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Okay, so I decided to try my hand a PMD2 fic. I may not be as good an author as some people on here, but I think I can do OK. Anyway, some dialouge is from the game and some is mine. Also, the chapter titles and storyline (obviously) are from the game as well. As always, comments and constructive criticism are welcome. Enjoy!
The setting sun cast a reddish glow on the small beach. Palm trees laden with coconuts lined the shore. Krabby sat blowing bubbles on top of the reddish cliffs that rose high into the air on all sides. The bubbles drifted through the air with a kind of lazy elegance, catching the sun's rays. Mika opened her eyes, her vision blurry at first. "Urrgh…where…where am I?" she muttered thickly. She tried to sit up, but her body felt heavy, and she slid back against the small rock behind her. "I can't…drifting off…" And her eyes closed again. The darkness behind her closed lids became complete.
Alice looked up at the huge tent that stood in front of her. It was shaped like the head of a Wigglytuff. Torches situated on top of totem poles blazed on either side of it. The smoke rose high into the reddish-tinged sky, curling around itself until it vanished on a breeze. She took a deep breath. This place had always seemed kind of creepy. She paced back and forth in front of the tent a few times and said resolutely, "No. I refuse to be paralyzed by this any longer."
"That's right. You have to steel your courage today," said her best friend Bailey, a Chikorita. "This is it. You can do it."
Alice drew another calming breath and stepped onto a small round grate in front of the tent.
"Pokemon detected! Pokemon detected!" called a voice.
"Whose footprint? Whose footprint?" asked a second, much louder voice.
"The footprint is Chimchar's! The footprint is Chimchar's!" replied the first voice confidently.
Alice jumped about a foot in the air and hopped backward off the grate as though it had burned her. "Waah! That was too shocking!" she cried. "I…I can't. I can't work up the courage to go in after all." Alice looked down at the orange-sized rock hanging on a string around her neck. One side was flat, and that side was inscribed with an intricate pattern. "I thought holding onto my personal treasure would inspire me…but I just can't do it. I'm such a coward. This is so discouraging." Bailey sighed deeply. She had thought that maybe, finally, today Alice would be brave enough to go in, but no…
"You're not a coward. You're just nervous," said Bailey, not unkindly. "Come on. Let's get out of here. This is not where you need to be."
As the two Pokemon walked off down the steps hewn into the cliff face, two more Pokemon slid out of the shadows.
"Did you get a load of that, Zubat?" asked the first.
"You bet I did, Koffing!" replied the second.
"That little wimp that was pacing around with her friend had something good, right?" said Koffing.
"Yeah…it looked like something that might be valuable," Zubat said, a nasty grin spreading over his face.
"Do we go after it?" asked Koffing.
"We do," replied Zubat maliciously.
Down on the beach, Alice and Bailey walked out into the red glow of the sunset. The Krabby were sitting on top of the cliffs, bubbles streaming slowly from their mouths. "Oh, wow! What a beautiful sight!" Alice cried, gazing at them. The bubbles were drifting lazily about on breezes, catching the sun's light off the waves and sparkling.
"When the weather's good, the Krabby come out at sunset to blow bubbles…it's always beautiful," Bailey murmured. "All those bubbles, sparkling in the sunlight…" Both Pokemon gazed at the bubbles for a few moments.
"This is where I always come when I'm feeling down on myself," said Alice softly. "But being here heals my spirits, like always. A second later, Alice let out a gasp of surprise. "Hey…what's that? Waah! Someone has collapsed on the sand!" Bailey and Alice ran over to the spot where a small, blue penguin-like Pokemon lay propped against a rock, eyes closed.
"Hey, are you okay?" asked Bailey in alarm. Bailey's cry appeared to have awoken the Pokemon, whose eyes flew open.
"Whoa…where am I?" the Pokemon asked, standing up.
"You're on the beach," said Alice kindly. "But it's a relief that you're awake. You weren't moving at all. I was really worried for you! Well, do you remember anything about how you ended up zonked out here?"
"I was zonked out?" the Pokemon asked. "Well, no, I can't remember anything at all…and even if I could, I probably wouldn't be able to tell you much. See, I'm a human."
