Rate and help my team(3gen)

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    Skarmory (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Sturdy
    EVs: 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 Spd
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Spikes
    - Taunt
    - Toxic
    - Whirlwind

    Sceptile (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Overgrow
    EVs: 220 HP / 216 Spd / 72 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Substitute
    - Leech Seed
    - Leaf Blade
    - Hidden Power [Ice]

    Tauros (M) @ Choice Band
    Trait: Intimidate
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Double-Edge
    - Earthquake
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Sleep Talk

    Umbreon (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Synchronize
    EVs: 252 HP / 152 Def / 104 SDef
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Body Slam
    - Screech
    - Shadow Ball
    - Wish

    Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Natural Cure
    EVs: 200 HP / 252 Def / 56 SDef
    Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
    - Aromatherapy
    - Counter
    - Seismic Toss
    - Softboiled

    Claydol @ Leftovers
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 HP / 136 Def / 120 SDef
    Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
    - Cosmic Power
    - Rapid Spin
    - Rest
    - Hidden Power [Grass]
     
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    Special Sweeper

    Sepitile@lum berry/petaya berry
    Timid
    EVs:6 HP/252 SPD/252 SP.ATK
    Moves:
    -Sunnyday
    -Solarbeam
    -Synthesis/Dragon Pulse
    -HP Fire

    Special Wall

    Blissey@leftovers
    Calm/Careful
    EVs:252 HP/252 SP. DEF/ 4 DEF
    Moves:
    -Softboiled
    -Aromatherapy/Calm Mind
    -Thunder Wave
    -Seismic Toss

    Physical Sweeper

    Sandslash@Life Orb
    Carefull
    EVs:252 HP/6 ATK/252 SP.DEF
    Moves:
    -X-Scissor
    -Stone Edge
    -Earthquake
    -Swords Dance/Brick Break/Shadowclaw/Return

    Physical Sweeper

    Tauros@Liechi Berry
    Adamant
    EVs:6 HP/252 ATK/252 Speed
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -HP Dark
    -Return
    -Stone Edge
    WTF??? Sleep Talk??? How are you gonna put it to sleep???

    Physical Wall

    Steelix@Leftovers
    Impish
    EVs:252 HP/6 ATK/116 DEF/136 SP.DEF
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Gyro Ball
    -Stone Edge/Thunder Fang/Ice Fang
    -Slealth Rock/Explosion/Toxic

    Rapid Spiner and Special Sweeper

    Starmie@Leftovers
    Modest
    EVs:6 HP/252 SPD/252 SP.ATK
    Modest: <???
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Thunderbolt
    -Recover/Psychic

    GD this 25 character rule. fixes in bold
     
    Sleep Talk is for countering sleeping so it can sitil attack wille with the condition sleep.:D
     
    OK, you can't just rely on the opponent to give you status. what if they give you a paralyze/poison/burn condition, then Sleep Talk is a piece of crappy waste.

    If you are EVER gonna use Sleep Talk... please put Rest...
     
    I know that so is this one bether:

    Tauros@Liechi Berry
    Adamant
    EVs:252 HP/200 ATK/28 DEF/28 SP.DEF
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Rest
    -Return
    -Sleep Talk
     
    Ok, you put Sceptile in as a Special Sweeper... with no special moves. Smacks self on head. I kind of like the changed moveset, but I'd go for this more.

    Sunny Day
    Solar Beam
    Giga Drain
    Agility

    For 3rd Gen, but thats just me.
     
    Umm... all of them were special...

    And Solarbeam/Sunnyday should never be on Sceptile unless in 4th gen. Sceptile is probably fast enough without agility and Giga Drain and Solarbeam suck.
     
    Sepitile@lum berry/petaya berry
    Timid
    EVs:6 HP/252 SPD/252 SP.ATK
    Moves:
    -Leaf Blade
    -Dragon Claw
    -Thunder Punch
    -Substitiute


    Blissey@leftovers
    Bold
    EVs:116 HP/130 DEF/142 SP.Def
    Moves:
    -Aromatheropy
    -Seismic Toss
    -Thunder Wave
    -Softboiled
     
    His pokemon were good enough to get him throught the game I'm sure, but if you battle real people and not just in game trainers, you'd probally lose.Get more stat raising or lowering moves...Of course, that's just my opinion.
     
