RMT please

[GGFan]

This is the team I'm currently using in the Shoddy Online Liga, but it isn't very good. I was hoping to get it improved so that it can match up to the current metagame.

Bronzong@Leftovers
Nature: Relaxed
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/341 defense/90 special defense
~Earthquake
~Explosion
~Gyro Ball
~Hypnosis

Garchomp@Yache Berry
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 atk/252 spd
~Swords Dance
~Earthquake
~Outrage
~Fire Fang

Cresselia@Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EVs: 240 HP/138 defense/132 special defense
~Calm Mind
~HP Fighting
~Psychic
~Rest

Celebi@Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 HP/156 defense/16 special attack/86 special defense
~Grass Knot
~Leech Seed
~Reflect
~Recover

Tyranitar@Leftovers
Nature: Careful
EVs: 252 HP/252 special defense
~Curse
~Crunch
~Rest
~Sleep Talk

Gliscor@Leftovers
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP/252 defense
~Stealth Rock
~Earthquake
~Ice Fang
~Roost

I know Garchomp is banned in the American circuit, but it isn't entirely banned in the German circuit yet although many people want it to be. I think I'm the only one, AFAIK, who still uses it in an OU setting. I wouldn't mind if was removed.

Any help would be appreciated. What I'm looking for is suggestions for replacements too, because I know DP is a sweeper-oriented metagame and I don't know of all the choices.

 

[Dark Azelf]

There isnt anything wrong with this, however i do recommend a section of text after each poke explaining what it does (function wise for the team, such as role and what not etc.)


I would pretty much just max hp and def on celebi since it make a decent kingdra counter, also i'd use Thunderwave >> Reflect and Hidden power Ice >> Leech Seed so celebi can act as anti sweeping buffer for you. For stuff like DD Gyarados and Mence etc.


No answer to scizor is ehhh... Fire Fang >> Ice Fang on Gliscor.

Bronzong@Leftovers
Nature: Relaxed
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/341 defense/90 special defense

Typo ? =p.



Ill come back later if i spot anything..



This isnt THE GGFan is it, if you dont mind me asking ?

 

[Postman]

Outrage >>> Dragon Rush


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I would suggest getting rid of some of your -walls-, Cresselia. The only reliable sweepers you have are Tyranitar and Garchomp.

 

[GGFan]

There isnt anything wrong with this, however i do recommend a section of text after each poke explaining what it does (function wise for the team, such as role and what not etc.)

It's pretty self-explanatory, and I felt the team was lacking so I didn't type up anything.


"Typo ? =p."

No, my Bronzong is just that awesome.



"This isnt THE GGFan is it, if you dont mind me asking ?

"

It's me. Is this THE Dark_Azelf?

And I figured this team was too wallish. I should really use more sweepers and learn more movesets.