Rey's Famous Pokemon Story

[Rey Lewis 55]

Chapter One
The New Beginning​

Rey Lewis, a ten year old boy woke up from a magnificant dream. The dream was about him winning the elite four championship and than so when he woke up, he pulled his blanket off his body and stepped his two feet on the soft floor of his bedroom. He went in his closet and picked out his clothes and walked into the bathroom. He shut the door behind him and turned on the water.​

When the water was hot and ready, he took off his clothes and stepped inside. He grabbed the shampoo and conditioner and put it on his wet hair and than put his hair under the spraying water so he can get it all off. When he was done, he turned off the water and pulled the shower curtian so he can see himself in the mirror in front of him.​

He stepped down on the wet floor and grabbed a towel to dry off. He put on his clothes and than he grabbed his toothbrush to brush his teeth. When he was done, he smiled and saw those sparkilng white teeth. His own teeth almost blinded him so he opened the bathroom door and stepped in his bedroom. He grabbed his cell phone and got on his jacket.​

He also pulled on his backpack filled with his things and walked into the livingroom.​

"Goodbye mom and dad, I'm going to Professor Oak's laboratory to pick my first Pokemon," said Rey.​

"Okay than, make sure you have your cell phone with you at all times," said his mom.​

Rey went to the kitchen and opened the front door and shut it behind him. He grabbed his bike and pedalled as fast as he could so he wouldn't be late to pick his first Pokemon from Professor Oak. He braked in front of Professor Oak's laboratory a few minutes later and than he locked it. He opened the front door and saw Professor Oak waiting for him.​

As he walked towards Professor Oak, he was talking to another Pokemon trainer that wanted a Pokemon also.​

"Hello there, my name is Samuel Oak and welcome to my Pokemon laboratory. If you want a Pokemon, just let me see your Pokemon trainer card and you can pick your Pokemon," said Professor Oak.​

Rey grabbed his wallet from his pocket and pulled out his trainer card so Professor Oak can see it. When he saw the trainer card, Rey went on the table and looked at the Pokemon to choose from. He looked and looked and than he finally chose to pick the water-type Pokemon Squirtle. When he was about to walk towards the entrance, he got stopped by the other Pokemon trainer.​

"Hey there, my name is Gary Oak and I'm the professor's grandson, I picked a Pokemon also and than so why won't we have a Pokemon battle together?" asked Gary.​

"Sure, I'll love to have a Pokemon battle with you," said Rey.​

Both Rey and Gary brought out their two Pokemon and than when Rey's Squirtle came out, he looked like it was ready to battle. He saw that Gary brought out a Bulbasaur which was strong against water-type Pokemon.​

"Okay now Squirtle, use Tackle now!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle ran towards the Bulbasaur. When the Bulbasaur got hit by the tackle, the Bulbasaur fell to the ground.​

"Get up and use Tackle now!" exclaimed Gary.​

Bulbasaur got up from the hard floor and ran towards Squirtle. Squirtle got hit and than it fell to the ground.​

"Use Tackle again now Squirtle!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle got up and ran towards Bulbasaur once more. The Bulbasaur dodged the attack and waited for command.​

"Use Tackle once more Bulbasaur!" exclaimed Gary.​

When Bulbasaur took its last hit to Squirtle, Squirtle was down on the ground once more. Rey was sad that he lost the Pokemon battle. He walked towards Gary and shook his hand. Since he lost, Rey gave Gary one-hundred dollars for winning. Gary walked outside of the laboratory before Rey did.​

As he put Squirtle back inside its pokeball, he walked towards the front door and opened it. He was outside and than he unlocked his bike. He got on it and pedelled towards route one. When he was about to go inside route one, he stopped for a second because he saw a beautiful blue crystal glowing bird flying towards the northern sky.​

to be continued...​

 

[Levity-Adam]

Lovely chapter. :)
Although, you do seem to write the story as if it is a routine, such as when it says

"He grabbed the shampoo and conditioner and put it on his wet hair and than put his hair under the spraying water so he can get it all off."

This is slightly unnecessary as the reader would know that he would do that. You could use descriptive language to replace these sentences. Anyway, I like the last sentence

"When he was about to go inside route one, he stopped for a second because he saw a beautiful blue crystal glowing bird flying towards the northern sky."

as it softens the mood for the story yet keeps the reader in suspense for the next chapter! (Which is what I'm in suspense for!)

Good luck with the story!

