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Pokemon - The Haunted Island

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Danyelle sighed looking around. She had never been in someplace so big before! She was used to small towns. Sparx sat on her head happily. Ginger, Restren, Leafy and Dusty were at her sides. Thundah sat perched on her shoulder. All could tell Danyelle was in a good yet nervous mood. She walked up to the counter to get her cruise ticket paying the fee.

"Okay you ready guys? Especailly you Sparx, we all know how terrified you are of ghost pokemon. Other than Dusty that it, remember when Dusty saved you from falling off the fridge at home? That was so funny!" Danyelle couldn`t help but laugh. Sparx glared at Danyelle and sat upwards on her head. Then when no one was looking pulled on her hair.

"Hey! Stop that you little imp!" Danyelle grabbed Sparx before he pulled a whole bunch of hair out of her head. Laughing , she tok her ticket and looked over to one of her idol`s, Agatha.

Agathas swift ghost pokemon could wipe the floor with a physical type. Danyelle used Dusty for defeating Brawly when she visited her cousin Flannery on her last cruise. That, was also when she caught Dusty. Dusty was quite strong now and had defeated many challenges as most of Danyelles pokemon did all the time.

Then in the corner of her eye she saw someone with a haunter.
"Hey Dusty look, a haunter! Oh my gosh! I always loved haunters! But not as much as you that it he he..." Danyelle looked at her angry dusclops. he was easily taken to jealousy.

Danyelle studied the haunter. She liked the way it seemed to be so fond of its trainer. She hoped that Restren would be like that, Restren and Ginger were her most recent pokemon but Restren didnt seem to like Danyelle much. When she made contact with him, he used fire to burn her hand. She patted him and when he went to burn her she flinched.

" Umbre, Umbreon!" <Leave me alone!> Restren growled. Danyelle nodded. She didnt want him any more mad then he was now.
 
Daniel was now flying on his charizard with his nidoking,totdile,minum,evee and haunter on his back. Haunter was very protective over Daniel and was always trying to treat him like a child. They landed very close to Daneyell and Danniel jumped off and smiled.

Danniel: hi Im not too late am I?

Haunter:HAUUNNTTERRR

Daniel: yes haunter Im fine Im not cold!

Daniel sighed.
 
I heard i had got a place in the ghost island expedition. So I and Shadow where on our way to the boat launch.

"Hey shadow there's the port, it looks....Magnificent!" where the only words i could find, shadow agreed wholeheartedly, but he didn't show it. I released Silverbane(the silver Umbreon) and Jewel (the black Espeon) from their pokeballs. They were happy to be out, and Jewel let out a large catty yawn, and I stroked both Silverbane and Jewel behind the ears.

"You guys look happy to be out, only one more, c'mon out Shade" I yelled releasing the little shuppet, he was also happy to be out, I was happy to be surrounded with my friends, my only friends.

"So lets get going" I said heading towards the warf, there was less and less distance between Me and my pokemon and the boat that would transport us to the new isalnd.
I grew excited...
 
Daniel saw the approcahing trainer with his pokemon and he ran up to him and smiled.

Daniel:hi my names Daniel, youe coming on the cruise too?

Evee walked curiously to Umbreon and sniffed him while Dememntor Daniels haunter looked at the other haunter curiously.

Daniel: wow you have cool pokemon.
 
Restren looked at Silverbane mysteriously. He was unsure of safety so he (actually) walked over and hid his head under Danyelle`s hand. He wanted to make sure he could get tothe island and didnt want Danyelle to look like a bad trainer.

When Daniel came over Danyelle said hi. Then she returned all but Restren and Sparx to theyre pokeballs running towards the warf ready to ride the boat with Restren and Sparx. She woul leave the other pokemon in theyre pokeballs. Then Danyelle thought. Maybe she could get Restren to warm up to her. She giggled at her own joke in thought.(Lol hes a fire type)
 
Danile saw the boat and looked back to the new boy.

Daniel: well we better hurry if were going to get there in time lets go guys

Daniel returned charizard and nidoking to their balls but he allowed minum evee and totdile to ride on his shoulder and haunter to hover above him and they all ran onto the ship showing their ticket.

Daniel:here we are...
 
occ: geez you guys are going fast! -_- I edited my first post and put that stuff on here instead. (I won't be typing <Pikachu Chu!> or any other pokemon growls, their gonna be talking in italics.)
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"Come on guys! I bet none of you can beat me to the water!" Zelda was running just beneath Crimson's shadow. A little Azumarill poked her head over the charizard's shoulder to see. "Alright, but you've gotta promise to give me a head start!" she squeaked jumping of her big brother's back. "You know i've got short legs." she said bouncing up and down. "Okay Bo, and the rest of you boys better let her go too." Zelda said eyeing them. Crimson, Forge, and Zero nodded. "Wait for us!" Sorah called flicking off her shoes to stand beside them. Krad stood beside Sorah and waited for Zelda's signal.

