Pokemon on the go.

[PoketronHacker]

Pokemon on the go

As the Magikarp swim far and wide,
the great Onix are using bide,
The Heracross fall from the trees,
honey is being created by Combees,
the Wingull fly in the blue skies,
as Bonsly use there fake cries,
the Jigglypuff sing people to sleep,
and people tell of the ancient Lileep,
So now as far as the people know,
Pokemon are on the go.

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Your lines all rhyme, which is a positive start. But there is no rhythm whatsoever, which would be OK, except for the fact that I can tell it's supposed to have rhythm. Try adding a word or two, or taking one away to make it fit nicely. The actual poem isn't very long; this isn't necessarily a bad thing. In your case, however, it doesn't help. I can see what you're trying to achieve, but it needs a bit more expansion.

As for mechanics, the start of a line warrants capitalisation, as do Pokemon moves like Bide. You got 'there' and 'their' mixed up in line 6, as well. Other than that, not bad. In a nutshell, just capitalise things, learn your homonyms, and expand.