill say this is ur 1st comic? and yeah it didnt make any sence so wat i think u should do is get rid of the intro and go straight 2 the comic but it is upto u..i dont want 2 bring u down, i just wanted 2 help u
 
Umm why is igglybuff smaller than grass and is able to speak english and I have no idea what the story is.
 
Makes no sence what so ever.
The text overlaps the speech bubbles.
 
Ok, I really think your missing a panel here, because there's space for one panel an d that could explain more. And why is it so confusing, my brain hurts, and the text IS overlapping the panels. But then again I can't give a 0-10 score yet because you have no real comics.
 
You Still Didnt Answer Why Igglybuff Was Speaking English And Was Smaller Than Grass!
 
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