Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The WishMaker's Quest

[Clark]

The Pokemon World. A place of connection and teamwork, where despite their differences everyone can come together as a society. A place where loyalty and justice triumph over evil, and in the end all is well. A place founded by friendship and equality, in which everyone can live a legacy. There is always a lively feel in the air. The Pokemon who inhabit this grand world value citizenship, joining as a whole to form a great and lasting race of unity. All is well, and it seems there is nothing that could end this age of peace.

Well, not anymore.​

This world I just described to you is one of a nearly-forgotten past. A full millennia has passed since those times. These days, the few who are alive wouldn't even recognize that world. Now, all is dark and silent. No winds blow. No sun rises. It is only cold, empty, quiet, gray, emotionless... and eternal. Ever since the day, so long ago, when the Tower of Time collapsed. Time is no more, now. Not even the planet dares to move or turn. Everything has simply stopped.

There are those who have survived through it all, however. While few in numbers, they do exist, descendants of a joyful land, struggling by to live their cruel, empty lives. Most are resilient Pokemon, barely clinging to the sense that is reason, living by instinct and survival of the fittest.

Some are the Legendary Pokemon, ancient deities who can hardly be considered "alive". They have all sealed themselves away, hidden from all and locked in their own deep slumbers. Once they were the rulers and watchers of this world. Long ago, they protected the land, ensuring that nothing like this could happen. However, even they were unable to prevent what was to come. Each of them eventually went into an everlasting sleep, in their own remote places, unwilling to watch over such a malevolent and corrupted world. All except for one, that is.

Once, in that same world of peace and tranquility from so long ago, there lived a Legendary Pokemon known as Dialga. It was the ruler of Time, and atop its roost on Temporal Tower it fufilled its duty with true loyalty. However, one day, something happened. No one knew what caused it nor how nor why, but all the same, it happened. The Temporal Tower collapsed. There was nothing to prevent it, and no forewarning. It simply crumbled to pieces. And Time itself drowned in the remains. Dialga became consumed by darkness. Unable to control itself, it unleashed a mighty roar. This roar was what triggered the planet's paralysis. Ever since, the Guardian of Time has been known to all as "Primal Dialga". Now, Primal Dialga is the single god of this world, driven mad by the destruction of its purpose. And it truly seems there is nothing to bring back the old ways.

There is a legend, though. Perhaps the only myth that has made it through the ages, and the only flicker of hope that exists in this cursed realm. The legend speaks that after a thousand years of slumber, one of the Legendaries would awaken. This said Pokemon would be one of great magic and power, who possessed one ability in particular: Wish-Granting. Any wish the heart desired could be fufilled, no matter what it may be. It was said that this Pokemon would be found in a place where water fell in frozen formations, and that upon its awakening, this water would spring to life. The path to the Wish-Maker was to be shown by a comet, high in the eternal night sky. It was rumored that this Pokemon was destined to be found, and that if only the right wish were to be made, the world's paralysis would be put to an end.

This is where you come in. You are one of a group of Pokemon who has just heard this legend, just seconds ago, from the elder of the small village you live in. To you, it may seem like just talk. Or, perhaps it is a faint promise of hope. Whatever the case, you and the others who listened to this myth give the sky a glance, and there you see it. A bright object with a trail of light behind it. The comet.

Somehow, as soon as you set your eyes on this comet, you know you are destined to find this Wish-Maker, whether you believe in the legend or not. What you don't know is that Primal Dialga's followers (the twisted Pokemon who actually decided to side with the corrupted deity) are also aware of this legend. And they are fully capable of finding out you are on a mission to find the Wish-Maker. The journey will be long and tough, full of trials and tests. Hostile Pokemon plagued with the same darkness Primal Dialga is are all about, more than ready to stop you. The followers are sure to be after you before long, and Primal Dialga itself could be lying in wait. However, if someone does not attempt it, the world could very well remain like this forever...

