[Pokémon] pokemon the diamond and the pear

[wamini]

This is a thread for my on going pokemon fan fic. It is about a trainer who is the son of a hero, that traveles the world to become a pokemon master.

i hope you enjoy :)

 

[wamini]

A storm was brewing over the region of Sinnoh in the where down below in the cave of lake verity something sinister was going on, a group of mischiefs called team galactic were trying to capture the legendary Masprit, the gaurdian of lake Verity, but all wasnt going to plan.
Mesprit: leave this place or i shall make you.
Grunt1: oh my god, whats going on.
Galactic leader: come on guys we have to get this pokemon to the boss.
Grunt2: i dont think we can its way to strong and its knocked all our pokemon out.
Galactic leader: stop this nonsense and move out my way, its my turn
In that one of the Galactic members, which seemed to have a higher authority over the rest trew a pokeball up in the air and out came the pokemon Toxicraok.
Galactic leader: allright toxicraok use Poison jab and at the speed of light he flew toward Mesprit and his her dirct on.
Mesprit fell to the ground and was screaming out in pain, but suddenly out of nowhere came a mysterious trainer wearing a red hat, a yellow and blue jacket, black jeans and red trainers said.
???: leave that pokemon alone now.
Galactic leader: hahahahaha! what do you take me for, a fool.
???: a fool huh, not he axact words i would use but that will have to do, allright go empoleon.
Then the mysterious trainer thrown a pokeball up in the air and out comes an Empoleon.
???: allright empoleon use hydro cannon.
Empoleon sends out a huge blast of water out of its mouth and hits Toxicroak dead on and Toxicraok flys back and smashes of the wall.
Galactic leader: HUH! OH NO TOXICROAK, GET UP NOW!
Toxicroak was to hurt and just lays there still.
Galactic leader: return Toxicraok, wh...wh...who are you.
???: Me my names Lucas and dont you forget it.
In that the team galactic members were gone.
Mesprit flew up to Lucas and said.
Mesprit: thankyou Lucas i will never forget you.
Mesprit then turns into a pink glowing ball and fly's deep down in the depths of lake verity.
Lucas: well done Empoleon, now take a rest.
lucas returns his pokemon and walks of out the cave and into the sunset.

 

[wamini]

