Pokemon Revamped Red Version

[RikuCrafter]

Would I be able to be your grammar nazi? I'm making a Firered remake so the text will be similar :D

 

[mustafa505]

Would I be able to be your grammar nazi? I'm making a Firered remake so the text will be similar :D

Thx i really need one because i suck at grammer :(.

BTW heres V2 of the P.C:

 

[RikuCrafter]

Ok, I'll pm you contact details. Send me what you've got so far (you type your text, I'll edit it into Australian grammar [I'll use American spellings])

 

[mustafa505]

Pewter City Update:

The windows are bit odd, going to change them.

 

[Lord Varion]

Looks good, kind of like HG/SS pewter city though......

 

[Ratty524]

Pewter City Update:

The windows are bit odd, going to change them.

The shading of the roof looks off. It doesn't give an indication of planes. One side of the roof should be darker while the other side lighter.

Here is an example:

Spoiler:

Notice how the light is hitting the sides of the roof on this structure? Try to emulate something like this.

 

[mustafa505]

Looks good, kind of like HG/SS pewter city though......

Yes its HGSS Pewter city devamped in R/B/G Style.

@ Ratty
Thx heres a new version of pewter city house:

ihave made it smaller to match other houses and fit in R/B/G style. :D

 

[Ratty524]

That looks much better. Nice work.

 

[mustafa505]

I am thinking of making this pallet town music in the game Credits goes to TheGuitahHeroe From Youtube heres a link so you can hear it and tell about it :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VqsU...hspwrt2lkG-HUBcFeeLElLS51pfa1jg&feature=inbox

 

[mustafa505]

Update i revamped some indoor tiles:

The fr/lg tiles will be removed.

 

[KoolKat vs. Lucas]

I made similar sprites that are of Gold/Ethan.

 

[AquaticWartortle]

Cool! I like how you really reintroduced the R/B/Y overworld sprites! :)

 

[Lord Varion]

I think the inside looks great as it is now :3