"You say you're a human?" asked Bailey suspiciously. "But you look like a totally normal Piplup to me."
"Hey…you're right!" the Piplup cried. "I've turned into a Piplup!"
"You're a little odd," said Bailey. "Are you playing some kind of trick on us?"
"No!" the Piplup shouted. "You're right, I can be rebellious and a little odd, but I'm not tricking you two."
"You're telling us the truth?" said Bailey. "All right, then. What's your name?"
"Oh, sorry, my name's Mika," said the Piplup politely.
"Mika is your name?" said Alice. "Cool. Please excuse my friend here. See, more and more bad Pokemon have been popping up lately. It's hard to know who to trust anymore. Things have grown pretty dangerous. Anyway, I'm Alice and my friend here is Bailey." Mika smiled, and Alice and Bailey smiled back. What happened next happened so fast that no one really saw how. One minute, Alice was smiling at Mika, and the next, she pitched forward and landed facedown on the sand. The orange-sized rock around her neck was gone. Zubat was holding it securely in one of his wings, and both he and Koffing were smirking unpleasantly.
"Well, I do beg your pardon," said Koffing.
"Why'd you do that?" Mika demanded, stepping in front of Alice and Bailey. She was feeling drawn to these Pokemon already. "Why'd you take her—"
Zubat cut her off. "Can't figure it out? We wanted so mess with that wimp behind you. So, not gonna face up to us?"
"Wh-what?" asked Alice nervously.
Zubat swung the rock by its string. "That's yours, isn't it?" he smirked.
"No! That's…" Alice cried, apparently recognizing the rock.
"Sorry, kiddies, we'll take that," said Zubat, hanging it around his own neck. This set off a chain reaction. Alice shrieked and fell over again, Bailey let out a growling noise, and Mika shouted, "Hey!"
"Not gonna make a move to get that back?" laughed Koffing. "I knew the Chimchar was wimpy, but I didn't realize you all were like that, too."
"Ha! See you around, chickens!" Zubat called. The two thieves hurried off into the small cave mouth on the beach's left side.
"Ohhh…what should I do now?" Alice sighed, sinking down to sit on the sand. "That's my personal treasure. It means everything to me. If I lose that now…"
"What are you talking about? Now is a time to be brave, not to sit here and let those thugs take your treasure," said Mika. "We don't have time to feel scared. Come on, I'll help you get it back if you want."
"Really?! You will? Thanks so much!" Alice cried, flinging her arms around Mika's neck. "Let's go quickly, then!"
The three ran into the small cave mouth. This led to the BeachCave, a dim, damp cave in a cliff face. Seaweed grew out of the walls, and water dripped from the roof. It was full of water-type Pokemon like Corsola and Shellos, which Mika gladly defeated with her pound. The Shellder and Kabuto took the whole team's effort to defeat, as their scratch, if used too many times, could be fatal. There was a particularly tense moment in which one Kabuto, who seemed to think he was guardian of the entrance to the next area, almost defeated Bailey. If Alice hadn't thrown an OranBerry at her at the last the second, she would have lost. Finally, after fighting through five areas of the cave, the three Pokemon reached BeachCave's pit, a sandy room with water lapping at the edges. Reddish cliffs like the ones on the beach above rose into the air. These were cracked and had seaweed growing out of them all over.
Koffing and Zubat were hovering above the water on the far side of the room. Alice's treasure was still around Zubat's neck.
"Uh…hey!" Alice shouted.
"Well, if it isn't our old friends, the big chickens!" Koffing mocked.
"Give me back what you stole from me! That's my personal treasure! It means everything!" Alice called.
"Oh, so this thing really is valuable," Zubat snickered. "It might get a good price if we could sell it. But if you want it back that badly…come on!" And everyone in the room shouted, "BATTLEON!" instinctively. There were two flashes of light in very quick succession, and then a third, brighter one that was separate from the others.
