Recreational Thoughts

[Zeffy]

Recreational Thoughts

Like a plane losing its control,
my love is crashing towards you.
Pitiful, so it may seem
but I'm falling for you.

Your soft, warming eyes,
and your lips that shine.
It seems that a kiss,
simply a kiss would make me fall.

In my thoughts you appear,
in my imagination, you become real.
I can't let you go,
simply not like this.
I love you so much,
that if you'd leave me...I'd die.

Meh, another rushed work from my English subject. xD
Gosh, she's making us do stuff like this lately. xD

 

[Binary]

Your teacher is pretty awesome, Zeff. At least we can see more of your literalistic talent. And for a rushed piece of work, it really stands out. I don't see how the title is related to the poem though. Maybe you could explain?
Awesome poem. <3

 

[TJgamer]

If you continue practicing like this, you'll be writing a masterpiece in seconds.
I'm not kidding.

But like what Binary said, what does the title have to do with the actual poem?

 

[Cloud Lines]

Not too shabby. I like it.
The title makes sense to me.
Lol. My English teacher is the same way.

 

[TJgamer]

I changed my review above.
My apologies.

 

[Zeffy]

The title, well, was said by the most dear person to me IRL. That phrase that she gave me, gave me this idea while my teacher said to write a poem about romance and so...I used it. xD

 

[TJgamer]

The title, well, was said by the most dear person to me IRL. That phrase that she gave me, gave me this idea while my teacher said to write a poem about romance and so...I used it. xD

Oh my!
...That is just beautiful!

:cer_love:

Has he read this poem?

 

[Zeffy]

Oh my!
...That is just beautiful!

:cer_love:

Has he read this poem?

He's a she, I'm a he. Get it? I hope so. xD

Not yet. If I do show her, I hope she likes it. xD

 

[TJgamer]

He's a she, I'm a he. Get it? I hope so. xD

Not yet. If I do show her, I hope she likes it. xD

Why does your gender say "Female" then?

 

[Ninja Caterpie]

Why does your gender say "Female" then?

they see me trollin'~

Nice poem, Zeffers. There's this unexplainable awesomeness about it...but that could just be me being silly and romantic haha. It doesn't sound very rushed, though. :D

 

[mervyn797]

You are a master of on the spot poems, right? XD; How much time are you guys given to write?
I was a bit confused how the title was related to the poem as well...

Like a plane losing its control,
my love is crashing towards you.

I find these two lines remarkable the way you formed a connection! :>

Why does your gender say "Female" then?

Some people just do that for fun, or else it might be to earn the Gender Bender emblem. XD;

 

[TJgamer]

Some people just do that for fun, or else it might be to earn the Gender Bender emblem. XD;

There's an emblem for something like that?
That's pretty odd.

 

[Zeffy]

You are a master of on the spot poems, right? XD; How much time are you guys given to write?
I was a bit confused how the title was related to the poem as well...

We write poems in the duration of 15-20 minutes. Hard to do..:(

they see me trollin'~

Nice poem, Zeffers. There's this unexplainable awesomeness about it...but that could just be me being silly and romantic haha. It doesn't sound very rushed, though. :D

nah, its just you being silly and romantic
Thanks!

There's an emblem for something like that?
That's pretty odd.

Ehh, we do it for fun. xD;

 

[TJgamer]

I understand what you mean.

15 to 20 minutes?! Wow, you must have some talent there.

 

[bOxieLiciOus]

you used to words elegantly together with your feelings and emotion.

great poem~ xx;

 

[Midnight Moon~]

Oh wow. This poem is wonderful! *Gives you a cookie* Thank you so very much for posting this beautiful piece of incredible awesomeness :D