pokemon symphonia

[Xiaphear]

i just randomly came up with a pokemon story that involves one or two tales of symphonia carecter's......
i made a "test version" this is about the first comic i ever made....i'll make continue's
in a better result.....i hope anyway here it is and i take a cast ^ ^

first "test" eppy: Alian attack


good or...not.....as i said i'm in search off a cast

 

[Decepticon]

so its going to have 2 ToS characters in it? o_O;
are they the aliens then?
looks good so far but i need to see more to get a idea of what its going to be like...

 

[Dragon-Chan]

Put Kratos in! Put Kratos in!

 

[DrCoolSanta]

good but make the next one better i know you can

 

[Draik]

Horrible. When will the world know that Mr. Shift Key and Mr. Puntuation mark ever need a cameo xD a.k.a. The grammar is bad. Also, it's pretty unfunny.

 

[Xiaphear]

-_-
maybe because it my first ever made comic.....
anyway here's the second eppy:
its better!
eppy #2

 

[Draik]

Horrible. When will the world know that Mr. Shift Key and Mr. Puntuation mark ever need a cameo xD a.k.a. The grammar is bad. Also, it's pretty unfunny.

See bold. Your grammar is still horrible. Grammar needs to be good in comics.

 

[Esupio]

never EVER use emticons in speech and your grammar is terrible and saying "its my first comic" is no exscuse, FR/LG Continued was and still is signomi's first comic.

 

[Xiaphear]

OKAY i'm dutch ok?
i'm still learnin good english....so please only good comments from now on!
SHEESH
it not my fault that i'm not born english.....
and you can read it , can you? so plz dont mind the grammar
*steaming red*

 

[Draik]

The people in Holland still use normal capitalization and puntuation I believe.

 

[Silon]

 

[Jedite1000]

yu didnt say anythin silon...oh well any way i do like ur comic..i speically like that mantis alien ..for me i dont care if someone got bad grammer i olny care about the story...so keep going its good

 

[Xiaphear]

An other episode ready:
eppy # 3

i hope you'll like it

 

[Silon]

Second Last Box, above the two big sprites. "casting intrest of a young rocket pion: Silon"

 

[Xiaphear]

uhm yeah what's wrong with it?

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

OKAY i'm dutch ok?
i'm still learnin good english....so please only good comments from now on!
SHEESH
it not my fault that i'm not born english.....
and you can read it , can you? so plz dont mind the grammar
*steaming red*

yeah...dutch...I don't see whats wrong with the grammer.
and I would like to join.

can you put the comics in the frist post? so people don't have to search though the whole thread to find eppys.