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Pokemon- Souls of One [PG-14] (SU's are Open!)

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Drako the Black Dragon - I loved the Sign-Up and how it is different than the others which is great, you may want to change your Pokémon to a Psychic Type however, as you are long ranged and Blaziken is more suited for Close Combat, however this is optional and you are: ACCEPTED.

Cass - The gender of the human does not reflect the gender of the Soulmon, my Soulmon is a Female but I am Male. So just to make things less complicated and to make it easier to speak and refer to your character, please make the character a female as you stated you would refer to the character as a 'she' anyway.

Drako the Black Dragon - You deleted your post so...I don't know why but, you're not accepted then, until you re-post.
 
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Yes. Yes, I see your point, and I understand. I overreacted a tad because I found it strange to think of changing up a character I have been using for so long. But, I don't really mind, now that I've gotten used to thinking about Sissy as a full-fledged female. Also, the trainee spot is fine and I will lower my character's age to match it. The Ditto, Claudes, will be Genderless but called a "he" as I already stated. Sissy will be a female, instead of intersexual.

I sincerely apologize for my inability to observe it from a logical point of view and only from my stubborn wishes to have Sissy stay the way she's always been. Thank you for taking the time to explain your thought process to me. It was quite helpful and it calmed me down enough to re-think properly. Changing something trivial like gender shouldn't be such of a problem. Again; I'm really sorry.

Editing now. ^_^
 
@Cass Accpected Everyone gets like every now and then, dont' worry about it. ^_^ I'm glad that you decided to stick around. I'm sure you'll really enjoy this RP.
 
Cass: Like Charzeon said, don't worry =D We are just happy you have you on the RP.
 
Sabios: I'm assuming you have cleared up what you were asked by Charzeon, if that is the case, you are accepted. Leaving only one more space before the RP begins. So come on people, sign-up.
 
Charles "Ace" Hentari

Age:16

Long black hair, wear's white trench coat nothing under except white pant's

he was raised by lucarios in a small side street

use a bow staff for self-protection

him and his friend a lucario get in trouble a lot because there misunderstood stood
 
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Mocky The Lucario: Is this a serious sign-up =S If so then...you have to add ALOT more detail as well as fill in the template provided on the first post. You completely ignored all requirements and due to that: DECLINED.
 
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Mocky The Lucario: Is this a serious sign-up =S If so then...you have to add ALOT more detail as well as fill in the template provided on the first post. You completely ignored all requirements and due to that: DECLINED.
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Sorry...i'm a noob sorta so i put what i thought was needed
 
That's okay, just re-do the sign-up please.
 
I edited my application. I normally do not write as bad as I did, but I just wanted to get all of my thoughts written down.
I hope I make it into the rp!
 
Sabios: If you have provided the information Charzeon requested that means you are: ACCEPTED. Taking the third Long Rang spot leaving only one position left.

PinkPanther8U: Very good, now only one last thing needs editing and you are accepted. That is your Soulmon. He/she needs to be a fully evolved creature due to the fact we have passed training. So changed your Soulmon to a fully evolved Pokémon and you will be accepted.

Once PinkPanter8U changes what has been asked, we can start the RP when Charzeon returns :]
 
Name: Charles "Ace" Hentari
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance: Hair color: black
Hair length:to chest
Clothing:White Pants
Eyes:green
Teeth: canine teeth larger then normal
Personality: Quite doesn't talk much. Loyal takes orders easily. Gets pissed off easily if Sara gets hurt.
Weapon(s): Bow staff
Job: Scout
History: His mother died at birth. When he was 5 his dad killed himself. When him and his soulmon were on the street a family of lucarios whose people died they made a small shack for them. They where vary grateful.when they were begging for change, a man came and ask them to join them.

They were 10 they started training. They were surprisingly agile, while other children were doing the monkey bars in 2 minute. They were doing it in 1 minute. They had test's done on them but the doctors couldn't find any thing weird. They were assigned to be scouts prematurely.


Name: Sara
Species: Lucario
Gender: Female
Appearance: White fur instead of blue and yellow.
Blue eyes
Personality: Laid back and only follows Ace's orders.
Loses control of her powers some times.
Gets startled easily.
 
I edited the soulmon.
And i added a power and a weapon to my character that allows her to be a long range fighter.
Charzeon told me to do that so i obliged. C:
 

Mocky The Lucario: I honestly do not think an RP this serious is right for you right now, you would be better joining another that has a lower standard, no offense but you need to work on your RPing skills and there is no better way then RPing itself.

PinkPanther8u: Your sign-up was brilliant and your character seems interesting, I love the way we all have dramatic life stories and personalities that clash. It will be fun to see how our characters get on with eachother, so without further ado: ACCEPTED.

And that means...we have no places left. So when Charzeon returns, this RP can start xD
 
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Mocky The Lucario: I honestly do not think an RP this serious is right for you right now, you would be better joining another that has a lower standard, no offense but you need to work on your RPing skills and there is no better way then RPing itself.
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there arent any starting this one looked really cool
 
Mocky The Lucario: I understand that but PinkPanther8U worked really hard on her sign-up and I am not going to deny her because you really like this one. We are not discussing this, feel free to sign-up in the future however when more spots are available.
 
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Mocky The Lucario: I understand that but PinkPanther8U worked really hard on her sign-up and I am not going to deny her because you really like this one. We are not discussing this, feel free to sign-up in the future however when more spots are available.
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put both of us in then i dont understand why you cant
 
@lucario - because the rp is prolly really detailed and charchic doesnt want to mess it up. and there will be other RPs, just be patient and they will come

@ charchic - thank you SOO much for accepting my application, im excited to see what happens C:
 
Mocky The Lucario: Basically, this RP is already planned out by Charzeon and I and the number of people in the RP are that particular number for a reason, the number of Long Rangers, Close Combat etc. It is all part of the RP and we cannot change it, especially me as I am not the owner I am mearly the co-owner of the RP.

But that is besides the point, your RP does not fit the standard requirements already as once again you ignored what I asked and ignored the first post, I will high-light the major problems:

Appearance: We had a template for signing up as everyone who has signed up, filled in and this is not in the template.
Hair Color: Okay, any other details, is the hair wavy or curly, do you have highlights etc.
Hair Length: And this is the last of the appearence other than eyes and teeth. Okay so how tall is he, what colour skin, any scars? These are all details that need to be taking into account.
Clothing: You simply put, white pants, so am I write in assuming he wears, no shoes or socks? No t-shirts, no coats? Yet he is as war he is half-naked...Now all I see is a typical character, no personality to him.
Eyes: You said Green, what shade of Green? Light green or dark green? Eyes are a nice way to personalise your character..."Green" is not.
Teeth: You put, Canine Teeth are larger than usual...okay? What revelance does this have to the RP. If you wish to include teeth you could have included more details, are they straight or do you have braces, are they large or are there hardly any teeth at all.
Personality: Doesn't like to talk and is easily pissed off...That is honestly, very boring. You need to give your character more of a real personality, what does he like, what does he hate, what smells and foods and colours does he like, every person has a PERSONality and you should be prepared to give your character one whilst RPing.

There are a lot of problems with your sign-up and I am addressing these to help you in RPing in the future, however, you will not be joining this RP, the sign-ups are closed, and there is no room left.
 
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