Revenge of the Shadows

Bluestar Jet

Aqua Destruction...
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    this is my first fic, so I hope you like it...

    -Shaderon-


    It's magnificent wings shone with the colors of the rainbow. Ho-Oh steadily flew along the coast of Gateon Ocean, while I trailed steadily, invisibly behind him.

    My shadowy fur prickled with energy. I knew I couldn't keep my shield of invisibility up for more than a few more minuets before Ho-Oh noticed my aura of power. I decided to reveal myself and push our battle out into the ocean, where I could steal other Pokemon's energy instead of mine.

    I let go of my barrier that kept me invisible. Ho-Oh immediately turned around, but was not fast enough to dodge my detonation. It resounded like a bomb in the air and threw Ho-Oh out at sea.

    For the first time, I noticed Ho-Oh's beautiful wings. I stared at them for a few minuets, but suddenly my mind came back to me. It's a trap! I thought. He's hypnotizing me with his beauty! Well, it's not going to work.

    I launched another detonation at him, but Ho-Oh was too quick. He dodged it and began to charge sacred fire. Perfect, I thought.

    He launched the attack. I held out my paw, and felt it begin to touch the flames. Immediately, all the power was drained of his attack into my paw. With this power, I threw a bolt of energy at him. He was momentarily surprised, but quickly tried to dodge. The bolt was far too quick, and scored a direct hit.

    His body was paralyzed for a few seconds, so I took this chance to throw an array of detonations at him. Fear showed in his eyes before the detonations hit. I felt no sorrow in me as the crumpled body of Ho-Oh slowly floated down to Gateon Ocean. I verified to be sure he was dead before teleporting to find Lugia.
     
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    Ok. Chapter one will be up later this week.
     
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    i must need alot of help on mine this is stunning. just one thing who is fighting Ho Oh maybe i missed something or were we not supposed to find out. *waits for the pulse pounding answer*:nervous:
     
    good start so far. i agree with akinari-pics would b nice.
    ~keep up the great story~
     
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