Pokemon Neotic

Cursed

Godking Ragnarok CXVII
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    This is my first game, and while starting I kept asking "Why? Why make a pokemon game now?" Then it hit me. *Sticks head out car window to see something and hits head on mailboxes* I wanted to create myself a challenge. Rm2k3 was perfect. Here I am now.

    Story: The hero (you) was having an all-night movie party with his/her friends. When (s)he wakes up, (s)he's on the floor. As (s)he was waking up, a man named Mr. Toshiba calls for you. He lives in Mangrove forest. After getting on your gear, you go to the forest to meet him...

    Screen 1: Talking to your friend.
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    Features:
    15 Cursetendo promotions
    All new Neotic reigon
    Cipher returns
    New League rules
    All 390 pokemon

    Note: This game will be made using Rm2k3

    Yes, I'll take all the help I can get. I'll give credit.
     
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    The start of your plot sounds a little odd but it's OK. The map is far too plain though. Also you probably want to patch up your rm2k3 font.
     
    Of course it's plain, you were robbed.

    Edit: I fixed the font.
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    Ah, but, should't you give it the "robbed" feeling? Like, footprints, broken stuff, etc. It sounds nice, but the screen is too bare.
     
    Yeah, it looks plain, but also, you should add some borders to the room, to give it a pokemon feel. The room's too huge.

    The story sounds cool, but I don't really get the 'going to the forest to meet him' thing.

    Good luck with your game, though! :)
     
    You're right. I should at least get rid of the high-tech thingy. (Who would steal a bed and not a high-tech doohickey?)
     
    Well, techincally, yes, and make the "stolen" feeling act out. Foot prints, broken stuff, etc.
     
    I dropped the whole "Robbed" thing. I just have no way of making it work. Instead, this is the living/dining room.
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    I'm doing more work than I normally do in three days. Lol.
     
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    add a black border to the room to make it look better
     
    I think that you should work on filling up the map a bit more.
     
    He's not the hero, the guy below him is. His eyes are closed. I found Hiro's image buried in my old project pile.
    Edit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Photobucket is down!!!!!
     
    Sorry, I think I double posted. A screen of your bedroom/living/dining room.
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    Wow, a blind hero - Me likes, Me likes :P
     
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