Riceeman's Sprite Showcase

[Riceeman]

Just want to show my selection of sprites, and see what everybody thinks of them. I know I can improve, but I need to know in what aspects. So BRING ON THE SPRITES! XD

Mixes:

LUCAS COSTUMES! (New idea):

Edits:

And that's all for now. I've got much more, but I want to keep you waiting. :P

 

[Yuoaman]

Heehee Lucas be a TREEKO!!!

Okay, onto serious commentary: I really like your Lucas suits, they're very professional, and in my opinion a great idea.

Of your edits: I really love your Water Cloak Burmy, it has the quality of official sprites, so kudos to you there, and you were also able to capture the quality of cascading water, which also adds to the sprite. Your Jynx edit is a little awkward, but you made due with what you were given.

Onto your mixes: That Chimchar/Duskull line is simply extraordinary, you blended the two very well, and it is indistinguishable as two separate sprites. But several of your mixes seem a little rushed, or not well thought out, as an example: the Meganium/Mamoswine; the previous entries in this evolution line are well done, and are proportioned correctly, but with the final stage you've made several errors; 1. The tusks: they seem to be emerging from both the petals surrounding the neck, and the neck itself which just isn't right, 2. The ?mustache?: The mix appears to have a mustache, and a very strange mustache at that, I know what you were getting at with it, but I don't think it belongs in that specific sprite.

I hope my comments are well received, and help you improve : D

 

[Riceeman]

Points taken on Mamoganium, but you try mixing those two :P I really don't think there is much that I can do to help that sprite.

Thanks for the other comments. I love Water Burmy and the Chimchar line as well.

 

[Mitchman]

XD nice.But the umbreon lucas looks like umbreon is grinning. Evilly!

 

[Yume Tsuki]

Your mixes look proffessional and those costumes look really great. Keep up the good work

 

[Riceeman]

Thanks for the comments. I've recently had a spout of Burmy Fever:

Water Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when Surfing.

Magma Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Volcanoes.

Shadow Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Graveyards and Ruins.

GRIM REAPER WORMADON SHALL DEVOUR YOUR SOULS!

Cloud Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when on top of High Towers and Mountains.

Slime Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Sewers or other Dirty places.

Volt Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Powerplants and Radio Stations.

 

[Haza]

Thanks for the comments. I've recently had a spout of Burmy Fever:

Water Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when Surfing.

Magma Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Volcanoes.

Shadow Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Graveyards and Ruins.

GRIM REAPER WORMADON SHALL DEVOUR YOUR SOULS!

Cloud Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when on top of High Towers and Mountains.

Slime Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Sewers or other Dirty places.

Volt Cloak

Burmy takes on this cloak when in Powerplants and Radio Stations.

those all look very good and make sense. Thank God the database error is fixed.

 

[Yume Tsuki]

the burmy's look very well done ^^

 

[Riceeman]

Even more sprites:

Mixes:

Scratches:

 

[Tialgo]

the Burmys are looking really good, the last two look like rotom^^. Your scratches are better than some i've seen before, go on like that and you'll be the master ;)

 

[= GPR =]

Well well well...

I have to say that you have some of the best stuff i've seen in a while! Burmys are exelent, as you have been told over and over. They are nicely done, have great incorporations, and make sence!

Good Fusions (and why):

Chicorita/Swinub (good incorporation of patterns and limbs onto chicorita's body)
Chimchar/Duskull (again, good incorporation of duskulls features into chimchars build)
Eevee/Clamperl (awe...its so cute! i mean cool... i did not say cute again! >ahem<)
Umbreon/Huntail (thats a great job fusing together two totally different pokemon, it blends nice)
Whole Wurmple line (you, again, did a nice job incorporating totally different pokemon into a reasonable and good looking line)
Remoraid/Barboach (nicely done putting the design of remoraid into the body of barboach)
Whiscash/Octilery (this is one of my faves... it is well done form wise and makes sense, not to mention the look on it's face is priceless!)
Larvitar/Farfetch'd (you combined two different pokemon into one to make a very cool, an angry looking bird)
Gardevoir/Bellossom (very pretty... nicely done...)
Glalie/Hitmonlee (Nice lining that body in to the angle of the legs... that gets to be hard sometimes)

Probably my favorite line you have done is the Turtwig/seedot line. You have incorporated the designs and parts of seedots line into an already very distinguished line of turtigs. They are very nicely done, the colors look great, and pointy noses are always a plus! Speaking of plus, i give this line an A+!!!