    OK, you can't just rely on the opponent to give you status. what if they give you a paralyze/poison/burn condition, then Sleep Talk is a piece of crappy waste.

    If you are EVER gonna use Sleep Talk... please put Rest...
    The point of Sleep Talk without Rest is so you can switch in on Breloom's Spore/Milotic's Hypnosis/Venusaur's Sleep Powder etc and hit back. That's basic and anyone who thinks anything with Sleep Talk necessarily needs Rest obviously isn't too great of a competitive battler.
     
    Umm...yeah, actually you can rely on any worthwhile opponent to try to hit you with status. Lawl at these 4th genners; Sleep Talk is all over the place in Advance. :P

    Special Sweeper

    Sepitile@Leftovers
    Timid
    EVs:6 HP/252 SPD/252 SP.ATK
    Moves:
    -Leaf Blade
    -Dragon Claw Substitute
    -Thunder Punch/Hidden Power [Ice]
    -Pursuit Leech Seed

    Seedstall Sceptile = Schmexy. Also, make sure that the HP is one above a number divisible by 16. If it isn't, pool EVs from SAtk until it is.


    Special Wall

    Blissey@leftovers
    Bold
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SAtk
    Moves:
    -Calm Mind Aromatherapy/Heal Bell
    -Defense Curl Softboiled
    -Ice Beam
    -Thunderbolt Seismic Toss

    Defense Curling Blissey is pretty futile as, to be honest, is a CMing one. Softboiled is an absolute must, and since you don't really have any other special walls this thing should be walling properly, imo. If you want more special power then replace that sucky Sandslash with Zapdos or Magneton. There was also some strategic SAtk value that lets Blissey break Gengar's subs with Ice Beam, I think it was 68 or 64, but I can't remember.

    Physical Sweeper

    Sandslash@Chesto Berry
    Carefull
    EVs:252 HP/6 ATK/252 SP.DEF
    Moves:
    -Rest
    -Rock Slide
    -Seismic Toss
    -Swords Dance


    Chestorest = Phail, as does maximal SDef on a pokémon that gets whipped by special attackers anyway. I really don't see what this thing is doing in a full-OU team anyway. Replace this with something useful, because it couldn't sweep for beans. :\

    Physical Sweeper

    Tauros@ Choice Band
    Adamant
    EVs:6 HP/252 ATK/252 Speed
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Hidden Power(70 ghost)
    -Return
    -Sleep Talk

    Physical Wall

    Liechi makes Tauros cry since it's pretty easily KOed. CB, please; it gives a bigger power boost all the time.

    Steelix@Leftovers
    Impish
    EVs:252 HP/6 ATK/116 DEF/136 SP.DEF
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Rage Rest/Explosion
    -Rock Slide
    -Roar

    Screw the SDef; Steelix is a physical wall. Switch those EVs into Atk and Def, please. Also, Rage is just one of the most pointless moves ever. Either give it rest to help the walling or Explosion to let it go boom at the end.

    Rapid Spiner and Special Sweeper

    Starmie@Leftovers
    Trait: Natural Cure
    Timid
    EVs:6 HP/252 SPD/252 SP.ATK
    Moves:
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Thunderbolt
    -Rapid Spin

    I like Reflectmie better, but W/E.

    Ironically, Starmie hurts this team a lot, and Jynx can also become a serious pain if it gets going (Having Blissey as your only special walling type is really putting all your eggs in one basket). Try throwing in a STalking Heracross (there should be a set complete with EVs and whatnot in one of the guides here) instead of that Sandslash; that pokémon just really isn't doing anything for this team. A spiker is another thing to consider since this team can force switches quite well (thanks to Sceptile and Steelix).
     
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    Scarf- mamoswine can sweep through a whole lot of this team

    Blissey - poor defense
    Sceptile - Ice
    Steelix - Ground
    Sandslash - Ice

    Breloom takes care of the rest.
     
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