Pokemon The Fall Of Darkness?

[rkwj25]

Well, I am making a game it is called Pokemon The Fall Of Darkness. The game is based off of pokemon emerald. The game has some minor and some major story line changes, some of the major changes are to the storyline, and t the the map. literally everything has had some kind of change. And i Have edited most of the text, and also the marts have been changed. In this game you are a world class pokemon trainer from the kanto region, but you have heard new that the sapphire region has fallen into darkness, and chaos, the reason is because it has been over run by to evil teams who are causing all kinds of chaos, and have conflict left and right, there have been several other pokemon trainers sent, but none of them have succeeded and have been defeated. Now they are still fighting more tha ever and Now they want to awaken the mighty groudon and kyogre to finish the battle they started against each other!Now you are their last hope, when you are transfered there you will not be able to bring anything with you, not even your pokemon! they said they will provide you with new ones once you have arrived. Now you are their only hope. Can you restore peace? wil yuo bring peace to the land? its all up to you now....

Changes To The Game Are As Follows:
Map:
New Map
Every Town Has Been Edited In Some Way Either Minorly Or Majorly
Different Weather in towns.

Text:
Most Things Are Changed Do to a different storyline.

Items:
Mart Items have been changed

Game:
Based off of Pokemon Emerald.

I Hope this answers everyones questions sorry for my first version i see how it may have been unclear.

Hope You Like It.

 

[h POKE]

Well, I Am Making A Game, I Have Made Several Others Just Never Posted 'Em On Here. Do you capitalize the first letter of every word? But I ThinkThe Plot Is How can you think this is what the plot is? You made it... That You Are A World Class PKMN Trainer And The Sapphire Region Umm... This isn't going where I think it is, is it? Is Going Into Chaos, Why? And It Seems No-One Can Stop It, They Have Sent Many Other Top-Class Trainers But None Have Sucseeded. What makes anyone think you will now? What are you even up against in the first place? Now You Are There Last Hope The Problems Are Being Caused By To Pokemon Who Are Fighting, Groudon, And Kyogre. It did. Hopefully there won't be any more cliches, though. Seriously, so far all I've read is one big cliche of a pokemon story. We've all played the games, so I don't think we need someone to recreate them for us... Can You Restore Peace, Can You Stop The Other Team Who Is Helping Keep The Chaos Going, Will You! What? Is English your first language? Succeed.... Um... Let me tell you a thing or two about sentence structure.

Hope You Like It.

There's... nothing here, really. I still have hardly any idea as to what this game is about. Refer to bolds.