rate my team

[Hyunbin]

ok this is the first team i made up..
rate it, pull it apart, spit on it, go on a date with it, just help make it better please 'u'
make any changes xcept that flygon and umbreon stay

thanks ^^

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Flygon w/ Leftovers
6 HP / 252 Attack / 252 Speed
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Crunch
- Fire Blast

Umbreon w/ Leftovers
6 HP / 252 Defense / 252 Sp.Defense
- Mean Look
- Baton Pass
- Moonlight
- Toxic/Feint Attack

Shuckle w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 126 Defense / 132 Sp.Defense
- Toxic
- Double Team
- Rest
- Gastro Acid

Kingdra w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 6 Speed
- Surf
- Dragon Pulse
- Ice Beam
- Flash Cannon

Gallade w/ Leftovers (need to train)
???
- Psycho Cut
- Swords Dance
- X-Scissor
- Poison Jab

Gengar w/ Leftovers
218 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 40 Speed
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
- Destiny Bond
- Energy Ball

 

[Akuchiki Byakuya]

ok this is the first team i made up..
rate it, pull it apart, spit on it, go on a date with it, just help make it better please 'u'
make any changes xcept that flygon and umbreon stay

thanks ^^

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Flygon w/ Leftovers
6 HP / 252 Attack / 252 Speed
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Crunch
- Fire Blast

Umbreon w/ Leftovers
6 HP / 252 Defense / 252 Sp.Defense
- Mean Look
- Baton Pass
- Moonlight
- Toxic/Feint Attack

Shuckle w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 126 Defense / 132 Sp.Defense
- Toxic
- Double Team
- Rest
- Gastro Acid

Kingdra w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 6 Speed
- Surf
- Dragon Pulse
- Ice Beam
- Flash Cannon

Gallade w/ Leftovers (need to train)
???
- Psycho Cut
- Swords Dance
- X-Scissor
- Poison Jab

Gengar w/ Leftovers
218 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 40 Speed
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
- Destiny Bond
- Energy Ball

Salamence w/ Leftovers
6 HP / 200 Attack / 252 Speed / 58 hp
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- arial ace
- Fire Blast

Umbreon w/ Leftovers
84-180 Defense / 252 Sp.Defense / 84-180 hp
- Mean Look
- Baton Pass
- Moonlight
- Toxic

Shuckle w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 126 Defense / 132 Sp.Defense
- Toxic
- Double Team(illegal) sleep talk
- Rest
- Gastro Acid

Kingdra w/ Leftovers
252 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 6 Speed
- Surf
- Dragon Pulse
- Ice Beam
- Flash Cannon

Gallade w/ Leftovers (need to train)
???
- Psycho Cut
- Swords Dance
- X-Scissor
- Poison Jab

Gengar w/ petaya berry
6 HP / 252 Sp.Attack / 252 Speed
- Thunderbolt
- Focus Blast
- Substitute
- Energy Ball[/QUOTE]

I don't know much about kingdra or gallade so your on your own with those ones.

 

[Toothache]

Natures?

Flygon: Sure, I guess. I'd use a Choice Band here though

Umbreon: More HP please. Also, don't bother with attacking. Toxic's ok, I guess, but I don't like it, there are so many better things Umbreon can do.

Shuckle: Ew, Double Team. Lose this thing altogether, and replace with a defensive wall. I'm thinking Steelix:

Steelix @ Leftovers
Nature: Impish
EV: 200 HP / 178 Att / 132 Def
Trait: Sturdy
Earthquake
Stone Edge/Rock Slide
Explosion
Crunch

Kingdra: Replace Flash Cannon with Rain Dance (Swift Swim abuse). Otherwise fine.

Gengar: Serious need to change your EVs. That much HP won't help him survive much. Better off sticking it all into Speed. Moves are ok though.

 

[Hyunbin]

Umbreon: More HP please. Also, don't bother with attacking. Toxic's ok, I guess, but I don't like it, there are so many better things Umbreon can do.

Kingdra: Replace Flash Cannon with Rain Dance (Swift Swim abuse). Otherwise fine.

then what else would u suggest for umbreon?
and kingra has the sniper ability

 

[Vainz]

Ok, there is a harsh truth that all Shuckle lovers have to accept. Its true, it has the Def and Sp.Def of a God, but its HP is so horrible, that it dosent even matter. I dont like Steelix as a wall, even though it would make a good one if only it had better Sp.Def. I would suggest a Dusknoir. They not only have very good Def, but they also have good Sp.Def. If you use him, you must max HP Ev's. Get rid of Poison Jab on Gallade, and put in Leaf Blade.

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