The battle began with Bailey chucking a good-size Geo Pebble at Zubat, who howled in pain and led Koffing up to Mika, Alice and Bailey. Mika immediately took this opportunity to get in a strong pound on Zubat. Meanwhile, Bailey was Tackling Koffing with all her power, but he seemed to be stronger than Zubat. Once, he used Poison Gas on Alice, poisoning her. Mika was filled with such anger that her Pound on Zubat turned into a critical hit and took him down. Alice was crouched on the sand, clutching her chest, clearly in pain.
"Okay, Bailey. Do we do this or not?" Mika asked. Bailey nodded with a grim look at Alice. "One…two…three!" Mika called. Mika shouted, "Pound!" and Bailey cried, "Tackle!" The attacks hit Koffing simultaneously, and before he could do any more than shout his surprise, he was down as well.
"Well, let me just say this," said Alice, breaking the silence. "Poison hurts."
Mika smiled. "You okay?"
"I am now," Alice said. "We won, didn't we?" Just then, there was a groaning noise from behind them. Koffing and Zubat were back up, hovering a few feet off the ground.
"D-darn it," Zubat spluttered. "How'd we get roughed up by a few kids like them?"
"Let me say this," said Koffing furiously. "Your victory was a fluke. You wouldn't have won if…oh, never mind. Let's get out of here." And Zubat and Koffing shot off towards the exit as fast as they could, leaving Alice's orange-sized rock behind them.
"Yeah, you better run!" Bailey shouted after them. "Don't you ever think about coming back here and messing with us again!"
As soon as the three Pokemon were sure Koffing and Zubat were out of earshot, they burst out laughing.
"Did you see Koffing's face when you two knocked him out?" Alice gasped, banging the ground with her fist. Her eyes widened and her mouth fell in open in an accurate imitation of Koffing.
"And Zubat, too!" Mika cried, tears of laughter running down her cheeks. "He sounded like a wolf when Bailey threw that Geo Pebble at him!" Bailey would have contributed too, but she was immobilized by laughter.
"Seriously, though," said Alice, regaining control of herself. "I would never have had the courage to take them on if it hadn't been for you, Mika," she said. "What am I, chopped Poke-block?" Bailey asked indignantly, and the three burst out laughing again. They passed several happy minutes abusing Koffing and Zubat before Alice picked up her rock-thing and headed for the exit. Bailey looked at Mika and pulled the same face that Alice had earlier. Both Pokemon smiled at each other.
Outside on the beach, the sun was really starting to set. The colors in the sky had become more vibrant and rich. Yellows had deepened to oranges, reds to magentas, and blues to purples. The sun hung low in the sky, a blazing orange ball of fire that cast a warm glow on the water. Mika had never seen anything like that before. The three gazed at it for a few moments before Alice spoke.
"Mika, I sincerely thank you for helping me get my treasure back," she said. "It really does mean a lot to me. See, I've always liked legends and lore. I get so excited when I hear tales from the past. Hidden troves of gold and silver…new lands just waiting to be found…"
"And uncharted territories veiled in darkness?" Mika chipped in, unable to stop herself.
"Yes," said Alice. "And discoveries! Wouldn't it be amazing to make historic discoveries? At least, that's how I feel."
"So one day, we happened across Alice's treasure. She calls it her Relic Fragment. Even she admits that it looks like junk, but take a closer look, Mika." Alice took it off and handed it to Mika. There was indeed an intricate, odd pattern on the flat the side of the rock. It looked almost…sacred, like it was the key to something hidden.
"Wow…that's really cool," Mika said. "You don't see a pattern like that every day. I can see why you treasure this so much."
"Well, anyway, the way I see it, the best way to have adventures is to apprentice at a guild and form an exploration team. Earlier, I tried apprenticing at Wigglytuff's Guild, but…I chickened out," Alice sighed. "But I think I can do it now, because you're with me, Mika. So, what do you say? Will you form an exploration team with Bailey and me?" Alice then gazed at Mika unblinkingly, hope blazing in her eyes.
"Uh…yeah, of course I will," Mika agreed, with only a moment's hesitation.
"YES!" Alice shouted, so loudly that a few Pelipper perched on the cliffs took flight. "I think we're going to be a great combination! Let's make this work!"