A couple of years after the lake verity incident, Lucas had fallen in love with proffessor elms daughter called lyra from newbark town in the jhoto region. They decided to get married and settle down on Lucas's old pokemon ranch in the sinnoh region just outside Floroma town. After there first year living there Lyra fell pregnant and gave birth to a young healthy boy and named him Matty. He grew up on the farm and helped out with the chores like helping out cleaning the stable and grooming the pokemon and at times lucas even let him battle with some. Ten years passed and it was Matty's time to start his journey as a pokemon trainer.
Lyra: Matty wake up.
Matty: huh, Oh, morning mum.
Lyra: Morning honey, remember todays the big day.
Matty: i know, i start my journey today.
Lyra: well you arnt going anywhere with those filthy clothes on, go and wash up and ill get your breakfast ready.
Matty: ok mum ill be ready in half an hour.
Matty rushes of and jumps into the shower.
Lyra: oh and remember to brush your teeth.
Matty: Ok mum.
Lyra walks downstairs and into the ktchen where lucas was sitting.
Lyra: Morning dear.
Lucas: morning bab, is Matty up.
Lyra: yeh hes just in the bathroom cleaning up.
Lucas: well he better be quick we have to leave in an hour.
A half and hour later Matty comes running down the stairs and into the kitchen.
Matty: hey guys, is breakfast ready?
Lyra: yes it is here you go.
lyra passes matty a plate with pancakes, bacon and syrup on.
Matty: yay my fave.
Lyra: i know, thats why i made it.
Lucas: hurry matty we need to catch the train to Sandgem town in half an hour.
Matty: ok ill hurry up.
Matty scofs the food down, and goes to get his shoes on.
Matty: come on then dad its time to go.
Lucas: yes im coming.
Lyra runs to Matty and gives him a big hug. After releasing him she says.
Lyra: ok hunny have you got your lunch and everything.
Matty: mum it isnt school im going on my journey as a pokemon trainer.
Lyra: i know i just want you to be safe.
Matty: ill be fine mum, i will have my pokemon.
Lyra: haha well ok then good bye.
Lyra grabs matty and gives him loads of hugs and kisses.
Lucas: it will be allright dear hell be with me and plus im taking empoleon.
Lyra: good she will keep you safe.
Matty: allright bye bye mum.
Lyra: i love you.
Matty and lucas walk down the garden path and down the raod to the train station, lucky it was only down the road.
Lucas: are you allrady matty.
Matty: yeh dad ill be fine.
Lucas: just remember it is a hard world and you could get hurt.
Matty: well it wont be an adventure without a bit of pain.
Lucas: hahaha thats my boy, you keep saying that and you will be fine.
Matty: hehe.
Suddenly Lucas got a message from proffesor Elm in the jhoto region saying, "hello, lucas i need you to come to Jhoto emediatly, we have a crisis on our hands". Lucas looks at his phone and replied, "ill be right there".
Lucas: hey son, ive gotta go to the jhoto region for a little while to help grandpa out, will you be allright to get to sandgem on your own.
Matty: yeh sure dad, this will be a good time to let me think of what occupation i wannt to do, what are they again?
Lucas: well there is pokemon ranger, pokemon coordinator or a pokemon trainer.
Matty: well ranger is way off hehe, i might do both coordinating and training.
Lucas: sounds like a good idea.
Matty: doh, now what am i going to think about.
Lucas: im sure youl think of summin.
Matty: yeh.
After a moment of silence they reach the train station and luckily the train just pulled in. It was the New Trainers Express, it was a train that takes you to Sandgem town.
Lucas: well here you go, have you got everything.
Matty: yeh thanks dad.
Lucas: well not everything.
Matty: huh!
Lucas goes into his bag and pulls out a brand new green and red Poke'gear.
Matty: wow thanks dad, its a poke'gear.
Lucas: i know, all the way from the jhoto region.
Matty: thanks dad its the best.
Lucas: well you better go take your seat next to all the othe new trainers, and remember keep hold of your ticket.
Matty: will do dad, love you.
And the train takes of down the tracks, and into the morning mist.

 

[wamini]

