RMT I'm putting together.

[Kurama]

Blissey@Leftovers
Ability:Natural Cure EV-252/Sp.Def 252/???
Rain Dance
Softboiled
Thunderwave
Icebeam

Pinkdeath: This is my first one. I have never made one before. It was either going to be this or Shuckle. It is going to be a special wall of course.(The rain dance is for Floatzel.)

Floatzel@Splash Plate or Focus Sash
Ability:Swift Swim EV - 252/Atk 252/Spd
Aqua Jet
Waterfall
Ice Fang
Brick Break/Return

Octavian: Physical sweeper,with partial coverage.

Magnezone@Zap Plate or ????
Ability:Magnet Pull EV- 252/Sp.Atk 128/Hp 128/Def
Tri Attack
Charge Beam
Thunderbolt/Thunder(Maybe with Rain Dance)
Magnet Rise

Chidori: Physical wall, and special attacker. Earthquake dodger

Kingdra@Splash Plate or Draco Plate
Ability:Swift Swim EV- 252/Sp.Atk 128/Def 128/Sp.Def
Draco Meteor or Dragon Pulse
Hydro Pump or Surf
Blizzard or Ice Beam
???????

Byakuya: Special Sweeper, with decent defense.

PBR Electivire (Maybe)@????
Ability:Volt Absorb EV 252/Sp.A 252/Sp
I don't recall the moveset Lol

Infernape@Focus Sash
Ability:Blaze EV - 252/Atk 128/Sp.Atk 128/spd
Close Combat
Earthquake
Thunderpunch
Overheat or Flare Blitz(Only if Pure physical sweeper.)

Neji: Mixed sweeper

Roserade@BlackSludge or Poison Barb or ?????
Ability:Poison Point EV- 252/Sp.Atk 252/Spd
Energy Ball
Sludge Bomb
Stun Spore
Substitute

Sexy: Special sweeper. He is already made so he is set in stone.

This my first RMT ever. I'm expecting good constructive criticism.

 

[Arcknight316]

Blissey@Leftovers
Ability:Natural Cure EV-252/Sp.Def 252/???
Rain Dance
Softboiled
Thunderwave
Icebeam

Pinkdeath: This is my first one. I have never made one before. It was either going to be this or Shuckle. It is going to be a special wall of course.(The rain dance is for Floatzel.)

Don't waste a slot for Rain Dance, Floatzel is fast enough. BTW, the standard EVs are: 252 DEF, 252 HP, 6 SDEF.

Floatzel@Splash Plate or Focus Sash
Ability:Swift Swim EV - 252/Atk 252/Spd
Aqua Jet
Waterfall
Ice Fang
Brick Break/Return

Octavian: Physical sweeper,with partial coverage.

Splash Plate = no. 2 Water moves = no. I'd run Crunch over the last slot.

Magnezone@Zap Plate or ????
Ability:Magnet Pull EV- 252/Sp.Atk 128/Hp 128/Def
Tri Attack
Charge Beam
Thunderbolt/Thunder(Maybe with Rain Dance)
Magnet Rise

Chidori: Physical wall, and special attacker. Earthquake dodger

It won't have time to Magnet Rise, it'll get EQed instantly. Also, it needs a healing move (Rest). Also, don't use Plates, run Leftovers.

Kingdra@Splash Plate or Draco Plate
Ability:Swift Swim EV- 252/Sp.Atk 128/Def 128/Sp.Def
Draco Meteor or Dragon Pulse
Hydro Pump or Surf
Blizzard or Ice Beam
???????

Byakuya: Special Sweeper, with decent defense.

No Plates, remember. Since Blissey's RD is gone, give this guy RD for the last Slot. Also, DP, S, IB, RD, respectively.

PBR Electivire (Maybe)@????
Ability:Volt Absorb EV 252/Sp.A 252/Sp
I don't recall the moveset Lol

What??? 252 SATK???

Infernape@Focus Sash
Ability:Blaze EV - 252/Atk 128/Sp.Atk 128/spd
Close Combat
Earthquake
Thunderpunch
Overheat or Flare Blitz(Only if Pure physical sweeper.)

Neji: Mixed sweeper

Uhhhhhhhh.....k?

Roserade@BlackSludge or Poison Barb or ?????
Ability:Poison Point EV- 252/Sp.Atk 252/Spd
Energy Ball
Sludge Bomb
Stun Spore
Substitute

Sexy: Special sweeper. He is already made so he is set in stone.

Set in stone? No it's not.
Leaf Storm
Energy Ball
Extrasensory
????

I think. I don't recall the set.

This my first RMT ever. I'm expecting good constructive criticism.

Corrections in Bold. Okey-dokey?

 

[Azonic]

The movesets are wayy off. This thread should help you a lot.

And also, NEVAR use items like Poison Barb, Plates, Miracle Seed. They suck as they provide only a minimum boost to an attack.

 

[Kurama]

Oh. Didn't even notice that I put special attack on Electivire.Sorry

 

[Shiraishi]

Meh..no1 did Ape..

Infernape@Life orb
Naive
48 Atk/236 Spd/226 Sp atk
-Flamethrower/Fire blast
-Close combat
-Hidden Power [Ice]
-Grass knot

Maniacal coverage. If you can't get HP Ice, stick some more Attack Evs and use Thunderpunch/Stone edge I guess.

 

[Kurama]

Okay dudes, give the man a break here. He's obviously new to PC, and I know this is quite the constructive criticism, but seriously. D:

No plates, and give some of the EVs to defenses if you're going to train up a Kingdra that'll last.

As for Electivire, run this moveset.

Cross Chop
ThunderPunch
Ice Punch
Earthquake

Mass coverage. Of course it can't cover everything, but running a physical vire, in my opinion is better than prob running special and putting thunderbolt on it.

Magnezone would work better if you put at least some decent speed EVs in it. But don't forget that massive Special attack it has. Add the stab thunderbolt, and probably mix thunderwave and Gyro ball in there, too.

Actually, don't put speed EVs, because I think Gyro ball works better this way.

As for Infernape, I would say stick with one fire move, and then put another move, like Mach punch like I did with mine, to surprise OU Weavile. The strategy quite works.

Actually, I don't think Magnezone and Electivire deserve to stay on the same team. If so, then that means Earthquake takes out half your team. Take out one of them. I suggest Magnezone.

And that's all fine and dandy if you run a status Roserade, then move in for the kill. Is this team mainly for double battles or single?

If I replace Magnezone who do you recommend I use as my physical wall? I was told one with an elite special attack works well.