"Ready Botan?" the little azumarill shook her head. "Okay go!" Zelda pushed her off, and waited till she got halfway to flash her tail. Zero and Crimson glided quickly through the air, Zelda used agility to get faster, Forge pounced and skidded around the sandy hill, Krad trotted beside Sorah while she tried her best to keep up. All of them made it to the shore at the same time, except for little Botan, Sorah, and Krad. Botan was waddling as fast as she could, but let's face it she wasn't getting anywhere. Sorah was about to run past her, but she picked Botan up and carried her to the finish line.

They all collapsed on the sand to get their breath back. "I got a headstart and still couldn't beat you guys!" Botan sniffled a little and Crimson smiled at her. "Look at the bright side Bo, at least you weren't the only one." She thought for a moment, then smiled back. "Yeah. your right! Sorah and Krad are just as slow as me!" she giggled and they all laughed.

After a while it got dark and they began to walk back to the town. "Hey Sorah have you heard anything else about that weird island yet?" Crimson asked. "Yeah, I heard there's a group of people going there soon too, and I plan on going with them." They didn't bother to ask why she hadn't told them, she knew they would go whether she wanted them to or not. "Well Sis, we've got your back!" Zelda said grinning. Juni glanced at her watch. "Good, because we're already late!!!"

Crimson lowered a wing to her, and Sorah jumped on his back, the others hopped on with her and they flew off to the boat dock. After a few minutes Sorah could clearly see the dock. "There it is! We better hurry." Crimson dived down and landed in front of the ship. They all ran toward it. Sorah flashed her ticket as she ran by. Once inside she stopped and leaned on the wall to rest. "I think I'm gonna be sick..." she whispered to krad. "Indeed Sorah, Crimson needs a few flying lessons."
 
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OOC-Aaaahhhhh I'm late...

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Amaya walked across Migan walking next to her. The ticket lay in her hand and Bracken was walking infront of her. The Typhlosion streched then ran of infront. Amaya didn't mind unless there were umbreon around. She she saw the port, she saw people infront. Looking at the people she noticed two Umbreon. Calling back for Bracken she quickend the pace. She returned Bracken and kept Migan by her. Looking round once more she saw the large ship.
Looking at the people she went up over to a girl with a Umbreon.
"Umm hey you going on the cruise too?"
Amaya thought to herself,
I might as well make some friends while I'm here...
 
I noticed the people who had surrounded me, and instead of greeting them with a warm smile, i shoved away, and moved towards the ticket collectors.

"hmph, here's your ticket, i'll see my own way on, c'mon you lot" I yelled returning all of my pokemon apart from shadow
"you'll be safer by my side and now we can get on, you ready?" I asked looking at the haunter, and it nodded bravely, it had always hated water but it's curiousness would over power it's fear, for the time being.
"Well lets go to out cabin, cabin ......3 ah yeah c'mon then shadow." I said patting shadow affectionately, leading him onto the boat, up to the deck, down into the cabin deck, and into out cabin.

"Hey what's going on here, there are two beds, I thought it was a room each, not two to a room, oh great now I have to share, well shadow looks liek we'll have company soon, lets hope they have pokemon we can have a little battle yeah?" I asked the floating shadow and he nodded.
 
Danny walked over to cabin 3

Danniel: hmm this seems to be mine

Danniel opnes the door and sees haunter and the boy.

Danniel: oh hi..seems were sharing...
 
"oh.....****, it looks like we are, how about a battle? my Haunter against yours" I asked pointing to shadow and the new boys haunter.

"I guess it should be fun yeah? and plus I could do with the experience so how about it?" I ask a little excited but hiding it quickly, Shadow looked blank, he was shocked that i was speaking to another person, I was shocked but I knew Shadow would need to be stronger to beat Lance next time.
 
"Hey... I wonder where everyone is." Sorah said looking around. Then she saw two trainers coming toward the ship and two standing around. "Hey look over there Krad!" she said pointing toward them. The mightyena put his paws on the railing and looked over the edge. "Yes I see them... and they look like a friendly group." He sighed and sat down again. "Well I hope your in the mood to talk because I can't do it for you." Sorah sighed too.