And with that, the three ran off in the direction of Wigglytuff's Guild. This turned out to be their very first step into the many fantastic realms of adventure that awaited their arrival.
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2:
Tale of the Time Warriors
Tale of the Time Warriors
Chapter I:
A Storm at Sea
A Storm at Sea
The setting sun cast a reddish glow on the small beach. Palm trees laden with coconuts lined the shore. Krabby sat blowing bubbles on top of the reddish cliffs that rose high into the air on all sides. The bubbles drifted through the air with a kind of lazy elegance, catching the sun's rays. Mika opened her eyes, her vision blurry at first. "Urrgh…where…where am I?" she muttered thickly. She tried to sit up, but her body felt heavy, and she slid back against the small rock behind her. "I can't…drifting off…" And her eyes closed again. The darkness behind her closed lids became complete.
Alice looked up at the huge tent that stood in front of her. It was shaped like the head of a Wigglytuff. Torches situated on top of totem poles blazed on either side of it. The smoke rose high into the reddish-tinged sky, curling around itself until it vanished on a breeze. She took a deep breath. This place had always seemed kind of creepy. She paced back and forth in front of the tent a few times and said resolutely, "No. I refuse to be paralyzed by this any longer."
"That's right. You have to steel your courage today," said her best friend Bailey, a Chikorita. "This is it. You can do it."
Alice drew another calming breath and stepped onto a small round grate in front of the tent.
"Pokemon detected! Pokemon detected!" called a voice.
"Whose footprint? Whose footprint?" asked a second, much louder voice.
"The footprint is Chimchar's! The footprint is Chimchar's!" replied the first voice confidently.
Alice jumped about a foot in the air and hopped backward off the grate as though it had burned her. "Waah! That was too shocking!" she cried. "I…I can't. I can't work up the courage to go in after all." Alice looked down at the orange-sized rock hanging on a string around her neck. One side was flat, and that side was inscribed with an intricate pattern. "I thought holding onto my personal treasure would inspire me…but I just can't do it. I'm such a coward. This is so discouraging." Bailey sighed deeply. She had thought that maybe, finally, today Alice would be brave enough to go in, but no…
"You're not a coward. You're just nervous," said Bailey, not unkindly. "Come on. Let's get out of here. This is not where you need to be."
As the two Pokemon walked off down the steps hewn into the cliff face, two more Pokemon slid out of the shadows.
"Did you get a load of that, Zubat?" asked the first.
"You bet I did, Koffing!" replied the second.
"That little wimp that was pacing around with her friend had something good, right?" said Koffing.
"Yeah…it looked like something that might be valuable," Zubat said, a nasty grin spreading over his face.
"Do we go after it?" asked Koffing.
"We do," replied Zubat maliciously.
Down on the beach, Alice and Bailey walked out into the red glow of the sunset. The Krabby were sitting on top of the cliffs, bubbles streaming slowly from their mouths. "Oh, wow! What a beautiful sight!" Alice cried, gazing at them. The bubbles were drifting lazily about on breezes, catching the sun's light off the waves and sparkling.
"When the weather's good, the Krabby come out at sunset to blow bubbles…it's always beautiful," Bailey murmured. "All those bubbles, sparkling in the sunlight…" Both Pokemon gazed at the bubbles for a few moments.
"This is where I always come when I'm feeling down on myself," said Alice softly. "But being here heals my spirits, like always. A second later, Alice let out a gasp of surprise. "Hey…what's that? Waah! Someone has collapsed on the sand!" Bailey and Alice ran over to the spot where a small, blue penguin-like Pokemon lay propped against a rock, eyes closed.
"Hey, are you okay?" asked Bailey in alarm. Bailey's cry appeared to have awoken the Pokemon, whose eyes flew open.
"Whoa…where am I?" the Pokemon asked, standing up.
"You're on the beach," said Alice kindly. "But it's a relief that you're awake. You weren't moving at all. I was really worried for you! Well, do you remember anything about how you ended up zonked out here?"
"I was zonked out?" the Pokemon asked. "Well, no, I can't remember anything at all…and even if I could, I probably wouldn't be able to tell you much. See, I'm a human."
