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Pressure(Writing Poems Again :P)

This part has a lot of humor in it.
I can't tell if that's a good thing or a bad thing. I guess it's all opinion.
Also a couple lines don't sound quite right. Such as, "He then says 'Are you okay, folk?'". That just didn't seem to make much sense to me.
But still a good chapter in the story.
Keep on writing!
 
The next chapter is in multi-verse Haiku form:

We are in a cave
Going in even deeper
Mel asks for patience

Finally we come
To a strange, swirling portal
To the home of Death

He says he'll help out
He ties a rope to my waist
Then tells me to go

I'm in Death's castle
The grand lair freaks me out
But it's worth the prize

Climbing up a staircase
Candles lighting the dark pass
This is for Cel'bi

Enter Death's bedroom
The scythe's in his strange coffin
So I rush to grab it

Suddenly I fall
Melvin's rope is being strained
I can't go further

Then I hear a voice
Freakishly cold and eerie:
"Prepare to die now"

Darn, Death has caught me
He summons the scythe to him
Then he walks forward...
--
To be continued
 
This poetic story gets more and more strange with its structure.
You first used basic rhyming, then an acrostic, then a two-voice, and now a haiku!
...Buuuut, back to the point. This part was absolutely thrilling! The dark castle, Death's bedroom, and of course, the last few verses. That part was epic! Now I am very curious to see how it turns out.
Now the only flaw I noticed was
"This is for Cel'bi"
....I understand you were trying to keep the haiku's pattern straight, but that sounded odd to me. But, I guess I'll let it go this time.

Great job!
 
...What does Pokemon, Death, a talking pile of bones, and a tailor named Melvin have in common?
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Darkpokeball's Epic Poem Saga.
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Alright, so here's a normal poem:

Our story now turns back to the future
A bleak one, where everything's ruined
Allow me to take you on this odd tour
An Earth that met it's awful, grave tomb

Arceus is continuing his rampage
He shows no signs of stopping
People wonder why he has rage
As corpses keep on dropping

Then Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina take charge
On Arceus's rampage, upon they barge

Each let's out a legendary cry
No intentions of letting Earth die

The three attack, as a team
Sending loose a mega hyperbeam

Then arrives Lugia and Ho-Oh
People awe, saying "Whoa"
Legendaries fighting to and fro

Lugia and Ho-Oh go to Arceus's side
Planning to make Earth so it's died
They plan to make opposers fried

The battle heats up, forces of power
Three are sweet, while three are sour
Houses burn, down crumbles a tower
People still fall to the ground, dead
Some even lose their weak li'l head

Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina
Seem to be losing in this arena
Lugia, Ho-Oh, and Arceus
Seem to winning to end us

Then arrives Mew, Mewtwo, and Jirachi
All plan to let pokemon live well and free

Of course, Mew and Jirachi want to save humans
Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, Mew, Mewtwo, Jirachi might win

The new addition seems to turn the tide
This takes Arceus, Lugia, Ho-oh for a ride
Then arrives Zekrom and Reshiram
The battle then takes out a small tram
Zekrom and Reshiram join Lugia and Ho-Oh
The battle intensifying, more lives go....
 
A battle of legendary Pokémon.
Very interesting.

A few rhymes were, well, trying to hard to rhyme. But I still liked the rhythm.
I don't know if I should consider this poem intense, funny, dramatic, or something. It's confusing.

But overall, good job!

(Sorry for the delay)
 
I look at Death as he comes near

Approaching quickly, does my journey end here
My hopes are all going down the drain

Dead is the future, filled with blood-rain
Everything is ending, I have failed
And it seems that I won't prevail
Death is coming, will I survive?
 
Is this continuing your story?
Sorry, I'm a litlle confused.

Back to the point, this one had very well written rhyming. Concept is basic, but still great. Even if it isn't part of your story, it's still a cool poem.
Good work!
 
Yeah...it continues my story...
It's basically a mix of an acrostic and a normal.

Multi-Verse Haiku:(Also a continuation)
At the last moment
He suddenly stops moving
He lets out a shriek

Crumpling to the floor,
Death is in obvious pain
Then I realize why

Let me explain why
This is Arceus's work
Let me tell you how

He's causing Death pain
All the lost souls are too much
His realm has no time

At this point I rush
Rope breaking, I grab the scythe
Before cracking it

The souls are released
I tug on the rope swiftly
Melvin pulls me back
 
Is it over?
Oh, nevermind that.

Again, a good chapter to the poetic adventure (that sounds strange out loud).
Everything seems in order.
Though...
"Let me explain why
This is Arceus's work
Let me tell you how"
...Sounded a bit redundant.

Anyway, I hope to see more (is there more?) soon!
 
There...might...be...more...
Just tell me if it should have a happy ending or a bad ending and I'll set it up that way.

Here's a filler poem:

This poem is a filler
It's about a 4-wheeler

The machine has mighty tires
Powerful, durable, electric wires
It should have a lot of buyers

I hoped you enjoyed
This pointless piece
Of story, it's void
Now it shall cease
 
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