Pokemon Xtra Dimension 2: Return of Cipher

[Pokemon Champ101]

Hello everyone, I've already completed a story that involves the Pokemon Colosseum/XD games, and I've already been trying to write the 3rd installment of the XD series, but this time involving the D/P/Pl Pokemon. Anyways, here is the story:

Pokémon Xtra Dimension (XD) 2: Return of Cipher​

Prologue​

After 5 more years of Cipher being demolished by 2 hero Pokēmon trainers, Cipher has returned to take over Orre once again, but this time they have constructed another project, XD002 (Shadow Deoxys). They have used the project to surrender regular Pokemon over to the organization and become Shadow Pokēmon. As they become Shadow Pokēmon, they are closed from their hearts and able to become battle machines basically. The only ways to purify the Shadow Pokēmon is to use natural methods and the Purification Chamber. There are, in total, 131 Shadow Pokēmon and 80 evolutions or regular Pokemon for the Shadow Pokemon.​

Well, what do u think of the prologue???

 

[Astinus]

It's short. Really really really really short.

You have a random accent over the e in Pokemon. Write out numbers less than 100. The prologue itself is just a random blurb, sort of like a summary, not anything that would fit into the actual story. Platinum is actually shorthanded as "Pt", so it's D/P/Pt, I believe.

Like I said, though, this really isn't a prologue. it's more like a summary. And there's nothing to comment on, so...