"You say you're a human?" asked Bailey suspiciously. "But you look like a totally normal Piplup to me."
"Hey…you're right!" the Piplup cried. "I've turned into a Piplup!"
"You're a little odd," said Bailey. "Are you playing some kind of trick on us?"
"No!" the Piplup shouted. "You're right, I can be rebellious and a little odd, but I'm not tricking you two."
"You're telling us the truth?" said Bailey. "All right, then. What's your name?"
"Oh, sorry, my name's Mika," said the Piplup politely.
"Mika is your name?" said Alice. "Cool. Please excuse my friend here. See, more and more bad Pokemon have been popping up lately. It's hard to know who to trust anymore. Things have grown pretty dangerous. Anyway, I'm Alice and my friend here is Bailey." Mika smiled, and Alice and Bailey smiled back. What happened next happened so fast that no one really saw how. One minute, Alice was smiling at Mika, and the next, she pitched forward and landed facedown on the sand. The orange-sized rock around her neck was gone. Zubat was holding it securely in one of his wings, and both he and Koffing were smirking unpleasantly.
"Well, I do beg your pardon," said Koffing.
"Why'd you do that?" Mika demanded, stepping in front of Alice and Bailey. She was feeling drawn to these Pokemon already. "Why'd you take her—"
Zubat cut her off. "Can't figure it out? We wanted so mess with that wimp behind you. So, not gonna face up to us?"
"Wh-what?" asked Alice nervously.
Zubat swung the rock by its string. "That's yours, isn't it?" he smirked.
"No! That's…" Alice cried, apparently recognizing the rock.
"Sorry, kiddies, we'll take that," said Zubat, hanging it around his own neck. This set off a chain reaction. Alice shrieked and fell over again, Bailey let out a growling noise, and Mika shouted, "Hey!"
"Not gonna make a move to get that back?" laughed Koffing. "I knew the Chimchar was wimpy, but I didn't realize you all were like that, too."
"Ha! See you around, chickens!" Zubat called. The two thieves hurried off into the small cave mouth on the beach's left side.
"Ohhh…what should I do now?" Alice sighed, sinking down to sit on the sand. "That's my personal treasure. It means everything to me. If I lose that now…"
"What are you talking about? Now is a time to be brave, not to sit here and let those thugs take your treasure," said Mika. "We don't have time to feel scared. Come on, I'll help you get it back if you want."
"Really?! You will? Thanks so much!" Alice cried, flinging her arms around Mika's neck. "Let's go quickly, then!"
The three ran into the small cave mouth. This led to the BeachCave, a dim, damp cave in a cliff face. Seaweed grew out of the walls, and water dripped from the roof. It was full of water-type Pokemon like Corsola and Shellos, which Mika gladly defeated with her pound. The Shellder and Kabuto took the whole team's effort to defeat, as their scratch, if used too many times, could be fatal. There was a particularly tense moment in which one Kabuto, who seemed to think he was guardian of the entrance to the next area, almost defeated Bailey. If Alice hadn't thrown an OranBerry at her at the last the second, she would have lost. Finally, after fighting through five areas of the cave, the three Pokemon reached BeachCave's pit, a sandy room with water lapping at the edges. Reddish cliffs like the ones on the beach above rose into the air. These were cracked and had seaweed growing out of them all over.
Koffing and Zubat were hovering above the water on the far side of the room. Alice's treasure was still around Zubat's neck.
"Uh…hey!" Alice shouted.
"Well, if it isn't our old friends, the big chickens!" Koffing mocked.
"Give me back what you stole from me! That's my personal treasure! It means everything!" Alice called.
"Oh, so this thing really is valuable," Zubat snickered. "It might get a good price if we could sell it. But if you want it back that badly…come on!" And everyone in the room shouted, "BATTLEON!" instinctively. There were two flashes of light in very quick succession, and then a third, brighter one that was separate from the others.
The battle began with Bailey chucking a good-size Geo Pebble at Zubat, who howled in pain and led Koffing up to Mika, Alice and Bailey. Mika immediately took this opportunity to get in a strong pound on Zubat. Meanwhile, Bailey was Tackling Koffing with all her power, but he seemed to be stronger than Zubat. Once, he used Poison Gas on Alice, poisoning her. Mika was filled with such anger that her Pound on Zubat turned into a critical hit and took him down. Alice was crouched on the sand, clutching her chest, clearly in pain.