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So, I thought I'd make a MysteryDungeon-based RP and see if it lasts. I'd just like to make a few things clear, though, seeing as this RP's plot is a bit different from that of the game. The events of this RP are taking place as if the main character, partner, and Grovyle of PMD2 either never existed, failed to save the world, or otherwise weren't able to prevent the planet's paralysis. None of these characters will appear, either as NPCs or characters being RPed. Also, this is not human-being-turned-into-Pokemon, in case that needs clarification.

Anyways... Rules...

• All regular rules of Pokecommunity and the RPG forum apply. If you haven't read those I strongly reccomend that you do before even trying to make a sign-up.
• You can only sign up with one character.
  [*]I will be accepting five sign-ups for the "destined" Pokemon, and three sign-ups for followers of Primal Dialga. Hurry up if you want a slot, before yours gets taken! You can reserve a slot.
• I'm looking for literate RPers who know what they're doing. If I don't accept your sign-up or have a problem with your posts, it's probably because you need to be putting more effort in.
• Spelling and grammar is important. If your posts are full of typos and poor sentence-structure, there's going to be a problem.
• No legendary Pokemon; anything else is okay.
• Please, it's stated in the rules, but I can't stress this enough. No over-powered characters or actions. It's okay to be a Pidgeot or a Tyranitar, for example, but that doesn't mean you can just fly all the way to the main destination, or go around KOing Primal Dialga's minions effortlessly. Where's the fun in that?
• What's also stated in the rules is the four-line-limit. If your posts are right on that limit more than reasonably, I'll know you aren't putting in the required effort. Please, treat the four-line-limit as a minimum, not an abusable excuse to make posts lacking in detail or real purpose.
• If you haven't already, read the rules of the RPG forum and this RP! I can't stress this enough, because I've seen RPers who haven't read them. If you don't you're either not going to get accepted, or your posts will lack the proper quality and you will be kicked out of this RP.
• Have fun RPing! XD

And the sign-ups...

Name: Duh.
Gender: If it's a genderless species, simply put "None", or something along those lines.
Species: Any non-legendary Pokemon
Age: Also obvious.
Side: Is your character one of the Pokemon on the quest to find the WishMaker, or are they working for Primal Dialga?

Appearance: Give me detail. I'm not looking for "like a normal pikachu but darker fur and blue cheeks the end". A paragraph is the minimum. Not "four sentences", but a descriptive paragraph that you think is long enough to work for your character's appearance.

Personality: Same as above. Make it detailed as possible, and give me a minimum of a paragraph.

History: Depending on your character's age this can be long or small. Just not too small...

Other: Any extra info you'd like to add in?

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Here's the available character slots:

Destined-Questers ALL TAKEN/RESERVED.
Slot 1: Gummy (Cyrus/Charmeleon)
Slot 2: Lordscar (Reserved)
Slot 3: Toxic0345 (Trika/Sceptile)
Slot 4: Thesis (Roxanne/Sneasel)
Slot 5: CyndaquilMorph (Wobby/Wobbuffet)

Primal Dialga's Followers
Slot 1: Rubii Naruto (Rei/Raichu)
Slot 2: Darkly_the_flygon (Darkly/Flygon)
Slot 3: lvl99rayquaza (Reserved)

I have made the OOC-Thread, so if you have any questions or comments regarding this RP, please post them there.

THE RPG STARTS NOW! YAY! If you reserved and have not yet been accepted, you're still reserved and can catch up later. For now, it's time to post! ^^

 

[๒inaryקlastic]

Name: Trika Sugmori
Gender: Male
Species: Sceptile
Age: ???
Side: Wish Maker
Appearance: Trika looks like a normal Sceptile- at first. He has the same green skin and razor sharp blades sprotuing from his arms just like a Sceptile. He ussually carries a brown bag that hangs from his shoulder and dangles beside his waist. It contains many weapons and gadgets. He appears to look young but his eyes seem to be thousands of years old. Staring into them gives the feeling of emptiness. As if one was looking through his life...

