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Pokemon New Dawn

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You couldn't even put in the image right ,_.

Looks decent I guess. But desert next to an ice place? Seriously.
 
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Um What Do You Your Mean By That?

Oh And There's A Reason For The Desert But I Really Don't Want To Reveal that yet.
 
Okay I'm Requesting Some Tile Spriters Anyone Who Want's To Help Make This Better Please Respond. (P.S Neo-spriteman what don't you like about it? Pros-Cons? Anything Can Help This Be Better.
 
Guys don't bail on this game yet, I'm helping coordinate the plot, and Pichuichu is right, Neo-Spriteman, its okay to say that you don't like it, but you should probably say WHY you don't like it
 
Update

Update!

Thanks To Carmaniac we have got a new menu system!

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Love the new thread design!
I believe New Dawn can make it to the showcase once we get moar screenies
 
New fakemon too big ._. please resize it to be smaller.
By a desert next to ice, I meant that can't happen and there probably won't be a good reason for it but if you PM me it I can clarify in the thread if you have a decent reason or not.

Also Don't Capitalize Every Word In A Sentence It's Redundant.
 
New fakemon too big ._. please resize it to be smaller.
By a desert next to ice, I meant that can't happen and there probably won't be a good reason for it but if you PM me it I can clarify in the thread if you have a decent reason or not.

Also Don't Capitalize Every Word In A Sentence It's Redundant.

the fakemon is in concept art, its not in sprite form, and the reason why there is a desert next to ice is on the first page
 
The reason kinda makes sense, but unless this game is happening RIGHT AFTER those events it would still have melted a bit.
I understand it's concept art, but if I can't view the entire image on my monitor that's a bad sign >_>
 
Well this a while after and the desert has fully formed.
Oh and does anyone know how to make more than two colour's semi-transparent.
 
If it's a while after, the heat would have melted the snowy place, sorry.
 
The Snowy Island Is Melting Slowly..... Part Of Storyline. "cricket....cricket..."
 
The Snowy Island Is Melting Slowly..... Part Of Storyline. "cricket....cricket..."

Gonna hafta agree with Poeman. Even if it's part of the storyline, those two islands are within miles of each other. Your storyline doesn't make it make anymore sense than it already DIDN'T. The gods sent down a beam and made one island a desert. because the trainers and rangers didn't get along? Why on EARTH would the gods care about that, especially enough to blast a whole ISLAND and turn it all barren and deserty? And since the Ice Age that apparently happened a while ago is over, that ice should STILL be melted. If it happened as long ago as you're implying, the ice should be gone. How long do you think it took to thaw out after the ice age? =_=. And if you wanna change it to the ice age being recent enough for the ice to still be there [how the hell are there humans already...], then even if the gods blasted that other island and made it a desert, it would've gotten snowed on again, seeing as that other island is still ice-tastic, meaning there's gonna be snow in that entire area.

I don't care HOW slowly the ice is melting, it would HAVE to be the same on both islands. You can't just take every illogical point in your story and fix it by saying "God/the gods did it." It doesn't work like that lmao.
 
Okay I'll Change That Part. But There Is A Reason For The Desert Now Being A Permanent Desert.
 
We read the reason, and it doesn't make any sense that's what we're trying to get across.
 
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