"Okay, Bailey. Do we do this or not?" Mika asked. Bailey nodded with a grim look at Alice. "One…two…three!" Mika called. Mika shouted, "Pound!" and Bailey cried, "Tackle!" The attacks hit Koffing simultaneously, and before he could do any more than shout his surprise, he was down as well.
"Well, let me just say this," said Alice, breaking the silence. "Poison hurts."
Mika smiled. "You okay?"
"I am now," Alice said. "We won, didn't we?" Just then, there was a groaning noise from behind them. Koffing and Zubat were back up, hovering a few feet off the ground.
"D-darn it," Zubat spluttered. "How'd we get roughed up by a few kids like them?"
"Let me say this," said Koffing furiously. "Your victory was a fluke. You wouldn't have won if…oh, never mind. Let's get out of here." And Zubat and Koffing shot off towards the exit as fast as they could, leaving Alice's orange-sized rock behind them.
"Yeah, you better run!" Bailey shouted after them. "Don't you ever think about coming back here and messing with us again!"
As soon as the three Pokemon were sure Koffing and Zubat were out of earshot, they burst out laughing.
"Did you see Koffing's face when you two knocked him out?" Alice gasped, banging the ground with her fist. Her eyes widened and her mouth fell in open in an accurate imitation of Koffing.
"And Zubat, too!" Mika cried, tears of laughter running down her cheeks. "He sounded like a wolf when Bailey threw that Geo Pebble at him!" Bailey would have contributed too, but she was immobilized by laughter.
"Seriously, though," said Alice, regaining control of herself. "I would never have had the courage to take them on if it hadn't been for you, Mika," she said. "What am I, chopped Poke-block?" Bailey asked indignantly, and the three burst out laughing again. They passed several happy minutes abusing Koffing and Zubat before Alice picked up her rock-thing and headed for the exit. Bailey looked at Mika and pulled the same face that Alice had earlier. Both Pokemon smiled at each other.
Outside on the beach, the sun was really starting to set. The colors in the sky had become more vibrant and rich. Yellows had deepened to oranges, reds to magentas, and blues to purples. The sun hung low in the sky, a blazing orange ball of fire that cast a warm glow on the water. Mika had never seen anything like that before. The three gazed at it for a few moments before Alice spoke.
"Mika, I sincerely thank you for helping me get my treasure back," she said. "It really does mean a lot to me. See, I've always liked legends and lore. I get so excited when I hear tales from the past. Hidden troves of gold and silver…new lands just waiting to be found…"
"And uncharted territories veiled in darkness?" Mika chipped in, unable to stop herself.
"Yes," said Alice. "And discoveries! Wouldn't it be amazing to make historic discoveries? At least, that's how I feel."
"So one day, we happened across Alice's treasure. She calls it her Relic Fragment. Even she admits that it looks like junk, but take a closer look, Mika." Alice took it off and handed it to Mika. There was indeed an intricate, odd pattern on the flat the side of the rock. It looked almost…sacred, like it was the key to something hidden.
"Wow…that's really cool," Mika said. "You don't see a pattern like that every day. I can see why you treasure this so much."
"Well, anyway, the way I see it, the best way to have adventures is to apprentice at a guild and form an exploration team. Earlier, I tried apprenticing at Wigglytuff's Guild, but…I chickened out," Alice sighed. "But I think I can do it now, because you're with me, Mika. So, what do you say? Will you form an exploration team with Bailey and me?" Alice then gazed at Mika unblinkingly, hope blazing in her eyes.
"Uh…yeah, of course I will," Mika agreed, with only a moment's hesitation.
"YES!" Alice shouted, so loudly that a few Pelipper perched on the cliffs took flight. "I think we're going to be a great combination! Let's make this work!"
And with that, the three ran off in the direction of Wigglytuff's Guild. This turned out to be their very first step into the many fantastic realms of adventure that awaited their arrival.