Rate my team - First time online

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    Here's my line-up. Please tell me how to improve because I've never battled competitively before.

    Metagross w/Occa Berry - Lead
    Ability: Clear body
    Nature: Impish
    -Stealth rock
    -Meteor Mash
    -Earthquake
    -Explosion

    Dragonite w/Leftovers - Physical Sweeper
    Ability: Multiscale
    Nature: Adamant
    -Dragon Claw
    -Fire Punch
    -Roost
    -Earthquake

    Cloyster w/metronome - Tank
    Ability: Skill Link
    Nature:
    -Shell smash
    -Icicle spear
    -Rock blast
    -Hydro pump

    Magmortar w/ - Special Sweeper
    Ability: Flame Body
    Nature: Modest
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunderbolt
    -Focus Blast
    -Hidden Power Grass

    Venusaur w/Leftovers - Tank
    Ability: Overgrow
    Nature: Bold
    -Sludge Bomb
    -Leaf Storm
    -Sleep Powder
    -Synthesis

    Milotic w/Leftovers - Special Wall
    Ability: Cute Charm
    Nature: Calm
    -Ice Beam
    -Aqua Ring
    -Recover
    -Surf
     
    EVs would be helpful here. Anyway, I think that Dragonite could use Dragon Dance in place of Fire Punch, since EQ covers Steels already. I wouldn't call Cloyster a tank, since Shell Smash kills your defenses. I'd consider Focus Sash or White Herb as your item. There are better Fire sweepers out there than Magmortar, like Volcarona: -Quiver Dance -Bug Buzz -Fire Blast/Flame Dance -Hidden Power (Rock) Nature: Timid EVs: 252 SAtk/4 SDef/252 Spe Item: Life Orb Ability: Flame Body Milotic is better with these, since Cute Charm is too situational: -Scald -Ice Beam -Recover -Haze/Dragon Tail/Toxic Nature: Bold EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/4 SAtk Item: Leftovers Ability: Marvel Scale or -Rest -Sleep Talk -Scald -Dragon Tail Nature: Bold EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/4 SAtk Item: Leftovers Ability: Marvel Scale
     
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