rate these sprites of mine

Th first one's wings are cut off on the right wide. The tail isn't connected either. And lastly the outline could be better,but very creative idea.

With the second sprite,I mean no offense at all,but it's really bad. I dont even know what it's supposed to be. Looks like you scribbled lines all over it.

Oh well,you have tons of room for improvement. I hope I helped.
 
The first one looks okay, butthe persective looks a tad off though. No problem... The second sprite, I can tell, is really just a Metang sprite that has been inverted and given a white background. No offense, but that is kinda ripping off Nintendo. Try giving it a custom paint job. besides, the bright outline makes it difficult to determine what the sprite is.

But, this is only my opinion, so feel free to disregard it if you wish...
 
This is my rating but if it's low don't stop spriting. 1st sprite: The left wing is missing a piece of it at the top, and the right wings cut off. And the tail isn't connected to the body. But the ears are very good. And like alex said, a very creative idea. I give it a 3/10. 2nd sprite: Once again, agreeing with alex. It looks like you just scribbled red all over it. It doesn't even cover the whole sprite. And it's enlarged so it looks bad. 0/10. My suggestions: For the fusion, to help with the tail, take the ninjask sprite and put it over the tail, instead of vice versa. And for the wings, just draw in the rest with the pencil. For the recolor, I suggest looking at the tutorial. You have potential, my friend. You just need a little practice.
 
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you want a rating the first one is ok but you need to work on we're you place the ears 4/10 number 2 like alex it looks like you just scribled red on it 0/10
 
obelisk-kun said:
it looks like you just scribled red on it 0/10
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rich coming from the guy who sprayed some random colours on a gengar and called it hawaiann

anyways I really dont like either of them

1: very choppy

2:not even shaded
 
Too tell you the turth, your sprites aren't that good. The first one, the fusion there are some problems with it. The tail looks a little chopped and it really needs some more detail and more parts added into it. On the second one it looks like a blood coverd Mentang nothing much at all. There is no shading what so ever on it and he color is just covered all around it. There is always time for improvement though. :/
 
They need to be cropped, really really badly, the first one isn't great but its so much better than the second, it looks a mess and is to Pixelated, they need alot of work.
 
well kid ya tried and that's what's important...i f ya want any help feel free to contact me on

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please tell me how to shade. and the first one I think that wing was like that when I saved it as a picture.I don't think theres a way I could make the evee tale completly atached(sp).
 
There's usually a way to fix a sprite (note that I used the word usually)
For the tail~
-Grab the original
-Cut out the part that you want
-Colour it the way you want it.
-Overlap the sprite with the tail and drag it to the wanted area
-Rinse and repeat.
For shading~
-Take the original colour
-On Paint, go to "Colours"
-Click on "Edit colours"
-Select the colour you want
-Use the Pencil tool to shade in part of the sprite/pixelart
-Rinse and repeat
I know you'll be dissapointed but I know that you have potential.
 
Like I said you can go to the spriting tutorial. It tells you how to make a nice fusion/recolor.
 
These are pretty bad. The 1st could be decent if you actually connected the parts you were fusing together completely. The 2nd, is just plain terrible, considering you just enlarged the pic and recolored(??) it red. Just find some tutorials and practice. You can only improve. :P

Vaati, I literally laughed out loud at the Obelisk-Kun comment. Nice, very nice. Hahaha. ;)
 
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