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[Manaphy1128]

I've made impressions, many of them bad. So, I think starting new will be better. I am such a natural disaster...

Anyway, this one is a favorite of mine.

Reflection​

They do it with mirrors
They do it with glass.
They do it to see if they look nice.
Just don't stand there for too long,
Concieted girl.

I look in the ocean,
And the nearby pond.
I gaze and think whatever happend,
Why is this water dirty.

I look towards my window,
Washed out with rain.
When I look in it,
The liquid falling makes me look
As if I'm crying.

They do it with mirrors
They do it with glass.
They don't really how to reflect.

Well, I guess it's just a random poem, a prompt, the title "Reflection", in a contest I didn't win.
(Which I really hope you can tell exactly why)

 

[Romance Hero]

I've made impressions, many of them bad. So, I think starting new will be better. I am such a natural disaster...


I look towards my window,
Washed out with rain.
When I look in it,
The liquid falling makes me look
As if I'm crying.

I love this part, I can really see it, when you look at your own reflection and when the rain slides down the window... it looks like you're crying. That was wonderful.

I can't say why you didn't win... It could have been picky critics... but, who can put a rating on poetry if it comes from your mind?

Good read, I hear you have quite an amazing talent for creativity.

 

[shinobieddy]

I love this part, I can really see it, when you look at your own reflection and when the rain slides down the window... it looks like you're crying. That was wonderful.

I can't say why you didn't win... It could have been picky critics... but, who can put a rating on poetry if it comes from your mind?

Good read, I hear you have quite an amazing talent for creativity.

I agree! Yep, I agree.... nice!