Matty searched through the train and finnally found his cart, as he entered he was expecting to see loads of trainers to be but there was only 4 kids sitting there, three boys one with blue hair, one with red and the other with green, and a girl with brown hair. Matty walked over to the seats with the boys and sat down in his seat.
Matty: hi im matty.
Green hair: Hi im Pendo.
Matty: hi.
Blue hair: hi im Luther.
Matty: hi
Red hair: hi im Fen
Matty: hi, do any of you know who that is over there?
Matty asked while looking over at the girl sitting in the row behind them.
Pendo: i got told, she is some weirdo who thinks she has some psycic abbilitys or summin like that.
Fen: oh and yeh, apparently she had some mental breakdown when her parents tried to move, when she was just seven.
Luther: well i think shes kinda cute.
Pendo & Fen: WHAT, ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!
Luther: well yeh, she's got bright purple eyes, long dark hair.
Pendo: shut up right now or were going to make you.
Fen: yeh just shut up, what would mum say if she knew you were liking a freak.
But the rumors werent lies, they were all true, this girl had the abbility to communicate with pokemon and read people's minds and she had just overheared everything they have just said, so she got up and walked out of the cabin, matty sees this and follows her to the next cart.
Matty: hey wait up.
Girl: ...........
Matty: hey im talking to you.
Girl: just leave me alone.
Matty: no, your upset and i wanna know why.
The girl stops in her tracks and turns around to face matty.
Girl: its because of your stupid friends.
Matty: there not my friends, ive only just met them.
Girl: really.
Matty: yeh really.
Girl: oh ok then, im so sorry for shouting.
Matty: its allright, do you wanna take a walk to the balcony outside.
Girl: sure.
As they walk of matty ask's.
Matty: whats ure name.
Girl: my names Eliza
Matty: Eliza hey, well nice to meet you, im matty.
Matty with a big smile on his face walks of to the balcony with Eliza.
After an hour of talking the train suddenly pulls to a holt and evryone flies towards the front of the train, exept for matty and eliza as they were at the back. Matty and eliza could here a voice saying "Allright you little punks, give us your pokemon and no one will get hurt" Matty could recognise that voice from no where it was one of dads friends Joey. Matty ran to the cart that the others were in but as he gets there pendo, fen and luther were lying on the floor unconsious.
Matty: what have you done.
???: they tried to fight us of so we hit em with this here crow bar.
Eliza: you sick sick men there only kids.
???: well they shouldnt mess with the Droony brothers.
Matty: brothers, there is only one of you, your out number'ed.
???: haha think again.
And out of no where comes to more men, one dress in brown, the other in green and the one from before was dressed in white.
White: hahaha well then, look whos out number'ed now.
Brown: haha yeh what he said.
Green: hahaha huh, what going on boss.
White: Damn it you nitwits, that was the worst entrance ever, oh well go get there pokemon.
Matty: hey wait we dont have pokemon.
Eliza: yeh we ent even trainers yet.
Brown: cant fool us.
Green: yeh, no one fools us, hahaha.
White: if you wont give them us we will have to take them by force.
All three of the meanies send out pokemon, green sent out Exeggutor, brown sent out Piloswine and white sent out Absol.
Droony brothers: Allright guys get them.
But out of nowhere came a bright flash that blinded everyone and after it whent the pokemon and the Droony brothers were KO'd on the floor.
Matty: huh...who....what was that.
Eliza: i dont know but what ever it was saved us
Matty: yeh too right it did.
They look around and see Pendo, Fen and Luther on the floor so they help them up on there chairs and left them to rest.
Matty: well we better throw these bad people of the train.
They pick them up and throw all of them of the back of the train and suddenly the train starts to move again.
Eliza: well that was a good night hehe.
Matty: hahaha well we better get some rest, night Eliza.
Eliza: night matty.
They fell asleep really fast and they allk woke up a couple of hours later in Sandgem town. Eliza and Matty sit up.
Eliza: well last night was eventfull.
Matty: hahaha yeh too right it was hahaha.
Pendo, Fen and luther: ZZZ....ZZZ....huh...wh...whe...where are we.
Matty and Eliza: hahahahahahaha.
They all laugh it up and are ready for a great new adventure.

 

[bobandbill]

Sorry but I'm afraid I'll have to close this - the FF&W rules state that only well written script fics are allowed. You're missing a few elementary things such as line spacing between each line e.g. should be like this:

Girl: oh ok then, im so sorry for shouting.

Matty: its allright, do you wanna take a walk to the balcony outside.

More on that and why here.

You should also run your story through a spell/grammar checker as well as proofread before posting - there's a fair few mistakes which would have been picked up on - for instance capitalisation and punctuation is missing:

Lyra: ok hunny have you got your lunch and everything.
Matty: mum it isnt school im going on my journey as a pokemon trainer.
Lyra: i know i just want you to be safe.

ought to be:

Lyra: Ok honey, have you got your lunch and everything?

Matty: Mum. it isn't school! I'm going on my journey as a pokemon trainer.

Lyra: I know... I just want you to be safe.

Also the FF&W rules state that the first post must have a prologue or chapter in it as well.

Try applying the above when reposting, and if you want check out other stories around first to see how they are done, including a script fic here called The Gym by Neko Godot for reference so you see how it should be like.