Rate My Team

[GAM3NURD]

Okay heres a team that I hope I can work out and make a competitive battling team.But as of now I play a lot of wonder luncher battles so look past the helping hand on Umbreon and the no dupe items.And I had a Dragonite in the team but found he was just to slow for the team.But any help would be great thx U.

WallFerrothorn
Relaxed,Iron Barbs,Rocky Helmet
252HP,100 Def,158SpD
Power Whip
Protect
Leech Seed
Spikes

SweeperVolcarona
Timid,Flame Body,Passho Berry
6HP,252SpA,252S
Heat Wave
Hurricane
Bug Buzz
Quiver Dance

TankSwampert
Modest,Torrent,Expert Belt
254HP,128Def,128SpD
Hidden Power(Dark)
Ice Beam
EQ
Surf

WallUmbreon
Adamant,Synchronize,Leftovers
254HP,128Def,128SpD
Toxic
Helping Hand
Substitute
Wish

ScoutMienshao
Jolly,Inner Focus,Focus Sash
6Hp,252A,252S
Stone Edge
Hi Jump Kick
U-Turn
Fake Out

SweeperGarchomp
Jolly,Sand Veil,Life Orb
6HP,252A,252S
Dragon Claw
Swords Dance
EQ
Fire Fang

 

[Vrai]

Changes and thoughts in bold.

Ferrothorn
Relaxed,Iron Barbs, Leftovers
252HP,100 Def,158SpD
Power Whip
Protect/Gyro Ball
Leech Seed
Spikes

Volcarona
Timid,Flame Body,Leftovers / Life Orb
6HP,252SpA,252Speed
Flame Dance
Hidden Power [Rock] / Morning Sun
Bug Buzz
Quiver Dance

Swampert's entire set needs a redux, other pokemon can do what you had wayyy better

[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Ice Beam
move 4: Roar / Boiling Water
item: Leftovers
nature: Relaxed
evs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpD

Umbreon is awful, taunt-bait, useless this gen, weak, etc etc.

Mienshao
Jolly,Regenerator is the only reason to use this, Life Orb because it's not a lead and recovers the LO damage
6Hp,252A,252S
Stone Edge
Hi Jump Kick
U-Turn
Fake Out

Garchomp
Jolly,Sand Veil,Life Orb
6HP,252A,252S
Dragon Claw/Outrage
Swords Dance
EQ
Fire Fang
^ standard

stuff noted. Umbreon is absolutely useless and idk what you were even using it for so honestly I don't know what to offer for a replacement. :/

 

[PlatinumDude]

Scizor may be a good replacement for Umbreon:
-U-turn
-Bullet Punch
-Superpower
-Pursuit
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 248 HP/252 Atk/8 Spe
Item: Choice Band
Ability: Technician

 

[Musica]

WallFerrothorn
Relaxed,Iron Barbs,Rocky Helmet
252HP,100 Def,158SpD
Power Whip
Protect
Leech Seed
Spikes

Leftovers over Rocky Helmet for survivability
Gyroball can be an option over protect since it hits most types for neutral damage.

SweeperVolcarona
Timid,Flame Body,Passho Berry
6HP,252SpA,252S
Heat Wave
Hurricane
Bug Buzz
Quiver Dance

Hidden Power Rock over Hurricane because hits pesky flying types who try to switch in such as Gyarados, Dragonite, Salamence, Gliscor, etc, and also those Fire-types.

Life Orb - more damage or Passho Berry is good and opted for survivability. Fire Blast can also be an option over Heat Wave if you don't care about the accuracy loss.

TankSwampert
Modest,Torrent,Expert Belt
254HP,128Def,128SpD
Hidden Power(Dark)
Ice Beam
EQ
Surf

HP Dark is useless for Swampert.
Modest nature and Expert Belt are for sweepers.
Better follow Vrai's suggestion


WallUmbreon
Adamant,Synchronize,Leftovers
254HP,128Def,128SpD
Toxic
Helping Hand
Substitute
Wish

I have to agree with Vrai with this too. Umbreon is really a Taunt bait. If you want to have a wall that can do something else when Taunted, can have wish support, bulky enough and fast enough, try Togekiss.

Togekiss @ Leftovers
Calm/Timid
Serene Grace
252 HP 68 Def 188 Spe
~Encore
~Wish
~Thunder Wave / Body Slam / Aura Sphere
~Air Slash

ScoutMienshao
Jolly,Inner Focus,Focus Sash
6Hp,252A,252S
Stone Edge
Hi Jump Kick
U-Turn
Fake Out

Regenerator is the perfect partner for U-Turn. Life orb is way better than focus sash because it will just scout and not act as a lead.

SweeperGarchomp
Jolly,Sand Veil,Life Orb
6HP,252A,252S
Dragon Claw
Swords Dance
EQ
Fire Fang

My thoughts in bold. I saw Vrai's comments and mine are similar so I edited and suggested that you try them out too, lol. I offer Togekiss as support replacement over Umbreon. I was going to suggest Vaporeon, but you already have Swampert so nvm.