FireRed hack: Pokemon Yango version

[mitchell114]

Introduction

My name is mitchell114 on some other forums my name is Xaja this is my first hack that I post on PC.
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Story
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Once the Yango region was a peaceful region, but at one point strange things happened. The volcano on Stone Island erupted, many people were killed by the eruption. And the island descended into chaos. Because the volcano was quiet for thousands of years seismologist went investigate. They discovered that the volcano had erupted in a unnatural way.
The police are still looking for the suspects who caused the volcano to erupt.
In Sunshine town (the town were you live) strange people are walking around and acting suspicious. And you can't go to the lake because the police destroyed the road.
By now you are tired of waiting. The town has been put under pressure by the strange people and nobody will do anything to stop them. Then you get called by one of the professors aid's from the next town. And they ask if you could come to the lab. But what happens then you will discover in Pokémon Yango version.

screenshots

Movie



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Needed
Someone who can check my English
OW spriterTile maker
titlescreen maker

Credits

Laidjon - for the tiles.
Kyledove - for the pallete.

Beta
none yet.
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[Awan2407]

WOW!!!It was the coolest ever!!!!!!!!
if you have the beta i'm the first,ok?

 

[panthers4091]

Well in your story, you have some grammar errors, which makes it a tad unappealing.

You use the wrong tense and verb tense in several places.

Spoiler:

For example instead of saying "strange things happened. The volcano on Stone Island erupts" you should say "strange things happened. The volcano on Stone Island erupted"

You also are missing some articles (a, the, etc) and have some words that should be plural and are not. I suggest a spell check too.

Well, good luck with your hack!

 

[mervyn797]

grammatical errors but scripts nicely made! :)

 

[Matteron (96)]

WOW!!!It was the coolest ever!!!!!!!!
if you have the beta i'm the first,ok?

WTF?! What are you saying...
Anyhow, I like your story, but as someone said you do have gramatical mistakes.
Also I don't mind making a title screen, but you will have to get the pics you want to use.

 

[Chi Rin]

i would love to help correct your gramatical errors.
If thats okay.

 

[mitchell114]

WOW!!!It was the coolest ever!!!!!!!!
if you have the beta i'm the first,ok?

I don´t have a beta and everybody get the beta at the same time.

Well in your story, you have some grammar errors, which makes it a tad unappealing.

You use the wrong tense and verb tense in several places.

Spoiler:

For example instead of saying "strange things happened. The volcano on Stone Island erupts" you should say "strange things happened. The volcano on Stone Island erupted"

You also are missing some articles (a, the, etc) and have some words that should be plural and are not. I suggest a spell check too.

Well, good luck with your hack!

I know my English is not so good but I´m working on it, and thanks.

grammatical errors but scripts nicely made! :)

Thank you.

WTF?! What are you saying...
Anyhow, I like your story, but as someone said you do have gramatical mistakes.
Also I don't mind making a title screen, but you will have to get the pics you want to use.

Thanks that you like my story.

i would love to help correct your gramatical errors.
If thats okay.

That would be really nice send me a pm with your msn and I will add you to my contacts.

Tommorow maby a update, but at the moment i´m studying for my exams.
And if you want to join the team just send me a pm.

currently needed
Tile maker.
Tile inserter.

 

[Aberbecam]

The story? The story is good. Scripts? Good. Tiles and Pallets? Not so much. The pallet can use little more work. And you put 6 screenshots of like 2 scripts and 3 maps. O.o You really need to put some more screens. It seems like you rushed through making your hack just to post the thread. xD

 

[mitchell114]

The story? The story is good. Scripts? Good. Tiles and Pallets? Not so much. The pallet can use little more work. And you put 6 screenshots of like 2 scripts and 3 maps. O.o You really need to put some more screens. It seems like you rushed through making your hack just to post the thread. xD

Yes the hack is not so far for now only the first town I´m working on the rest.

=====================UPDATE======================
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A small tile update, I took the tile from the rombase of jesse so credit to him.

Also the story is now in correct English

Enjoy!

Credits to:
Jesse
Hamish
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[Chi Rin]

I can sort out the grammar issues ingame if you can either
a) copy and paste the first town/villages script and send it to me via pm
or
b) send me some footage of the game and i can tell you where you went wrong

 

[.Tactic.]

I like the new update, small though it is.. It is a nice big improvement :)

 

[Satoshi Ookami]

That house looks good but I don't like the color...
I guess that's only bad thing about it

 

[mitchell114]

Long time no updates but here we have one enjoy

don't bother the map.

credits
laidjon - big three tile, grass tile, pallete
myself - little tree tile

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

I can help you correct the Grammar Mistakes.
You can sign me up.

 

[chrunch]

Long time no updates but here we have one enjoy

don't bother the map.

credits
laidjon - big three tile, grass tile, pallete
myself - little tree tile

The map seems...empty.
Try adding some wild Pokemon grass.

 

[mitchell114]

I can help you correct the Grammar Mistakes.
You can sign me up.

that would be really awesome you are in.

The map seems...empty.
Try adding some wild Pokemon grass.

I said this where only the tiles so the map isn't finished yet, so please rate the tiles.

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

that would be really awesome you are in.

Good. When the Beta is almost completed, send me the patch.

 

[chrunch]

I said this where only the tiles so the map isn't finished yet, so please rate the tiles.

Okay, then.
the tiles look okay, I give it 8/10.

 

[mitchell114]

Okay people I'm officially back, so I have a update for you, I hope you like it

credits:
Laidjon - three's
alistair - grass tiles
wesley fg - house, flowers
??? - path (I don't remember his name)

 

[jerk]

i like the new updates!
way better than the the originak screenshots :)