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Rate my team and advice please

Slater32794

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    • Seen Jun 2, 2010
    Charzard


        - Fire Punch
        - Earthquake
        - Belly Drum
        - Substitute / Double-Edge
        Item Attached: Salac Berry
        Ability: Blaze
        EVs and Nature:
        EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
        Adamant Nature

    Porygon 2

         Thunder Wave/toxic
          Ice Beam
          Thunderbolt/discharge
          Substitute/Recover

       Evs: 252 SpAtk/252 hp/4 defense
    Not sure which nature yet

    Starmie
         
        - Rapid Spin
        - Recover
        - Surf
        - Ice Beam / Thunderbolt
        Item Attached: 
        Ability: Natural Cure
        EVs and Nature:
        EVs: 172 HP / 216 Spd / 120 SpAtk
        Timid Nature
    Gengar
        

        - Shadow Ball
        - Focus Blast
        - Thunderbolt
        - Explosion / Hidden Power [Fire /     Ice]
         Item Attached: Life Orb
         Ability: Levitate
         EVs and Nature:
         EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
         Timid Nature

    Snorlax

        - Body Slam / Return / Double-Edge
        - Crunch / Earthquake
        - Rest
        - Sleep Talk
        Item Attached: Leftovers
        Trait: Thick Fat
        EVs and Nature:
        EVs: 140 HP / 116 Atk / 252 SDef
        Careful Nature
    Alakazam
        - Psychic
        - Focus Blast
        - Shadow Ball
        - Trick
         
          Item Attached: Choice Specs
          Trait: Synchronize
         EVs and Nature:
         EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
         Timid Nature
     
    Leading with BellyZard is useless and most leads in OU will just shut you down. Using Charizard outside of the lower tiers probably isn't the best idea anyway ;x

    I don'e see why you need both Gengar and Alakazam either, especially since Zam is massive Pursuit bait for Tyranitar, even more so when it's choiced.

    No Stealth Rock either, which is a sin really. I'd switch out Charizard for a more reliable lead, there a bunch to chose from that can set up SR. You lack a dragon resist so Skarmory might work, or Forretress if you want to set up Spikes/T-spikes. Both can help deal with Salamence/Flygon/ect. to an extent.
     
    So swith skarmory in for bellyzard skarmory move set should be some thing like: -roost
    -Spikes or stealth rock
    -Whirlwind
    -Drill peck maybe brave bird (recoil may make brave bird unfavorable to me)
    and for evs probally maxed out in hp and The rest in def and a lil in speed.

    and Now what should take the place of alakazam maybe a physical sweeper like heracross?

    Skarmory
     
    - Roost
    - Spikes
    - Whirlwind
    - Drill Peck
    Item Attached:  Shed Shell
    Ability: Keen Eye
    EVs and Nature:
    EVs: 252 HP / 96 Atk / 140 Def / 20 Spd
    Impish Nature 

    Porygon 2

         Thunder Wave/toxic
          Ice Beam
          Thunderbolt/discharge
          Substitute/Recover
          Ability:trace
          Ev and Nature:252 SAtk/252    HP/4 Spd 
           timid nature

    Starmie 
        - Rapid Spin
        - Recover
        - Surf
        - Ice Beam / Thunderbolt
        Item Attached: 
        Ability: Natural Cure
        EVs and Nature:
        EVs: 172 HP / 216 Spd / 120 SAtk
        Timid Nature
    Gengar
        Special Sweeper

        - Shadow Ball
        - Focus Blast
        - Thunderbolt
        - Explosion / Hidden Power [Fire /     Ice]
         Item Attached: Life Orb
         Ability: Levitate
         EVs and Nature:
         EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
         Timid Nature 

    Snorlax

    The Sleep Talker

        - Body Slam / Return / Double-Edge
        - Crunch / Earthquake
        - Rest
        - Sleep Talk
        Item Attached: Leftovers
        Trait: Thick Fat
        EVs and Nature:
        EVs: 140 HP / 116 Atk / 252 SDef
        Careful Nature
    Heracross 

    - Megahorn
    - Close Combat
    - Stone Edge
    - Pursuit
    Item Attached: Choice Scarf
    Trait: Guts
    EVs and Nature:
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature 

    Is this any better?
     
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    Stealth Rock should always be used over Spikes. Anything that is immune to Ground...mainly Flying types are also immune to Spikes. Nothing is immune to Stealth Rock.

    I'm kinda of wondering why you are not using Porygon-Z over Porygon2

    It's better...but Blissey/Snorlax will wall you all day long if Heracross falls. I'm not really sure what can make it better though.
     
    Ok Well afterdoing some research and stuff I don't think I like this team very much I'm going to begin on building a new one I'll post it here when I'm done
     
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