Personality: He has a very mystyreious personality. He will occasionally ignore peoples comments if he is busy and can be somewhat arrogant but certainly not naive. He is very loyal and will do what he can to save anyone, no matter if they are freind or foe. He is quite intelligent and thinks on his feet. He seems to occasionally drift off as if he had left this world and his mind was focused on something else...

History: Trika has a very strange and long history. He grew up in the town of Tyruma. He was raised by Ambipoms as he was abbandoned at birth. He wondered off one day to discover that he was special. He was an ancient sub-species of Pokemon that live for ever. If he dies he will simply come back to life as another Pokemon.

He found others of his kind and worked with them to creat super weapons. Many of these he carries in his bag. Some of his best inventions were the Beam Ray, (Shoots any type of Beam... Hyper Beam, Auora Beam etc.) The Psy-Cam, (A camera that can be used by Psycic pokemon to communicate with others) and a Time & Space hopper (A device which can teleport him to any dimension, in any time, at any place.).

He traveled Time & Space helping people and battling his arch rival, Darkly the Flygon. He landed here by an accident and has no idea when or where he is...

Other: No... not really

 

[Vyro]

Name: Darkly
Gender:male
Pokemon Species:Flygon
age:???
Side: Primal Dialga
Appearance: He is a black and grey flygon with red eyes that can hypnotize other pokemon. he wears a black cape and he uses it to hide in the shadows, unfortunately, it does not work

Personality: He is an evil pokemon who is not as twisted as he looks. He would rather get is minions to destroy something, as he is sort of lazy. but that does not mean he is not strong. he is very powerful.

History: he was kicked out of his homeland for being oddly colored, and created a team, where all the members were shiny, they then took over Darkly's homeland with the help of a robot dialga that was built by glitchy, Dialga was impressed by this and made Darkly his advisor. throughout the many years that he has been alive, he has tried to blow up his rival, trika, with a laser called the zap o matic. he even once teamed up with him.

Other: Darkly is dark type insted of ground. he aslo has several minions. they are not important enough for their own sign ups. they are:


Glitchy: a porygon z, who makes many useless inventions. he is Darkly's assistant and usually goes everywhere with him.

Gary: a grovyle theif(not the grovyle from pmd2)

fat salamence: well... a fat salamence

sylvia: a froslass who is in love with Darkly, he does not love her back, and treats her bady.

 

[Gummy]

I've been looking for another good RP and I think I've found it. Mind if a reserve a Destined Questers spot?

 

[Zeta Sukuna]

Name: Rei
Gender: Male
Pokemon Species: Raichu
Age: Physically 17, Mentally 35 (As an effect of being the leader of a tribe), Chronologically: 1,819
Side: Primal Dialga

Appearance: Rei is a Raichu with red fur, but the lightning sacs are still yellow(Shiny appearance).
Rei has a big scar on his forehead, thanks to a Rebel pokemon trying to save the world, but that was a long time ago. Rei also has a necklace on, given to him by a mysterious figure.

Personality: Rei has a sort of sadistic personality, especially to his enemies.(anyone against Primal Dialga) But to his allies he is pretty calm towards(unless they annoy him). Even on his good days he can be evil as anyone can be. But he is usually as evil as they come. He is incredibly loyal to Dialga and would hunt down anyone who tries to hurt him.

History: Rei used to be a temple priest to a colony of pokemon who worshipped Dialga, being the priest, he had power over everyone in the tribe, but when the Palkia worshippers attacked Rei's colony, they were overpowered and captured. The Palkia worshippers froze Rei in a block of ice as his punishment but unknown to everyone, his electric powers kept him alive in hibernation. After Dialga went crazy, he freed Rei and since the Raichu worshipped him, and was incredibly powerful, Dialga gave Rei a spot as an elite agent(like Dusknoir was/is).

Others: Rei cannot be mind-controlled by anyone, not even Arceus or Primal Dialga. And Rei knows Reversal.

