Pokemon:Ocean Blue

Cool Squirtle

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    Ocean blue version

    You'll See The Adventure Of Sane!
    First Sane He Wakes Up In The Morning and goes to professer Benny.
    The Professer Offers Sane a to keep a pokemon.(You Have to pick Mudkip,Torchic,Treeko,or Pikachu)Then you go to your house and team Atlas are there! Thats as much as i did in the game.

    If You Will Like To Be In The Game I'll Gladly Fill You In!

    People Left To Be:
    Trainers:as many

    Gym leaders:6 left
    There Are Nine Gyms

    Elite Eight:8 Left (new guys)
    (They Are Like Elite 4 But There Are 4 More Guys Added)

    Team moon:12 left(good guys. including the boss! the first one to be the boss better add them selves to team moon first!)

    The Rival:1 Rival left(better hurry 1 girl Left)

    Form to be a:

    Trainer:
    Name:
    Pokemon:
    Walking Sprite:
    Battle Sprite:

    Gym Leader:
    Name:
    Pokemon:
    Walking Sprite:
    Battle Sprite:
    Gym Badge name:

    Elite 8:
    Name:
    Pokemon:
    Walking Sprite:
    Battle Sprite:

    Team Atlas:
    Name:
    Pokemon:
    Walking Sprite:
    Battle Sprite:

    Rival:
    Name:
    Pokemon:
    Walking Sprite:
    Battle Sprite:

    These Are The Screenshots
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue


    (Demo will be coming soon!)
     
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    The name's not very original but then again alot of names on this forum aren't. The starter Pokemon are a little...odd. It is pretty much obvious that everyone is going to choose Torchic over a weak Lotad and a one evo Zigzagoon. A few screenshots would be nice as well. How many gym leaders are there gonna be? And why is there an Elite 8? Just a few things that got me curious... Any on another note:
    Gym Leader
    Name: Phoenix
    Pokemon: Magmar, Charmeleon, Magcargo
    Walking sprite: I'll add later
    Battle sprite: I'll add later
    Gym Badge Name: Inferno Badge
     
    Cool, someone can take the place of a rival? I guess that's something new, I want to see if I can fill that spot.

    Rival
    Name: Sage
    Pokemon: (Reserved for whatever starter I get), Charmander, Bagon, and whatever would you think would be best for the rival to have.

    Sprite: Use the white haired guy
     
    Gym Leader: Mage (fits in with the whole scheme, eh?)
    Pokemon: Meh, I don't care. Give me some cool ones.
    Walking Sprite: Again, give me a cool mysterious one
    Battle Sprite:Just find some picture of a ring wraith from LOTR
    Gym Badge name: M3 Badge (Magic, mystery, mayhem)

    You don't have to use me if you want ;) I know the above isn't the coolest :)
     
    I'll supply the Chipset later ^_^

    Leader's Name - Soushi
    Leader's Gym Type - Poison
    Leader's Pok?mon - Nidorina, Nidorino, Venomoth, Ditto (What ever level's you'd like)
    Leader's Badge - VENOMBADGE
    Leader's Gym - Anything you'd like, but, I came prepared and the inside of my gym, if you'd like it is this:

    Poison Gym - Inside should have as many floors as you'd need, one trainer on each floor. Upon reaching th Gymleader, than then no other Gym will be used.

    If you need help on naming Cities, or anything else I can help you ^_^.. Actually I have an Idea, Since it's Ocean Blue, you should name it after different shades of Blue ^_^.
     
    Sharpedo said:
    Hey squirtle, did you play sun version? Because i recognise the battle background. I've mirrored it for my game. You could've ask instead of just stealing from my game
    Click to expand...

    Sorry Sharpedo for stealing your battle background.


    phoenix316 said:
    the maps need alot of work. Look how big the rooms are and how many objects are in there. Use the black tiles to make a border around the rooms.
    Click to expand...

    Thnx for letting me know. i'll fix it.
    oh yeah, may i use your new pkemon for my game? i'll give you credit.


    oh yeah and please give me ideas,everyone.
     
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    Well, the screenshots look alright. If there's onw thing I have to point
    out though is the fact that the NPC in the intro is too small compared to the
    screen. Try adding a picture event instead.
     
    Elite 8
    Name: ken
    Pokemon: Umbreon, Blaziken, Pikachu, Hitmontop
    Trainer battle sprite:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue

    trainer walking sprite:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:Ocean Blue


    Text:kid, your gonna wish you never came here....
     
    I'm downloading now. It seems you might be the first to get a demo listed in the new sticky thread. Anyways, I'll give you my evaluation after I've played it through.

    EDIT-

    Here's my evaluation.

    This may be hard to hear, but it's really just constructive criticism.

    You need to work on several things:

    Dialogue- The conversations he had with several NPCs were very poor. The talks he had with his mom after Team Atlas fled was really quick. It also didn't seem like a child and mother were talking to each, but rather two strangers.

    Map Design- The maps are really not interesting-looking and it seemed like you took only 5 minutes to complete the first town. The rooms of the houses are too big. The gym looks really poor too. You should really "spruce" it up a bit.

    Grammar- The grammar is extremely bad. Check your spelling, and how you use your words. You should also capitalize when needed. This should improve how the dialogue looks 10 times more.

    Storyline- The demo was quite quick, due to the lack of story. Right when I played it, I had my Pokemon within at least 5 seconds. Try to improve the storyline a bit.

    I also noticed that one of the trainers in the gym had a Baby Onyx. If I'm not mistaken, one of the PC members here created that. I hoped you asked for permission to use it. That's all I have to say. I hope you didn't take it too hard. It was just all constructive criticism which should help you in the long run.
     
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    Well, seeing how PKMN_Sage evaluated this, I'm not expedcting much at all.
    But I'll look to the bright side and give you my evaluation later.

    -EVALUATION-
    1. In the systems tab put your fonts to Ms Gothic.
    2. It's not that easy to find out where the teleports are.
    3. Story isn't too interesting
    4. Some tile settings are wrong. (you can only go one direction in some tiles)
    5. Everything else Sage said
    6. Good for starters.
     
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    I'm sorry to say it but I agree with Sage and Daegon. Me and Daegon gave you advice earlier in the thread about your map design and intro scene and you didn't use it. Play the Pokemon games again and pay attention to the size of the buildings as well as the objects in them. There is no need to use the dbs when there is a cbs publicly available. I'm guessing that this is your first game because you've only got the very basics in there. Play some of the demos that are floating around this site like Pokemon Lunar, Liquid, Rusty II and Orre to get some idea of building up an intro scene and map design.
     
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