Rip in the worlds

[Logmon1]

When Logan retrund to the real world after refusing with his bad half he found that the diminsins were coliding. But a few people were made DMs (Diminsin Master) like him. And now they must meet up, work together and save all the worlds.

Form:

Name:
Age:
looks:
personality:
Bad or Good:
DM:
Where are you from:

Mine:

Name: Logan
Age: 13
looks: Is about 5 feet tall, very light skin, black cloths.
personality: I think you guys know what to expet.
Bod or Good: Good
DM: yes
Where are you from: Real world

 

[chrno]

sorry but i dont understand your story, can you explain it better

 

[Shadowfaith]

Hmm, now I don?t have a clue what you?re talking about, who is Logan? You have to keep in mind that some people may not have seen the Anime or played the game you are talking about, so you need to give some background information of what has happened before your RPG plot, that?s the first step, to give some info on the Anime/ Game/ Movie you are talking about.

What is Logans dark side? And again you need more background information on it, like how he got it ext. And who are the DM's, what do they do?

And further what has happened to the worlds, you have hardly given any information on what is happening to allow the members to save the world.

3 lines do not make a plot, that?s what I have been taught, you cant know much from 3 lines I'm afraid, so work on it a tad more, eh? ^_^

 

[Esupio]

from what I know logan is logmons DBZ fan char or an exsisting character in DBZ

 

[Logmon1]

Ok here is a bit more of the plot: Logan is a kid who made a machean that would allow him to go through dimainshoins. But in a huge explosin he fused with it and got the power to warp through dimansions. In one diminsion his yin and yang where seperated by a magic ston. But after some kids help ham refuse with his yang he retrund to the real world. But when he got there he saw the sky had become a blue swirwl whice was wht his diminsion portuls looked like. But unbeknown to him some kids had been given the same powers as him. They call themselvs DMs.

Form:

Name:
Age:
looks:
personality:
Bad or Good:
DM:
Where are you from:

Mine:

Name: Logan
Age: 13
looks: Is about 5 feet tall, very light skin, black cloths.
personality: I think you guys know what to expet.
Bod or Good: Good
DM: yes
Where are you from: Real world

 

[Chikara]

name: Nai(KeseNAI Tsumi-The Unersasible Sin)
age: 13
looks: black shirt, red vest, baggy black pants, blonde hair, REAL short(4 feet)
personality: happy, and can get really hyper, but can control it most of the time
bad or good: good
DM: yes
where are you from? the real world