 

[Vyro]

oh, and Darkly is Dialga's advisor. so he is a higher rank than rei

 

[Zeta Sukuna]

Even if Darkly is at a higher rank then Rei, Rei is more powerful. (He has to be if he wants to keep large amounts of rebels at bay. But that's if we get accepted. Who knows, both of us might not be accepted.)

EDIT: Sort of... Darkly is at a higher rank, but if Rei wanted to, he could take over Darkly's spot. But Rei sees Darkly as a valuable ally, so why would he get rid of a possibly beneficial ally? Especially one that can team up with him and take a hit to the face from a rebel without crying. So I guess these two would be on good terms with each other. Would probably be friends if Rei was a little more sane. (Blame the Palkia worshippers.)

 

[Vyro]

so if rei is stronger... but Darkly has a higher rank... That wiuld make them just about even

 

[lvl99rayquaza]

Name: Blaze
Gender: male
Species: shadow charizard
Age: 36 (Due to the charmander's final evolution level requirement)
Side: Primal Dialga

Appearance: Blaze is A black charizard with crimson red eyes. He has gleaming silver armor. He is also afoottaller than normal charizard.

Personality: Blaze is rash due to his tortured past. His parents were killed during a war between electric types and fire types. Blaze swore revenge on thosewho helped in the killing.
History: Blaze has a tortured past dueto the fact that his parents were killed by elite electric type assassinswhen he was a charmander. He swore revengeon those that were involved. When Blaze becamea charizard he dominated the relm of fire.

Other: none

 

[Clark]

Toxic0345, NOT accepted, but there's only one reason, really: he's overpowered. In a world where everything has been thrown into darkness, technology would be very limited, and such weapons as what he has just seem a bit... much. Time-Travel and Dimension-Travel are the main issues, however, seeing as they would potentially allow him to reverse the whole plot from ever occuring. Just get rid of or change his items and it's good, however.

Darkly, NOT accepted. It needs much more description, for one. The minions are unneeded. He's overpowered with his technology as well. In a world like this, there is no such thing as lasers and robots. No even Primal Dialga would reasonably have access to such things; why would your character?

Gummy, you're RESERVED!

Rubii Naruto, ACCEPTED!

lvl99rayquaza, NOT accepted. Put more effort into it; a few sentences with poor grammer is not going to cut it.

And guys, there's no need to argue over who's a higher rank than the other. In-Character they can quarrel about it, as they'll likly be travelling to find the qyesters together, but ranks aren't important enough to worry about right now...

 

[lvl99rayquaza]

ok ill post a redo. ok now i am editing.
Name: Blaze
Gender: male
Species: shadow charizard
Age: 36 (Due to the charmander's final evolution level requirement)
Side: Primal Dialga

Appearance: Blaze is A black charizard with crimson red eyes. He has shining gold armor. Due to being a foot taller than other charizard he is feared and loathed by many. He has been in so many battles that he has earned the nickname the sky shadow of death.

Personality: Blaze is very rash and he loves to fight other pokemon. He hates to lose because he is very evil and if Blaze gets too angry he will destroy a village. Blaze has had a rough time due to the fact that he can destroy a village when enraged and he gets angry very easily. Some examples of his rage include burning down the charizard village and destroying Rei'shome village.
History: Blaze was a born fighter and he was born as a normal charmander. When he was still just a charmander he fought so much that he was even kicked out of his home village after this he went through special training to become a charmeleon and when he became a charmeleon primal Dialga asked him to join his army asa shadow charizard general. Blaze happily accepted the job and Primal Dialga turned him into a shadow charizard after intense training. When Blaze became a shadow Charizard he was able to work his way to shadow charizard general. Blaze oversees the battles that his troops are in and he is a mastermind when it comes to strategies. Blaze is called the sky shadow of death dueto the fact that hisstrategies involve sneak attacks and he is always involved. Blaze has a thirst for battles that was caused by his victories and for him a loss is worth the death penalty so he also hates to lose.

