Ruby hack: Pokemon SnowY GoD

[Sharanza]

.:: Hack Name ::.
Pokemon SnowY GoD : Mystery FUTURE!

.:: Hack of ::.
Pokemon Ruby

.:: Introduction ::.
This is the second hack of Lvh(la virginty hackers) cuz first one ( Pokemon azul islands) was corrupted.

.:: Story ::.
You play as Ash Or Hikari. You Start in The destroyed town Panama.
In your hause you see a pokebal and you take it. In that pokebal is your Eevee.
Then you have to Find a mistery cave where Palkia lives....( i wll update story soon)

.:: Features ::.
New Pokemons(4gen)
New Region
New starter( only Eevee)
New Tiles
New paletts
New Scripts
New Gymladers
Etc

.:: Team (optional) ::.
Mapper: Knaspergold
Palette Changer: Knaspergold
Scripter: Osris
Text Editing: Knaspergold , Osris, Mystah

.:: Screenshots ::.

 

[scf]

you spelled eevee incorrectly but other than that it looks pretty good so far

 

[Kamui]

looks nice:)
is it ur first hack??

 

[calumoh]

you spelled eevee incorrectly but other than that it looks pretty good so far

lol u knew what he meant...
and if i may give some constructive criticism, i think the maps need a bit more variety, for example i think there are too many flowers and trees that look the same, apart from that though, the story sounds interesting, and so does all of that new stuff
anyways good luck with it

 

[KoBRe LaiR]

hmm.. i have to agree with the flower and tree uses. your using too much of those florwers in your first map and in my opinion if the whole game was like that i would not play it.
try using a variety of lanscaping tiles. like some ground shading and try getting rid of the small trees as well. Aside from those, the way you are setting up the houses could be improved. Having a house in the back of another is not always "cool" but if you know how to set it up, it can look okay. Your storyline looks alright but as you said, you need more. It's not too catchy since most hacks begin with that. You start in a new town... so an so... get a new pokemon and go battle someone... try being more creative.
But just try doing a few changes on your mapping and I think your hack will be okay.

 

[Sharanza]

hmm.. i have to agree with the flower and tree uses. your using too much of those florwers in your first map and in my opinion if the whole game was like that i would not play it.
try using a variety of lanscaping tiles. like some ground shading and try getting rid of the small trees as well. Aside from those, the way you are setting up the houses could be improved. Having a house in the back of another is not always "cool" but if you know how to set it up, it can look okay. Your storyline looks alright but as you said, you need more. It's not too catchy since most hacks begin with that. You start in a new town... so an so... get a new pokemon and go battle someone... try being more creative.
But just try doing a few changes on your mapping and I think your hack will be okay.

Yes i will change those maps and there will be many changes in the stroy and game
just wait some days :D
i will upload some new screens later today:D

Arekkusu Rizu: You are spriter right??:D
if you are can you pm me plz cuz i need your help

 

[KoBRe LaiR]

Call me KoBRe.
And as for your question. Yes I sprite, ROM Hack, Map, and all there is.
But yeah just PM with your question.

 

[MewThree7500]

Mapping is terrible. Some tiles used way too much. But I do like the tiles you decided to use.:)

 

[Sharanza]

a video i have made
in this video i will show you how to evolv eevee into glacia

click here

 

[Enter-Shikary]

Finally i'm back
i like your hack knasper i can help you whit mapping if you want
and i can sprite too
anyway awesome work bye
c ya

 

[O.G. Duke]

not bad, man. I like the idea...haha

 

[Green Charizard]

Looks good, some nice ideas and some very nice work ;) Good luck

 

[SephirothX]

Looks great so far, except the grass needs some work. Keep up the good work!

 

[~Jack~]

looks good , but it needs work

~Jack 1~

 

[Pierrot.]

Looks pretty spiffy, but a couple of questions and criticisms - firstly, what is Corp? Err. Secondly, why Palkia? Just wondering. And thirdly, the flowers. asdfgh They look like rugs.

One last thing: On one style of building, there are some bricks that look out of place. Just a slight cosmetic error, but it would look better changed.

Good luck!

 

[DarkArcz]

@Sharanza: Maybe Im dumb on in-depth Pokemon stuff or sumthin but whats Palkia? So far the only pokemon whos name sounds close to that is Parukia...or is that Palkia? Or is Palkia a Fakemon? Please elaborate. I'm guessing that all you said in the first post isn't the whole plot? Cuz there was no plot stated....just how the game begins. I don't want you to spoil the whole story but at least give us some insight...Aside from that everythin' else is OK. Did you make those flowers yourself? Don't let them stick to each other so close. It doesn't seem natural, scatter them around a bit.

@Pierrot: Im no grammar freak but I think Corp is short for Corporation.

 

[Sharanza]

@Sharanza: Maybe Im dumb on in-depth Pokemon stuff or sumthin but whats Palkia? So far the only pokemon whos name sounds close to that is Parukia...or is that Palkia? Or is Palkia a Fakemon? Please elaborate. I'm guessing that all you said in the first post isn't the whole plot? Cuz there was no plot stated....just how the game begins. I don't want you to spoil the whole story but at least give us some insight...Aside from that everythin' else is OK. Did you make those flowers yourself? Don't let them stick to each other so close. It doesn't seem natural, scatter them around a bit.

@Pierrot: Im no grammar freak but I think Corp is short for Corporation.

Look Palkia is Parukia ok?
and yes i wiil update my story
and DarkArcz you have right Corp is Corporation

 

[tibiot]

Nice video.
Good luck with it ;)

 

[Sharanza]

i Have changed the name of my hack to Pokemon Snowy GoD
and also i have change the paletts of my hack to this one
have look:

coments plz :D

 

[Pazuzu]

Thread title was changed from 'Pokemon Corp : LOP' to 'Pokemon Snowy GoD', as requested.