Pokemon: New Moon

[Relevant]

New Moon*
Subject to change.

Hi everyone, you may now me from around the forums. I'm MetalGardevoir, or .Kairi. I'd like to introduce my new game, Pokemon: New Moon.

I've overlooked games here for quite awhile, and I've decided it's my time to shine. I've created the story that you will (hopefully) soon read. I thank you fro reading this rather boring section of the thread.

Plot:

Two millenium before the human race was born, a small egg lurked in the dark caves of the lonely, barren world. It was glowing a bright green color, and had two small red dots on the sides. The egg itself was a light shade of yellow, and had blue spots on the top. 1 millenium before the human race was born, the egg hatched. And out came a small fairy, the first pokemon ever to have seen the pokemon world. It was a small, crying fairy baby, with no mother or father. It had no wings, just a small, squishy grey body, and on top of that, a small helmet of sorts, in the yellow color as was on the egg, with blue ribbons on the top of this yellow thing. After three weeks of crying hopelessly and waddling and searching for food, it started floating places. Soon, it was a full powered psychic master. It would become a strong pokemon one day. But that day was too late. An evil living deep inside the earth, or pokemon world, noticed sudden power on the earth, and was stuck to it. It destroyed the pokemon, just for it to be the top powerful source on the world. But the hatched pokemon was not entirely defeated. It curled into a small ball, and the egg reformed around. Then, it rest, sleeping almost three milenium, and while the human race was ruling the earth, the pokemon was born, once again. Jirachi.

Other:

Thanks for reading, Plot's subject will probably completely change soon. C&C if you will.​

 

[Blazers]

I like this a lot.
Great imagination.
How many new pokemon are you looking to include?

 

[Ven]

Wow, You're plot is really well written, I hope to see features soon.
But, well what's the story? Who is the player? What does Jirachi, or the dark pokemon have to do with the players life?
You have a great backstory written, so I can't wait to see you build on that.

 

[Relevant]

I'm serious to say, I did not expect these comments. Thanks so much. Also, the player's background will be revealed later today. A few features will also be left for public viewing. For now, I'm on a bad computer, which cannot do much. May I mention this will be made in RMXP, and there will around 65 of the original pokemon and 100 new pokemon to boot. If the worst case scenario happens and I can't find good spriters, it will be a fakemonless game. I'm hoping I do find a spriter, becuase a few of the fakemon will go with the plot.

Again, thanks for the wonderful comments. You've made my day. ^^;