Not so good ones (and why):

Meganium/Mamoswine (for obvious reasons)
last two of the chimchar line (you may have overdone them a bit, and the second one doesnt flow)
Gorebyss/Espeon (you took two of the cute... coolist pokemon and mixed them into a not so pretty mix that seems to have to many apediges...sp)
Buneary/Paras line (they are ugly...sorry if that was rash... but they just dont seem to make sense)
Magmortar/Electivire line ( another not so pleasant to the eye fusion that makes little sense)
Snorunt/tyrogue (seems "naked" and is a bit odd to the eye...not as odd as...)
Frosslass/Hitmonchan (is that an aipom face? this one just did not blend as nice as the glalie one)
Is that a spinda and a sableye? if so, it's not that bad...

Your scratches aren't bad at all. Pika is a bit conical, and the fakemon need a bit more definition. The first one is great, the second one's feet seem a bit strange, although i love the facial expression! the third one is odd though, his face is not on my loved facial expressions list...
The eyes need to be fixed, as well as the teeth, as a suggestion, a more turtwig like mouth might work.

The rest of the scratches are very nice. Good shading, dimension, and poses.

Keep up the great work and i'll be stopping by to see what's new!

 

[Riceeman]

Thank you for all the comments and critiscm. I didn't think people would like my stuff as much!

Oops. I forgot to mention that those big eyes on the final grass evo's forehead are fake. It's real eyes are always closed. Now here is the start of my fakedex I'm creating, starting with the grass line and the water line:

Biorben
The Holly Bear Pokémon
Biorben like picking berries with their long arms. They often climb trees in search of the rarest and tastiest.

Toodrees (Help me change it's name!)
The Tundra Tree Pokémon
Toodrees are swift fighters. They use their pine needle covered feet to inflict pain on the enemy.

Polendro
The Pine Bear Pokémon
Polendro are incredibly strong an powerful, but not very agile. They can crush huge ice rocks in their hands.

Mernea
The Sea Child Pokemon
Mernea often swim around in groups. They are playful and often will play with Human's swimming in the sea.

Gardoon
The Sea Guardian Pokemon
Gardoon are incredibly fierce when intruders endanger whatever they may be guarding. They use their tails to lash out at enemies.

What do you think?

 

[Riceeman]

My last post doesn't seem to have shown up as being posted...Oh well, tell me if there's not a post before this. I posted the start of my fakedex. Anyway, Here's the final water starter and Fire Starter.

Neptrin
The Ocean King Pokémon
Neptrin rule over their watery domains with an iron fist. They repulse invaders with swipes of their trident tails.

Petrool
The Burning Rag Pokemon
Petrool constantly run around to stop their flames covering their bodies. They are, Strangely, always happy.

 

[Nina]

The burning rag pokemon? xD How...interesting.

I'd have to say I REALLY love the Lucas outfits. OW Sprites are so small and there is less to work with.

The Magmar/Eletebuzz's eyes look really awkward....

Other than that, your Mixes look very well fused!
I really love that tree on Torterra/Shifty mix.

 

[Riceeman]

Thanks for all the comments. The benchmark of post 15 :P As a celebration, I'll be posting lots of sprites!

NOTE: NO STEALING!

Mixes:

Fakemon:

Edits:

Trainers:

Overworlds:

 

[Yume Tsuki]

ooh nice <3 however that driftblim/buneary/roselia combination looks a bit weird to me o_O

the munchlax looks firey (i don't know if i wrote that word good) well done ^^

 

[Rob-120]

Hm, these all look really good, some of them may need work...and some are just a little weird looking O.o *points to superman pokemon* but other then that...they look really nice ^^ keep up the good work

 

[Riceeman]

Sorry, I've been away for a bit. So, to keep this thread alive, meet Shieldee and Leafidon:

 

[Yume Tsuki]

nice, keep up the good work ^_^

 

[Yuoaman]

Ooh nice. The Leafdon is really well fused. Shieldee is pr4etty good, but it seems a little strange, but I can't put a finger on why...