Rate Lightsworn Deck for Tourney.

[Joltz]

Hey there all. It actually took me a while to build this so can you please not slag it off. Anyway this is my Lightsworn deck built to enter tourneys. I feel it isn't ready yet so I have decided to get your opinion on the deck. Could you please rate, comment and suggest improvements? Here is the deck:

Monsters (20):
2x Honest
2x Jain, Lightsworn Paladin
1x Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress
3x Lumina, Lightsworn Summoner
2x Wulf, Lightsworn Beast
2x Celestia, Lightsworn Angel
2x Gragonith, Lightsworn Dragon
2x Judgement Dragon
3x Krebons
1x Plaguespreader Zombie

Spells (8):
1x Monster Reborn
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Foolish Burial
3x Solar Recharge
1x Realm of Light
1x Emergency Teleport

Traps (12):
2x Widespread Ruin
2x Lightforce Sword
1x Mirror Force
3x Sakuretsu Armor
2x Glorious Illusion
2x Lightsworn Barrier

Total (40)

Syncros (6):
1x Stardust Dragon
1x Goyo Guardian
1x Thought Ruler Archfiend
2x Black Rose Dragon
1x Psychic Lifetrancer

If I am missing any must haves please do let me know. Archlord Kristya may help...

 

[Cirrus]

...Just... no.

Lightsworns, above all, have speed. Speedy decks run as few Traps as possible. This deck is not speedy - it is rather slow.

First of all! Why Widespread Ruin or Saku instead of Dimensional Prison? That's just annoyingly ridiculous because Stardust basically = kthxbai.

Second of all! I see no Brionac, or any of the staples of an Extra Deck. Black Rose is Limited on the list of cards banned/restricted.

Third of all, your deck is too focused on attack points. I see no Ehren, no Necro Gardna, and only 1 Lyla.

So let me adjust it.

Monsters - 24
3 Honest
3 Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress
3 Lumina, Lightsworn Summoner
3 Wulf, Lightsworn Beast
2 Celestia, Lightsworn Angel
1 Jain, Lightsworn Paladin
1 Garoth, Lightsworn Warrior
1 Ehren, Lightsworn Monk
1 Ryko, Lightsworn Hunter
2 Judgment Dragon
1 Plaguespreader Zombie
3 Necro Gardna

Spells - 12
3 Charge of the Light Brigade
3 Solar Recharge
2 Foolish Burial
1 Monster Reincarnation
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Brain Control

Traps - 5
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Beckoning Light
1 Torrential Tribute

Extra Deck - 15
1 Armory Arm
1 Ally of Justice Catastor
1 Magical Android
1 Goyo Guardian
1 Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
1 Iron Chain Dragon
1 Black Rose Dragon
1 Ancient Fairy Dragon
1 X-Saber Urbellum
1 Stardust Dragon
1 Thought Ruler Archfiend
1 Red Dragon Archfiend
1 Avenging Knight Parshath
1 Dark End Dragon
1 Mist Worm

 

[Garland]

NEEDZ MOAR LYLA

It's not your typical LS deck, I'll give you that. It's Lightsworns glued to a snail. I'd recommend adding far more Lightsworns themselves over Traps/Spells etc.