Pokemon toxic

pokeman1000

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    ok me and jedite1000 has teamed up to create a comic so here it is

    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon toxic


    Rise of team toxic saga

    Chapter 1 - The better pokemon
    Chapter 2 - Sibling rivalry
    Chapter 3 - The electric trainer
    Chapter 4 - The powerfull thunder attack

    and here is the characters so far
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon toxic

    Name:Jaden
    age:10
    Description: Jaden is a 10 year old boy who wants to be a pokemon master but during his journey team toxic is there to make sure he fails

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    Name:jade
    Age:10
    Description: Jane is Jaden's sister, she always gets on his nerves but Jane also has a dream, she want's to becomea member of the elite 4

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    Name: Jade & pearl
    Age:8
    Description: Jade & pearl are twins sisters, but also sisters to jaden & jane they do not care for adventures so they stay at home with the family pokemon

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    Name: Watson
    Age: old
    Description: Watson became a pokemon professor now he gives out pokemon as starters he resigned his gym duties now watt is the new gym leader

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    Name: Mace
    Age: unknown
    Description:Mace is a Trainer with a strange likeing for Electric Pokemon. He lives in Saffron and in Mauville. Mace won't let anyone getin his way of becoming the best Electric Trainer!

    Team toxic
    team toxix is a new evil organisation their plan is to turn all the pokemon into evil pokemon using a new pokeball called toxicball it has the power to transform any pokemon to pure evil,also they want to take out the top pokemon trainers so their will be no one to stop them

    so enjoy the comic

    made by
    pokeman1000
    jedite1000

    also if u like 2 join the comic fill out this form
    name:
    age:
    description:
    sprites:
    pokemon:
    position: (trainer, gym leader, team toxic)

    if u want to be a gym leader fill out this extra part
    gym town:
    you can only be in one gym once all gyms are filled out no one else can become a gym leader
    (Watt is already the mauville city gym leader)

    if you want to be a toxic member fill out this extra part
    position (grunt,leader)
    also u need the sprites clothes to be purple
    (note: all toxic member pokemon are evil:
     
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    Well its ok but
    1.The start is a bit overused
    2. The boxes are VERY big. You dont need that much black space.

    But its off to a good start atleast. I'll join if youll allow me to?

    name: Dash
    age: 14
    description: Dash used to own a electric mouse ranch on Route 8 untill it was barraged by Rockets. He has been seeking them out for ages ow for his revenge.
    sprites:
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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon toxic

    pokemon: Pikachu, Pichu, Plusle , Minun (and if im allowed a leg) Jirachi
    position: Trainer
    Credit:
    Avatar for the Falanker base sprites that Dash is made from.
    ??? for the Backsprite (If the person who made it is reading this PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE pm me.)

    If you want any help with sprites and such I have plenty of time over half term (This week) and would be happy to help. Just PM me :)
     
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    The boxes are a bit big,but can I join??

    name: Danielle
    age: 14
    description: Danielle lived in Littleroot,but got bored of her same,and boring life.She ran away and stole a started pokemon(her eevee)from Prof. Oak,from the lab,and started her journey.She dreams to become the greatest pokemon trainer.
    Personality: determined,nice,mean(sometimes,confident,hard worker,Outgoing,fun,adventurous,clumbsy,anxious sometimes
    sprites:
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    pokemon: eevee, vulpix, flygon , dragonair
    position: trainer
     
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    I'll join!
    name: Mace
    age: (I don't even know lol!)
    description: Mace is a Trainer with a strange likeing for Electric Pokemon. He lives in Saffron and in Mauville. Mace won't let anyone getin his way of becoming the best Electric Trainer!
    sprites:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon toxic

    pokemon: Manetric, Ampharos, and Electabuzz
    position: Trainer or Gymleader (you choose)
     
    You might want to improve the grammar in your comic. Aside from that, it's okay so far.
     
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