"Yeah... and that's to bad 'cause I'm not exactly a people- person" She sat down beside him and leaned and scratched his head. "Don't worry about them Sorah, we'll just ignore them like we do everyone else." Zero said floating next to them. "No way! this pikachu ain't scared to talk to anyone! I'm gonna say hi!" Zelda jumped up on the railing and was about to yell down to their pokemon, but Sorah put a hand around her mouth. "What do want to bring attention to us?! I don't want anything to do with other people!" she yelled putting the pikachu back on the ground.
 
Daniel grinned

Daniel:AL RIGHT NOW YOUR SPEAKING MY LANGUAGE LETS DO THIS!

Haunter smiled and cheerped happily but then looked at daniel concered

Haunter:haunt haunt?

Daniel:NO I AM NOT TOOO TIRED I CAN BATTLE!!!!!!
 
"If you think you can beat shadow bring it on, Go on shadow i know you can do it"

<Haunterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr>(OK Kaine, like old times lets do this)
"We'll start with reflect" I say while Shadow conjures up a blue forcefield
"In fact why don't we take this up to the deck let the others see?" I ask not even waiting for an answer I leave the room and walk to the middle of the deck, and shadow follow's closely behind.
"And why don't we raise the stakes, if I win you get the room. If you win you get the room, so either way you can't lose." I said, I just wanted a battle, and i didn't mind spending the whole ride outside of the cabin.

"In fact why don't we all have a tournament?" I yell out, sparking an idea...
 
Daniel smiled

Daniel: I like the way you think but we have a tournament we better not just have ghost pokemon sin ce my haunter is pritty new.

Haunter was infront of Daniel admiring the sea.

Daniel: so what do you say pal?
 
OOC: *braindead* PPLZ here pr so faaast! Ill only do two to four paras for now.
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Danyelle patted Restrens head one more time and flinched as he spurted flames. Then she walked onto the boat. Restren and Sparx began to growl at each other.
"PI PICHU!" <YOU HAVE BIG EARS>
"Umbre umbreon"<Well yours are just as big. Plus, you have a fat head.I myself save dignity and decide not to yell because it would hurt your poor sensetive ears.> Restren sneered. Sparx`s face turned red.
"PIPICHU" <TAKE THAT BACK> he screamed.

A wingull nearby looked at the two and flew off at a rocketing speed.
Then it got hit by something and fell into the sea. Blood spread throughout. Restren and Sparx leaned over the edge and stared at the blood.


"Pi, Pichu."<I`m blaming you.> Sparx began to move. Restren tackled him down so he couldnt move. Then he began to glow red and orange. His body turned fire. Sparx felt his fur being removed and when Restren got off him, a whole pawprint was on his fur.It was still burning so Sparx did a stop drop roll.
"PI PICHU!!" <ILL GET YOU BACK> He yelled.
 
Sorah sighed and went below decks to search for her cabin. "Hmmm... room 7 huh?" she walked down the hallways until she reached it. She opened the door for her pokemon and walked in after them. "Well what do we do now?" Botan squeaked. "Let's play a game!" Forge yelped practically bouncing off the walls.

"Nah, how 'bout we train?" Zelda said scratching her head with a foot. "Yea! Yea! Let's train!" Forge was still running around like he was crazy. "I told you not to give him chocolate..." Crimson whispered to Sorah. She nodded.

"Okay Forge, you guys can do whatever you want as long as you stop acting so hyper!" He slowed down and tryed to sit still; but his ears were twitching like mad. "Okay Sis! I'm not hyper anymore!" he said waiting for her. "And yet he keeps twitching." Zelda said giggling at him. Now his nose and ears were twitching and sorah shook her head. "Alright... let's go." she put her extra pokeballs and potions away and lead them out to the hallway. They went back to the side of the top deck and Sorah sat down to watch.
 
Dannies evvee was running around happily and knocked into Sorah.

Evve paused and looked cutely at sorah in confusion

Evee: evee?

Evee sniffed sorah.
 
Danyelle sighed and looked at her two pokemon. They began to fight again.
"All right G, come get your brother to stop!" Danyelle flung a pokeball at the left side of Restren. Ginger popped out. Knocking Restren over, she went to Sparx.
"Eee, eevee. Eee eevee."< Leave my little brother alone you freakazoid, only I`m allowed to rant with him you hear?> Ginger raised a paw for silence before Restren could complain. Sparx glared at Ginger.
"Pi pi pichu"<Okay Dementiess>
"Eee, eevee?"<What did you call me?>
"Pi pi pichu, chu chu pichu pi pi?"<Dementiess. You got a problem with that rabbit?>
"EEEVEEE EEVEE"<Stop talking, think bout it, your a rat!>
 
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