Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's

No offense, but this comic isn't really that good... It's full of gramatical errors, text under panels is overused (I have had text under panels myself, but I have kinda grown tired of the panel system thingy...) And the plot seems rather clich?, if you ask me. Also, it's much more interesting to see a trainer without uberish pokemon, like Kyogre -.- Try to be a little more original, too early to give a proper rating, but the font is hard to read (even with a 2x zoom o.O), the plot is clich? and it's full of gramatical errors 2/10
 
[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's


Pkay here it is
 
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I got another character you can put in the comic!

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Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:

[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's
[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's


You should have a comic where she does that.

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And here's her overworld and backsprites.
 
Sunflorazumarill said:
I got another character you can put in the comic!

*image removed*

Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:

[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's
[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's


You should have a comic where she does that.

*image removed*

And here's her overworld and backsprites.
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i dont want anyone else the last place was taken by XiaolinDragon so im not adding in any more people
 
Blazin Espio said:
did you make that sprite? if you didn't and thats most likely the truth wheres the credit?
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Meh yeah your right, I just found whatever, I did told the person I can use it for my comic though. Okay KT don't use that Pokemon, I'll give you one of mine.
 
Okay KT here are the new sprites:
[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's

Its a Tyranipuff
The PKMN sprite is made from ELGONZO, and I did the rest
 
Rock Lee said:
Okay KT here are the new sprites:
[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon:The return of the Aqua's

Its a Tyranipuff
The PKMN sprite is made from ELGONZO, and I did the rest
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you think you can make a back sprite 4 your guy RL?,also should i call him MT because thats his name in adams comic?
 
sorry to DP but keep this alive plz,the new comic wont be long and i put up 2 small profiles for me and adam others will be done soon...
 
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