Other: Blaze's armor represents his military rank.
I'll add something else too a role play sample
role play example: Blaze looks around for any signs of the rebels.

"Shadow" said Blazer, "Scout for rebels, if you find any lure them into our trap."

"SIR YES SIR!" shouted Shadow. Shadow flies off to scout for any signs of the rebel troops.

oh you put Blaze onthe wrong side lol.

 

[Clark]

lvl99rayquaza, you still need more. I suppose your appearance is alright, but two sentences of personality...? Plus your History is not nearly full enough, and you should probably run this through a grammar-checker like MS Word to correct your spelling and captialization errors. Give it some time. Sit down when you have maybe thirty minutes to an hour and work on it. I'm not looking for RPers who just throw things together to get it done quickly; I'm looking for RPers who put literary effort into their posts.

Also, just a side-note, age doesn't equal levels. He could be under a year old considering he trained hard enough to evolve. He doesn't have to be over thirty-six years old to be a Charizard, unless you just want him to be thirty-six years old.

 

[lvl99rayquaza]

Oh i can read and type fine but my space bar sucks on occasion and i want Blaze to be 36 years old.

 

[Lordscar]

Name:Scar
Gender: male
Species:Empolen
Age: 12
Side: Wish Maker
Personalty:Nice, shy, hates to lose
Bio:When he was a baby piplup who cried and whined.Then when his parents died.He wanted to be alive and be a hero.He saw the primal dialga kill them.Now he wants to help the wish maker destroy primal dialga.When he evolved he trained and trained.When he evolved he got a scar on his back but can still do every thing.He has the braveness to try and defeat primal dialga.He has a very big heart.He will help any body except pokemon working for primal dialga.He is strong but wishes to be stronger.So he trains more often.He would go on quest the wish maker tells him too.He will do any thing for the wish maker.
Appearance:A empolen with a shiny silver armour.He also has a scar on his back.
other:he is a level 60

 

[lvl99rayquaza]

please reserve so i can get my description appearence to be better.

 

[Clark]

Sure, lvl99rayquaza. I'll reserve you. And I'm not saying you type bad in general; I'm just saying that your sign-up should be better than it was gramatically. I noticed plenty of capitalization errors and typos (and not really any space-bar-related errors...), so I needed to point that out.

Lordscar, NOT accepted. Did you even read the sign-up guidelines? How they were asking for descriptive, full-sentence paragraphs? Not to be rude, but that sign-up looks like it took you maybe two to five minutes and barely any effort. Next time, give it more time and more work, please.

EDIT: Okay. I've finished my sign-up, so I'm going to post it here...

Name: Terra
Gender: Female
Species: Nidorina
Age: Nine (which would equate to her being in her mid-twenties maturity-wise)
Side: Destined-Quester

Appearance: Unlike most Nidorinas, Terra has a relatively dark blue body. While her fur and skin isn't navy in color, it's a bit darker than a normal blue, and her spots are a deep indigo shade. Around her ears, there are thick clumps of blue fur, which would be soft to the touch if she ever actually allowed someone to touch her. The inside part of both ears is an earthy shade of scarlet-brown. Terra's eyes shine with an almost magical essense, and are the green of the forests long lost to this world. However, there same eyes are also full of fury and flare, hinting toward her tough, rash nature.

Personality: Terra is as stubborn as a rock. She acts as if she always knows best, and seems to believe her opinion is more important than anyone else's. Easily agitated and argumenitive when provoked, Terra isn't one who will let you get away with bothering her. This often leads others to see her as rude, bossy, and inconsiderate, and she may well be all of those things. But, if you ever were to tell her that, you could expect a few bruises and a poisonous sting instantaniously.

Despite her apparent flaws, though, Terra is a true companion once she familiarizes herself with others. Her quick temper and stubborn anger can be vented on her foes and enemies, making her into a tough, brute force to be trifled with. She is more than willing to fight for her friends as loyaly (and as aggressively) as she fights for herself. Surprisingly, in fact, with those who have surpassed the test of her attitude and managed to befriend her, she is very calm and level-headed (though she often may spout out an occasional rude remark or argumenitive comment). Few ever get to know this side of Terra, for obvious reasons.