 

[Rey Lewis 55]

Chapter Two
Pidgey, The Tiny Bird​

As Rey entered route one, he saw a lot of wild Pidgey flying in the air and a lot of wild Rattata fighting over a berry bush. He kept on pedalling over the grassy route and than suddenly, he saw a hurt wild Pidgey on the ground. He stopped and than got off the bike. He walked over to the wild Pidgey and bent over on his knees to pick it up.​

As the one foot wild Pidgey was just laying there on his palm, it started to breath slowly. The stomach slowly moved as its beak opened widely. The wild Pidgey took a deep breath and than suddenly, it bit Rey on the nose. The wild Pidgey hopped off of Rey's palm and tugged on his shoe. For Rey, it sounded like the wild Pidgey wanted a Pokemon battle so he brought out Squirtle.​

Squirtle looked ready for a good battle with its eyes staring straight at the wild Pidgey.​

"Okay Squirtle, use Tackle now!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle ran towards the wild Pidgey. When Squirtle hit it in the face, the wild Pidgey got up and attacked Squirtle with tackle.​

"Get up! Use Tackle once more!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle got up off the grassy ground ran towards the wild Pidgey once more. The wild Pidgey got hit and it was really damaged. Rey opened up his backpack and pulled out a pokeball. He grabbed the pokeball and threw it at the nearly fainted wild Pidgey. The pokeball locked the wild Pidgey in place and than the wild Pidgey was caught.​

Rey and Squirtle was happy that they caught their first Pokemon ever. Rey put back Squirtle inside its pokeball and than he got back on his bike and pedalled forward. He kept on pedalling and than suddenly, he saw a shady image up ahead. He pedalled farther to see who it was and instead of Gary, it was another Pokemon trainer.​

"Hey you, you just came from Pallet Town did you, I want a battle from you," said the Pokemon trainer.​

"Okay than, what are the rules?" asked Rey.​

"The rules are one on one Pokemon battle, you may use two if you want," said the Pokemon trainer.​

The Pokemon trainer brought out the first Pokemon and it was a surprising Charmander. Rey brought out Squirtle and than it looked like it was really happy to see a fire-type Pokemon.​

"Use Tackle now Squirtle!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle ran towards the Charmander. It tackled it to the ground with a huge blow to the gut.​

"Get up now and use Scratch Charmander!" exclaimed the Pokemon trainer.​

Charmander got up off of the grassy ground and raised its claws. It ran towards Squirtle and scratched it in the face.​

"Okay now Squirtle, use Tackle again!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle wipped off its face and stared at the Charmander. It ran towards the Charmander again and tackled it to the ground.​

"Get up and use Tackle again!" exclaimed the Pokemon trainer.​

The Charmander looked weak but it still scratched Squirtle on the face.​

"Okay now Squirtle, finish the Charmander off with another Tackle!" exclaimed Rey.​

Squirtle stepped back towards Rey and than it charged at the Charmander. When Squirtle hit the Charmander, the Charmander was fainted.​

"No! My Charmander, we'll see who's going to win now. Go Rattata!" exclaimed the Pokemon trainer.​

The Pokemon trainer made Charmander return to its pokeball and than he brought out a Rattata.​

"Okay than Squirtle, come back. Go Pidgey!" exclaimed Rey.​

When Pidgey came out of its pokeball, it looked ready to battle but it was still weak before Rey caught it.​

"Use Tackle now Pidgey!" exclaimed Rey.​

Pidgey flew up in the air and flew towards the Rattata. The Rattata got hit hard and than it got up.​

"Use Tackle now Rattata!" exclaimed the Pokemon trainer.​

The Rattata ran towards Pidgey but suddenly it missed because Pidgey dodged it by flying up in the air.​

"Now use Tackle again Pidgey!" exclaimed Rey.​

Since Pidgey was in the air, it just flew down towards the Rattata and tackled the Rattata to the ground. The Rattata was fainted and Pidgey, Squirtle, and Rey won the Pokemon battle.​

"Now, since you've won, you earn one-hundred dollars and a hand shake from me," said the Pokemon trainer.​

When Rey shook hands with the Pokemon trainer, he looked at Squirtle and Pidgey. When he looked at them, they looked stronger than the first time. He made Squirtle and Pidgey retun to their pokeballs and than when he got on his bike, he pedalled towards a sign that said "Viridian City up ahead".​

He read the sign and than he pedalled faster so he can go to Viridian City before the sun went down. He stopped to get a drink near a pond and than suddenly, he saw water-type Pokemon swimming inside the pond. He looked at it and he went and pedalled towards Viridian City to heal his pokemon so they can be ready for the next battle.​

to be continued...​