Rate my Team Please!!!

[ZaChAttAck101]

Can someone rate my team and tell me what changes i should make to it?? idc about the harsh criticism because it may do me good in the long run..

My Team:
Metagross w/ quick claw
Moveset
Earthquake
psychic
hyper beam
meteor mash

ninetales
Move set
flamethrower
will o wisp
confuse ray
extrasensory

porygon-z w/ quick claw
move set
ice beam
thunderbolt
giga impact
tri attack

sceptile w/ scope lens
move set
agility
leaf blade
leaf storm
quick attack

Hariyama w/black belt
move set
vital throw
close combat
belly drum
rest or protect or endure

luxray
move set
thunder
rain dance
crunch
light screen

REMEMBER!!! any criticism would be nice and helping me find flaws in the team would work too..im not sure if im gonna keep luxray because i also want to put in a kingdra with the moveset hydro pump ice beam rain dance and dragon dance

 

[Dragon Tamer Ed]

My Team:
Metagross w/quick claw
Moveset
Earthquake
Zen Headbutt
Magnet Rise
meteor mash

He's much better when you focus on physical attacks. Magnet Rise to omit his Ground weakness

ninetales
Move set
flamethrower
will o wisp
comfuse ray/Nasty Plot
extrasensory/Energy Ball/Dark Pulse

Let it sweep some more

porygon-z w/Salac Berry
move set
Nasty Plot
Psychic
Ice Beam/Thunderbolt
Tri-Attack/Recover

Salac-Recover combo is an option here.

sceptile w/Big Root
move set
Leech Seed
Giga Drain
Dragon Pulse
Substitute

Big Root to increase the power of Giga Drain and Leech Seed. Roserade can also pull this set off, except for Dragon Pulse

or the physical version:

Sceptile w/Expert Belt or Life Orb
moveset
Swords Dance
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Leaf Blade

Hariyama w/Life Orb or Muscle Band
move set
Earthquake/Stone Edge
Cross Chop
belly drum
rest

If you really want to use a Belly-Resting Hariyama this set would work to an extent. (I just wish I'd caught my shiny Hariyama.)

luxray
move set
Spark/Thunder Fang
Ice Fang
crunch
Roar

or if you must use special attacks:

Luxray
moveset
Rain Dance
Thunder
HP Ice
Roar/Thunder Wave

The team needs quite a bit of work but I think I've put you on the right track.

 

[ZaChAttAck101]

lol..thanks...now to start searching for heart scales =(

 

[MegaDitto]

First.......The Natures.

It's important.

 

[Faceless*]

Luxray
moveset
Rain Dance
ThunderHP Ice
Roar/
Thunder WaveThe team needs quite a bit of work but I think I've put you on the right track.

NO NO DONT YOU DARE TEACH THUNDER TO LUXRAY! its better at physical attacks than sp.'s, use thunder fang instead

dont use sp. luxray, youll fall to your knees

 

[sims796]

Yes, sp.att Luxray is a waste of time and energy.

 

[sanjay120]

Guys, Thunderbolt Luxray does more than Spark Luxray on a Pokemon with equal defenses. Try it out on any damage calc.

And Magnet Rise sucks. It only lasts for five turns and Metagross has better things to be doing, like killing whatever dares to EQ it.

And lol Giga Impact PoryZ.

 

[sims796]

I feel that both moves are a waste of time on Luxray. And Thunderbolt is much stronger than Spark. If it isn't doing much more than slightly the same amount of damage as Spark on a Luxray, it isn't worth using.

 

[Iceman3k]

Can someone rate my team and tell me what changes i should make to it?? idc about the harsh criticism because it may do me good in the long run..

My Team:
Metagross w/ Life Orb
Moveset
Earthquake / Stone Edge / Explosion
Zen Headbutt
Agility
meteor mash

ninetales
Move set
flamethrower
Hypnosis
Substitute
Will-o-Wisp / Energy Ball

porygon-z w/ Choice Specs / Wise Specs
move set
ice beam
thunderbolt / Nasty Plot
Dark Pulse
tri attack

sceptile w/ Leftovers
move set
Substitute
Hidden Power (Ice) / Hidden Power (Rock) / Dragon Pulse
leaf storm
Leech Seed

Hariyama w/black belt
move set
vital throw
close combat
belly drum
rest or protect or endure
Replace this one.

luxray
move set
thunder
Ice Fang
crunch
Fire Fang

REMEMBER!!! any criticism would be nice and helping me find flaws in the team would work too..im not sure if im gonna keep luxray because i also want to put in a kingdra with the moveset hydro pump ice beam rain dance and dragon Pulse

k now to attack some of the recent commentary

NO NO DONT YOU DARE TEACH THUNDER TO LUXRAY! its better at physical attacks than sp.'s, use thunder fang instead

I can see tons of Bulky Waters and even Skarmory laughing at Luxray with Thunder Fang. Naughty Natured Luxray w/Thunderbolt does a LOT more than Thunder Fang would hope to do.

Next thing I'd like to spit on is someone suggesting PorygonZ with Salac Berry. Unless you ran with only 270 Speed, and a lot of HP and defenses, I heavily doubt that could actually work.

Lastly, Leaf Storm + Leftovers offers far more benefits than Giga Drain + Big Root.

 

[Vainz]

sceptile w/ scope lens
move set
agility
leaf blade
leaf storm
quick attack

You must get rid of all the Physical attacks on Sceptile because he is a Speical Attacker. Remove Leaf Blade, Quick Attack, and since you dont have Leaf Blade, remove the scope lens.