PokeSplash

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    Hello again!
    My site PokeSplash has been completely functional for around 3 months now. So, I would like some criticisms on what I can do better, and comments on things that I should do more of.
    The site is mainly informational: it has current news, and a complete dex of pokemon and of moves.
    My site is https://pokesplash.net. (Recent domain change)
     
    Layout
    This is probably your weakest area. The need to change font colour as the gradient moves from dark to light does look a bit tacky, I'm afraid.

    The main thing that struck me with your site's layout is the lack of consistency. The layout on this page is different from the layout on this page, which is different to the layout on this page. I realise these represent different sections of your site, but a unified layout is important - it unites your site visually.

    All this being noted, you did make the layout yourself (which seems to be quite rare) and the fact that the layout doesn't hurt the eyes and is easily readable do help.

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    Atmosphere
    Your atmosphere is good. You make few grammatical errors, and the lack of personality is understandable: this is an information site, after all.

    However, there were a few breakages. Since you want this to be an informative site, a tone of authority is important. Consider when you say on your HG/SS page "Some of the issues would be the dual-region integration, which means that Nintendo will be forced to cut out Kanto, although the games should have advanced to a point where a second region is possible." "Should have" is not a good enough way to say things; speculation is not appropriate for this site. Not to mention that on your news page you say that the Elite Four will occur in Kanto, which means that Kanto will be there. (This is a problem commonly suffered by information sites - pages will make references to not-yet-revealed facts, the webmaster will forget about them, and they'll continue to have incomplete information.)

    That being said, most of your site does convey a formal atmosphere as one would expect. But don't be shy about writing introductions with a bit of prose. This page is an example of where I felt like there was something missing from the feel of the page. It may sound wishy-washy, and it is. But the way your visitors feel, even on a site like this, is important.

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    Uniqueness
    This is difficult to maintain on an information site, and is therefore less important. But still, having something that no other site has, and forces people to come to your site, would give you a massive advantage.

    You've entered a highly competitive market, here: you're put into direct competition with sites like Serebii and Bulbagarden, who have massive amounts of information and willing contributors at their disposal. It would therefore be pertinent for you to continue developing new ways to attract people, ones never seen before.

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    Informative Content
    You have a wealth of information. Useful information. I'm very impressed by your Pokédex, and you've gone quite satisfactorily into game mechanics and the games. For a site with only three months under its belt, you've done well so far.

    But your main challenge here is to kick up the originality. The only way I could award an unoriginal information site five stars is if it had the kind of dedication, quick reporting, and incredible breadth and depth of sites like Bulbapedia. This is not realistic in the short or medium term - what is realistic, however, is you working on building something new, something that forces people to come to your site.

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    Overall

    It is obvious to me that you have the dedication to make this an absolutely fantastic site. However, your main priority now is to get some original content up there that draws people to your site. Your secondary priority is to unify the site under one layout.

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    Ok, I've been working on my site for the past couple hours to make it visually better
    (The Dex and Attax sections, I will work on the calculators later)
    And I'm pretty sure I have one of the biggest gradients around now (7000px tall)
    I guess I will work on revising my content
    I remember my biggest flaw: when I first started, I refused to use the words "I" and "you" so some sentences did become awkward.
    Thanks for the review Citrinin... and hopefully I can get my site up to a 4
     
    It's not acceptable to get people to change the layout themselves with javascript. While tech savvy people might do it if they can be bothered, the average visitor won't be. It is the webmaster's job to make the layout good, not the visitor's. The way that gradients usually work in layouts is that they're on the body but off anywhere where large bodies of text are. Usually, a solid colour is needed wherever you plan to put the content. Occasionally you can get away with it, but needing to change the text colour partway through is not a good look.
     
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    Ok, so I have done another great deal on the site. I kept the background gradient but I solidified the foreground on all parts of the site (accidentally destroying my database connection in the process, its ok now though )
    So how's it looking now
    (thanks a lot for putting in as much as you all have done)
     
    Without the gradient behind the content, and the beginning of the unification of style, it's looking much better. :3 It would be better if the tables were made a bit nicer in the Splashdex (that is, they didn't look like the "detached" default HTML style in parts. This can be achieved with the border-collapse feature.)
     
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