History: Born to a pair of shy Nidorans, Terra was the only surviving kit in her litter. Her parents were almost completely reverted back to an instinctual, primitive way of life. They had no names they were known by, and lacked most actual language aside from small words like "run" and "danger". Early in her life, both of Terra's parents were killed by a rather elderly Infernape who went by the name of Sunbrand. Sunbrand refused to harm Terra, though, and decided to raise her with the knowledge that she wouldn't survive on her own. While Terra was too young to understand that her parents were killed as prey, she understood the Infernape had "murdered" them, and mistrusted him for days. Eventually, she came to eat from his hand out of starvation. Within a month it was as if her were her real father.

Sunbrand was a member of a small village forged by Pokemon with little to live for in the dark, timeless world. He took it upon himself to integrate Terra into this society, teaching her their language and cultures. This was how she came to mature, and while some Pokemon looked down upon her for being the daughter of "unintelligent wild Pokemon", she managed to make a living. By the time she had evolved into a Nidorina and was living on her own in the village, Sunbrand had died of old age. She didn't think much of this, though. She was independant now, and needed him about as much as she'd needed her real parents now (both of whom she had begun to consider 'pathetic').

A few uneventful years passed, during which she met few and spoke little, doing only as much as she needed to survive. One day, however, the village elder spoke of a myth; of a Legendary Pokemon and a wish and a comet. And when she looked up at the sky, her eyes widened. For there, just above, was a flying star, trailing light out behind it. She knew this was the beginning of something new, despite how insignificant and small she may have been in the grand scheme of things.

Other: None.

 

[Vyro]

Name: Darkly
Gender:male
Pokemon Species:Flygon
age:???
Side: Primal Dialga
Appearance: He is a black and grey flygon with red eyes that can hypnotize other pokemon. he wears a black cape and he uses it to hide in the shadows, unfortunately, it does not work.his wings look more like the wings of a salmence, and he can use them to whip up powerful windstorms. he can extend his claws, and breathe black fire. his red eyes burn with the fire of a pokemon who has been betrayed too many times.

Personality: He is an evil pokemon who is not as twisted as he looks. He would rather get is minions to destroy something, as he is sort of lazy. but that does not mean he is not strong. he is very powerful, but not nearly as strong as dialga. he is allies with the insane raichu, Rei, in fact, they are almost friends(but Rei is too insane) He hates everyone but Rei and Primal Dialga

History: He came from a distant island named Darkdix island, but he got banished for being too evil. he then trained for years, learning attacks that no flygon should ever know. he struck back at the people of the island, killing them all. he then decided to work for dialga, who made him his advisor. several years later, he met a sceptile named trika, who tried to stop his plans to destroy the world. the two have been rivals ever since.

Other: Darkly is dark type insted of ground.

I added muc more detail, and removed the technology and his minions

 

[Lordscar]

Can I be reserved?I am a good rper.I love doing that!

 

[Clark]

Sorry, Darkly, but it still isn't good enough. How is he evil? You never give any information as to what makes him such an evil Pokemon. Sure, he killed all the Pokemon of the island, but before that they banished him for being evil. What did he do that was so bad he had to be banished? There's grammar, capitalization, and spelling errors... You need to clarify his age... And not to mention, did you ask Ruubi Naruto or Toxic0345 if it was okay for their characters to have places in the history of yours? If these characters are going to have backstories that connect to one another, you should at least know the other RPers are okay with that...

And Scar, I'll reserve you, but you need to show me you're a good RPer. Right now, based on your sign-up, I'm under the impression that you are very new to this and need improvement. This isn't a bad thing; everyone starts somewhere. Just try to make it better and prove to me that you are good at this before you claim that you are.

 

[Zeta Sukuna]

I don't care if Darkly used Rei in his description.