Pokemon Rubralphirre Sprite Comic

[PokéPlayer3]

Hi guys! Here is Poképlayer with a sprite comic to us! :)

Is it Pokémon Rubralphirre. It is the history of Brendam and May with his rivals Wally and April.
Theres the first comic, remember to reply if possible! :)

 

[Ice1]

Work on your english, please, I don't understand the dialogue. Luckily the images made clear what happened

 

[PokéPlayer3]

Thanks, i will do my best :)

 

[Fairy]

Hi there! I'm glad your excited about showcasing your work here! :)

You've got a bit of work to do to make this the best comic it can be. Your English needs some sprucing up, and your story needs a bit of exposition. I recommend giving us an idea of why these things are happening and what's going on in your comic.

If you can fill us in on some of these details, that'd be great. :)