Rate My NEW Team!!

[drogontimer]

I know I make a lot of threads but I'm trying to find my ultimate team and I think I finally did.

Torterra-Quick Claw
Wood Hammer
Earthquake
Crunch
Rock SLide

Arcanine-Razor Claw
Fire Blast
Flamethrower
Extreme Speed
Dragon Pulse

Dragonite-Amulet Coin
Dragon Rush
Aqua Tail
Steel Wing
Aerial Ace

Alakazam-Leftovers
Psychic
Focus Blast
Ice Beam
Substitute

Starmie-Razor Claw
Hydro Pump
Flash Cannon
Grass Knot
Recover

Togekiss-Luck Incense
Aura Sphere
Sky Attack
Roost
Shadow Ball

I hope this is an improvment from my previous team thread. Hope you have fun I'll check later tonight as I am going somewhere. Plz don't try to be nice about what you criticize?

 

[Anti]

This is much better than before, but I see a few problems. Torterra is cool, but arcanine needs to get rid of one of the fire moves. Hidden power, crunch, aerial ace, or Iron tail could work. Other than that it's good. I know nothing about togekiss whatsoever, so no comment for that one. If flash cannon is a steel move (or any physical move for that matter), get rid of it.
The standard i remember was t-bolt, ice beam, psychic and surf. I recommend that set (recover isn't good on starmie either). Dragonite would be fine it's just you're double-dipping move types from your other pokemon. He has a very diverse movepool, so use that to your advantage. For Zam, i thought he couldn't learn ice beam. I'm almost certain. Anyways, the standard is CM, psychic, and 2 elemental punches. The problem is arcanine and starmie cover those types. If grass knot is good you can use that instead of t-bolt and HP special instead of ice beam on starmie and you could use both. If focus blast is good keep that too. I know almost nothing about 4th gen, but I'll still offer my advice. Ice is a major weakness and my 3rd gen. standard Zam would mow through this team. It is a BIG improvement though in my opinion. I know i pointed out lots, but that doesn't mean it's right. go with your gut feelings. You're almost there.

 

[drogontimer]

that's ok starmie is getting replaced by Tyranitar. Oh by the way if you want to know the anything about any pokes or diamond and pearl go to *link removed* Go to the dex and type in who you want they have locations move lists and on their walthrough they have a list of every single item tm hm and key item in th game and where to get it. It's really helpful. By the way Togekiss has great spc att spc def def and ok hp speed is low but not too low.

 

[Azonic]

Use the Para-Flinch Togekiss, real annoying

Togekiss@Kings Rock
Trait: Serene Grace
Nature: Modest/Timid
EVs: 252 SPEED/ 252 SP. ATK/ 4 HP

Thunder Wave
Air Slash
Roost/Nasty Plot
Shadowball

 

[Pocket Monster Researcher Archer]

use some choice items if you like, they work. put them on your sweeping pokemon.

 

[drogontimer]

all my pokes are sweepers I don't battle other ppl just the game over and over and over again. My friends that have access to wi-fi kill me but thats to be expected. On has over 50 lvl 100s and has type teams. Not good for me. Oh and I hate these so called annoyers. I want to kill them not annoy them. I get the idea behind it but I don't agree with the use. I appreciate the feedback.

 

[Anti]

Thanks for the link. I'll check that out and i might be able to understand "night slash" and "roost." What moves will tyranitar know?

 

[drogontimer]

He'll know Ice Fang, stone edge,Crunch, and shadow claw.