Rate/Help Please?

[feraligatr1.0]

I didn't finish making this team obviously, the ev's aren't even done... I'll take youre offerings of new pokemons, just no legends, no ubers, and also no CB movesets or Smogon sets please. Please dont talk about how horrible the team is just improve it, but you can rate it, I'd rather not here the detail because someone will say this, that, then all goes wrong. Reorder too, I haven't figred that out... I think this is where this goes...

Metagross @ (No Item)
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 76 HP / 104 Atk / 99 Def / 96 Spd / 70 SAtk / 65 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Meteor Mash
- Psychic
- Substitute
- Earthquake

Heracross (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Swarm
EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 85 Spd / 85 SAtk / 85 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Reversal
- Endure
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance

Flygon (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 85 Spd / 85 SAtk / 85 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Dragon Claw
- Flamethrower

Misdreavus (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 85 Spd / 85 SAtk / 85 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Calm Mind
- Pain Split
- Psychic
- Perish Song

Umbreon (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 85 Spd / 85 SAtk / 85 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Baton Pass
- Shadow Ball
- Substitute
- Mean Look

Tentacruel (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 85 Spd / 85 SAtk / 85 SDef
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Surf
- Swords Dance
- Toxic
- Ice Beam

 

[Fr0st]

If you aren't willing to use smogon sets or choice band sets and you don't even try to EV your pokemon then I doubt anybody will seriously rate this team, the current movesets are really bad tbh and I would go to smogon if I were you.
And by the way, your tentacruel is awesome, sword dance'd toxic/surf/ice beam is really going to own everybody!!!

 

[aragornbird]

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There are no such thing as "Smogon sets". All sets on that site are standard ones that everyone uses because it works.

Lol, I was just about to point out how great it is to have a Tentacruel use Swords Dance when Swords Dance raises physical attack and that Tentacruel has no physical attacks on it.

Also, are these Pokemon for in-game or are you doing this on Netbattle? If it's NB, then it will be easier to rate since you can change stuff with ease.

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[jc_rcw]

It looks like netbattle since it has the template, he should try to change ev's, give them an item, and a useful nature.